Sirf aahen hain aur kuch nahin .... !!!!!!

by Talat on May 31, 2006, 05:45:42 PM
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #30 on: June 20, 2006, 05:15:26 AM »
shukriyan bhai sahab..tabassum ji chahen huye hain....
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Bharat
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«Reply #31 on: June 26, 2006, 01:50:54 AM »
Quote from: "shayar_dildaar"
Yeh kya koi likhta nahin iss thread mein....Mera first consistent thread hain dard section mein....Main likhta rahunga issi thread main...

Mohabbat khushi hain, dard bhi hain;
Mohabbat ek guroor hain, ek futoor(riot) bhi hain;
Mohabbat ek tishnagi(desire) hain, ek rawaangi bhi hain;
Mohabbat toh dil hain, dil mein ahein bhi hain..[/color]


Hello SD,
Aap kahe aur hum na likhe aisa to ho nahin sakta !!!
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #32 on: June 26, 2006, 01:52:31 AM »
Kya baat hain bharat sahab...Gr8 stuff...Cha gaye aap toh...
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Talat
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«Reply #33 on: June 28, 2006, 04:37:34 PM »
Very nice Tabassum...!!

Thanks a lot Aryaan !!!
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Talat
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«Reply #34 on: June 28, 2006, 04:38:41 PM »
Quote from: "shayar_dildaar"
Yeh kya koi likhta nahin iss thread mein....Mera first consistent thread hain dard section mein....Main likhta rahunga issi thread main...

Mohabbat khushi hain, dard bhi hain;
Mohabbat ek guroor hain, ek futoor(riot) bhi hain;
Mohabbat ek tishnagi(desire) hain, ek rawaangi bhi hain;
Mohabbat toh dil hain, dil mein ahein bhi hain..[/color]


Thanks for writing here SD and very nice indeed !!
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Talat
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«Reply #35 on: June 28, 2006, 04:45:10 PM »
Quote from: "Bharat"



bohot khoob Bharat !!

Aankhon main us shakhs ki koi aks theherta nahin
Ye Ashk baha le jaate hain, yahan jo bhi aa basta hai

Khwaabon main bhi jo chupta ho use na pukaaro tum
Ruburu aaye kaise bhala ki wo shakhs reza reza hai !!
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Bharat
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«Reply #36 on: June 29, 2006, 02:03:39 AM »
Quote from: "shayar_dildaar"
Kya baat hain bharat sahab...Gr8 stuff...Cha gaye aap toh...


Hi SD,

Thanks for the appreciation !!!
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Bharat
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«Reply #37 on: June 29, 2006, 02:05:47 AM »
Bohot hi achcha likha hai Talat !!!
Very nice...!!!

Keep writing ....
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #38 on: June 29, 2006, 08:16:08 PM »
Yeh saza, yeh sitam, mohabbat karne par mila mujhe,
Yeh dard, yeh chubhan, dillagi karne par mila mujhe..

Phir bhi koi shikhwa ya ranjish dil mein nahin ab;
Jisse chaha tha, woh kho gayi na jane kab...

Kuch yaadein kuch pal de gayi woh mujhe;
Ilaahi, yeh kaisa Saza-e-tanhai, de gayi woh mujhe...

-Shayar_Dildaar
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Hope I am writing ok...I am really exploring the world of dard...I am not an expert on that...But I will keep writing here... Usual Smile
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Tosha
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«Reply #39 on: June 29, 2006, 10:04:38 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"

Ghar se nikle aankhon me khwaab saja kar
Dhadakte dil me ummeedon ke diye jala kar

Bujh gaya hai dil, reza ho gaye wo khwaab
Jalte nahin diye ab in tanhaaiyon me aa kar

Kiya tha aitemaad jinpar, maana jinhe apna
Badle se the andaaz, mile wo ghair ban kar

Mohabbatain thukra kar chale aaye jinke liye
Bhoole baithe hain wo hume pardes bula kar

Yunhi seekh le ab jeena ae mere nadaan dil
Chupa le ashk labon pe muskurahat laa kar !!


wah wha :?
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #40 on: June 30, 2006, 06:44:03 AM »
Quote from: "shayar_dildaar"
shukriyan bhai sahab..tabassum ji chahen huye hain....



thanx sd ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aap ne hamara likha padha  aur pasand kiya Usual Smile
thanx a lot talat

arz kiya hai ki........
            jo meri muthi me band hai
            vo bas ik raakh hi to hai
            jale sapne uthane pahunchi thi
            haathon me chhale hain
            bujhi vo aag sapno ki
            hai ab mere dil me jalti
            tapish usaki hai sari shayri
            yaaden pighaltin hain
            vo rah rah kar kabhi kagaz pe
            aise bah bhi jaatin hain
            kisi ko achchi lagti hain
            kisi ka dil jalati hain
            ye sochon ka dhuna hai
            qaid hai jo zahan me mere
            meri bas saans ghutati hai
            tabhi ye qalam bhi chalti hai
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #41 on: June 30, 2006, 06:47:07 AM »
Quote from: "shayar_dildaar"
Yeh kya koi likhta nahin iss thread mein....Mera first consistent thread hain dard section mein....Main likhta rahunga issi thread main...

Mohabbat khushi hain, dard bhi hain;
Mohabbat ek guroor hain, ek futoor(riot) bhi hain;
Mohabbat ek tishnagi(desire) hain, ek rawaangi bhi hain;
Mohabbat toh dil hain, dil mein ahein bhi hain..[/color]


bahut  khoob likhte hain aap sd ji
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Talat
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«Reply #42 on: June 30, 2006, 02:10:10 PM »
Thanks a lot Bharat and Tosha...!!

SD, you are writing good ones !! Nice one Tabassum !!!
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #43 on: June 30, 2006, 02:11:22 PM »
thanx talat
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #44 on: July 01, 2006, 12:28:07 AM »
Shukriyan Tabassumji..
Quote from: "tabassum shakeel"
Quote from: "shayar_dildaar"
Yeh kya koi likhta nahin iss thread mein....Mera first consistent thread hain dard section mein....Main likhta rahunga issi thread main...

Mohabbat khushi hain, dard bhi hain;
Mohabbat ek guroor hain, ek futoor(riot) bhi hain;
Mohabbat ek tishnagi(desire) hain, ek rawaangi bhi hain;
Mohabbat toh dil hain, dil mein ahein bhi hain..[/color]


bahut  khoob likhte hain aap sd ji
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