Sitam ho rahaa hai....

by sidra04 on October 18, 2013, 01:50:47 PM
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Mohabbat me ye kyaa sitam ho rahaa hai,
ke unkaa hamee pe karam ho rahaa hai.

Khudaa se bahot maaNg kar maine dekhaa,
Duaa me asar bhi to kam ho rahaa hai.

wo jab saamne thaa duaaeN thiN zaaya,
nahi hai to ab kyuN bharam ho rahaa hai.

Na lo imtehaaN tum meri qurbatoN ka,
meraa hauslaa ab khatam ho rahaa hai.

yaqeen tumko Sidra pe aaya hai us din,
ke jab mujhko Chaahat pe Gham ho raha hai.


Sidra..


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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2013, 01:59:28 PM »
bahot sunder rachna hai...
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2013, 02:34:41 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2013, 03:35:16 PM »
bahot sunder rachna hai...
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bahot bahot shukriyaa tumhara neha... khush raho

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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2013, 03:55:43 PM »
coollll ,..bohat khoob sidra great going jee Usual Smile
bohat bohat c daad,......
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2013, 04:08:09 PM »
wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2013, 05:25:17 PM »
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saini saahab aadaab... bahot bahot shukrguzaar hoon aapki jo aapne ise tareef ke kaabil samjhaa... aur aapka behad shukriyaa rahnumaai farmaane ke liye.. ki hu galti maine dekh li aur durust kar diyaa gaya hai.... aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiyega aur hauslaa badhaate rahiyega... shukriyaa

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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2013, 05:36:26 PM »
coollll ,..bohat khoob sidra great going jee Usual Smile
bohat bohat c daad,......

salaam Laibu.... kaisi ho dear.

bahot accha laga tumhe yahan dekhkar aur jaankar ke tumhe ye kalaam pasand aya... thankss yaar

aati rahna.. aur apna khayaal rakhnaa... khush raho

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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2013, 06:00:01 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2013, 06:12:56 PM »
wha wha bhut khub

behad shukriya aapka rajan ji.... tashreef laate rahiyegaa.. shukriyaa

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«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2013, 09:08:03 PM »
Mohabbat me ye kyaa sitam ho rahaa hai,
ke unkaa hamee pe karam ho rahaa hai.

Khudaa se bahot maaNg kar maine dekhaa,
Duaa me asar bhi to kam ho rahaa hai.

wo jab saamne thaa duaaeN thiN zaaya,
nahi hai to ab kyuN bharam ho rahaa hai.

Na lo imtehaaN tum meri qurbatoN ka,
meraa hauslaa ab khatam ho rahaa hai.

yaqeen tumko Sidra pe aaya hai us din,
ke jab mujhko Chaahat pe Gham ho raha hai.


Sidra..


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Waaah kya baat hai bahut umda kalaam....mubaark ho...Raqeeb
 
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«Reply #11 on: October 18, 2013, 10:15:11 PM »
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Waah waah waah sidra ji... kya kehne.. bahut hi pyaari peshkash.. is khoob kalaam par hazaron hazaron daad.. yeh ashaar behad pasand aaye..

wo jab saamne thaa duaaeN thiN zaaya,
nahi hai to ab kyuN bharam ho rahaa hai.

Na lo imtehaaN tum meri qurbatoN ka,
meraa hauslaa ab khatam ho rahaa hai.
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«Reply #12 on: October 18, 2013, 10:19:32 PM »
salaam Laibu.... kaisi ho dear.

bahot accha laga tumhe yahan dekhkar aur jaankar ke tumhe ye kalaam pasand aya... thankss yaar

aati rahna.. aur apna khayaal rakhnaa... khush raho

sidra
shuqria sidra ,..per abhee kuch din baa.d mulaaqaa.t ho gee ,
inshallah ,...yunhee achaa achaa likhtee rehnaa sis,
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«Reply #13 on: October 18, 2013, 10:27:09 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Sidra ji, kyaa likhaa hai aapne, bahut hi khoob....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: October 18, 2013, 11:01:01 PM »
Wwwaaaahhhhh ...... Brahe hi nazaakat se bhara hua qalaam kaha Sidra ji .... Dheron dheron daad aap ko !
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