***socha khud se ek iradaa kar loon***

by kaushikbhawna008 on November 07, 2008, 10:25:27 AM
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socha khud se ek iradaa kar loon
jo pura kar sakoo khud se ek wadaa kar loon
na roungi ab aur na ashk bhi koi bahaungi
is tarah khushi sang koi naata kar loon

bhula doon ab se wo yaadein purani
jinhein yaad kar aankh mei sirf aata hai paani
likhe hue un khato ko bhi mein jalaa doon
socha khud ko ek aakhiri mein sazaa doon

ho jaauon khamosh odh kar fir kafan
na uthuu fir kisi ki bhi aawaaz se mein
hai fir bhi aakhiri aarzoo ek dil mein
k maiyat uthe aur dekh le fir gaur se

k keh doon unhe wo alfaaz saare
k reh gaye hain kuch saaz mere adhure
choom loon unhe fir na rahoon kuch bhi mein
k unke haathon mei aakhiri fir saans loon mein

socha khud se ........
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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2008, 11:15:47 AM »
 Applause Applause
Bohat khoob bhawna..
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2008, 11:38:46 AM »
Ishq mein jaan jaaye toh jaaye, umeed nahin jaani chahiye.. Usual Smile

Very Very Beautiful Work Bhawna..
Very Touching, Very Emotional and Simply Superb... Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2008, 12:53:04 PM »
Bahoot Badiya Bhawna,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2008, 12:56:52 PM »
Socha, Ke Khud Se Ek Iraada Kar Loon,.
Use Bhool Jaane Ka, Dil Se Waada Kar Loon,.

Kyun Yaad Karoon Use Main, Jisne Mujhe Hi Bhulaa Diya,.
Duniya Ki Izzat Ki Khateer, Meri Mohabbat Ko Thukraa Diya,.

Chaha Tha Maine Use Zindagi Se Bardke,.
Aur Meri Zindagi Ne Hi Mujhe "Azeem" Mitaa Diya,.

________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2008, 02:40:35 PM »
janasheen... wonderful!
bhawna... simply amazing! aapne lufz aarzoo istimal kiya mujhe bahot achha laga... aarzu is my other name...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2008, 03:29:51 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on November 07, 2008, 10:25:27 AM
socha khud se ek iradaa kar loon
jo pura kar sakoo khud se ek wadaa kar loon
na roungi ab aur na ashk bhi koi bahaungi
is tarah khushi sang koi naata kar loon

bhula doon ab se wo yaadein purani
jinhein yaad kar aankh mei sirf aata hai paani
likhe hue un khato ko bhi mein jalaa doon
socha khud ko ek aakhiri mein sazaa doon

ho jaauon khamosh odh kar fir kafan
na uthuu fir kisi ki bhi aawaaz se mein
hai fir bhi aakhiri aarzoo ek dil mein
k maiyat uthe aur dekh le fir gaur se

k keh doon unhe wo alfaaz saare
k reh gaye hain kuch saaz mere adhure
choom loon unhe fir na rahoon kuch bhi mein
k unke haathon mei aakhiri fir saans loon mein

socha khud se ........

teri soch tere amal se pyaari hain
tera tasav_vur teri haqiqat pe bhari hain
kehne ko to keh diye tune chend ashar bhavna
ab tak sare shehar ki aakho me ashk jari hain

beautiful work bhavna & equally beautiful reply azeem
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«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2008, 07:12:10 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on November 07, 2008, 10:25:27 AM
socha khud se ek iradaa kar loon
jo pura kar sakoo khud se ek wadaa kar loon
na roungi ab aur na ashk bhi koi bahaungi
is tarah khushi sang koi naata kar loon

bhula doon ab se wo yaadein purani
jinhein yaad kar aankh mei sirf aata hai paani
likhe hue un khato ko bhi mein jalaa doon
socha khud ko ek aakhiri mein sazaa doon

ho jaauon khamosh odh kar fir kafan
na uthuu fir kisi ki bhi aawaaz se mein
hai fir bhi aakhiri aarzoo ek dil mein
k maiyat uthe aur dekh le fir gaur se

k keh doon unhe wo alfaaz saare
k reh gaye hain kuch saaz mere adhure
choom loon unhe fir na rahoon kuch bhi mein
k unke haathon mei aakhiri fir saans loon mein

socha khud se ........


Bohot Khoob Bhawna.....Ishq main haar ke na-ummeedi main doobe jazbaat ko bohot achchi tarah lafzon main dhaala hai Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2008, 07:13:15 PM »
Azeem, Sajid Ji....aap ne bhi achcha likha hai  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2008, 10:22:29 AM »
Shukriya Talat Ji,.
And Sidra Ji,.
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«Reply #10 on: November 10, 2008, 05:38:51 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on November 07, 2008, 11:15:47 AM
Applause Applause
Bohat khoob bhawna..

shukriya honey ji
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«Reply #11 on: November 10, 2008, 05:42:26 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on November 07, 2008, 11:38:46 AM
Ishq mein jaan jaaye toh jaaye, umeed nahin jaani chahiye.. Usual Smile

Very Very Beautiful Work Bhawna..
Very Touching, Very Emotional and Simply Superb... Applause


hamari feeling ki kadar karne aur use samajhne k liye bohut bohut shukriya mahiya ji
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«Reply #12 on: November 10, 2008, 05:43:49 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 07, 2008, 12:56:52 PM
Socha, Ke Khud Se Ek Iraada Kar Loon,.
Use Bhool Jaane Ka, Dil Se Waada Kar Loon,.

Kyun Yaad Karoon Use Main, Jisne Mujhe Hi Bhulaa Diya,.
Duniya Ki Izzat Ki Khateer, Meri Mohabbat Ko Thukraa Diya,.

Chaha Tha Maine Use Zindagi Se Bardke,.
Aur Meri Zindagi Ne Hi Mujhe "Azeem" Mitaa Diya,.

________________________-Jaanasheen-







shukriya janasheen ji
bohut acha likha hai aapne bhi Applause
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«Reply #13 on: November 10, 2008, 05:46:12 AM »
Quote from: anjaan dharkan on November 07, 2008, 02:40:35 PM
janasheen... wonderful!
bhawna... simply amazing! aapne lufz aarzoo istimal kiya mujhe bahot achha laga... aarzu is my other name...!!!
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 07, 2008, 03:29:51 PM
teri soch tere amal se pyaari hain
tera tasav_vur teri haqiqat pe bhari hain
kehne ko to keh diye tune chend ashar bhavna
ab tak sare shehar ki aakho me ashk jari hain

beautiful work bhavna & equally beautiful reply azeem



ji shukriya sajid ji
shukriya anjaan dharkan ji
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«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2008, 05:47:56 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on November 07, 2008, 07:12:10 PM
Bohot Khoob Bhawna.....Ishq main haar ke na-ummeedi main doobe jazbaat ko bohot achchi tarah lafzon main dhaala hai Applause Applause

ji shukriya celmira ji
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