~Sone na Diya~

by pankshivam on December 07, 2008, 10:41:06 AM
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Kaat di chupchap gam-e-raat,
  Har ghunt me roka, khudko rone na diya...
Tu chala gaya apni manzil ki taraf bhulkar mujhe,
  Par tere aane ki jidd ne aankho ko sone na diya...

~pank~
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2008, 01:07:21 PM »
Quote from: pankshivam on December 07, 2008, 10:41:06 AM
Kaat di chupchap gam-e-raat,
  Har ghunt me roka, khudko rone na diya...
Tu chala gaya apni manzil ki taraf bhulkar mujhe,
  Par tere aane ki jidd ne aankho ko sone na diya...

~pank~
Bohat Achche Pank Ji, Phir Se,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2008, 01:11:10 PM »
Ek Arsa Hua, In Aakhon Ne Need Nahi Dekhi,.
Aa Kahin Se Bhi Aa, Mujhe Sulaa Jaa,.

Palkein Sookh Gayi Teri Raahein Dekhte Dekhte,.
Aa Meri "Jaan" Mujhe Aake Rulaa Jaa,.

Ek Muddat Se Chalta Raha, Umeedon Ka Charaag,.
Tu Nahi Aayega Samajhaata Main,
Ek Baar Tu Hi Aakar Ise Bujhaa Jaa,.

________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #3 on: December 07, 2008, 05:45:40 PM »
Good one Shivam Ji
Aap ka to jawaab nahi Jaanasheen Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 07, 2008, 06:25:01 PM »
Shuriya Jaanasheen Sahab!!!
Shukriya Rajesh ji!!!

Good One Jaanasheen Sahab
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2008, 07:53:41 PM »
 
Pank ji bohat hi kamaal ka likha hai aapne  Applause Applause

Bhai bohat khoob likha hai aapne... Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2008, 07:48:54 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 07, 2008, 05:45:40 PM
Good one Shivam Ji
Aap ka to jawaab nahi Jaanasheen Ji
Quote from: pankshivam on December 07, 2008, 06:25:01 PM
Shuriya Jaanasheen Sahab!!!
Shukriya Rajesh ji!!!

Good One Jaanasheen Sahab
Bahoot Khoob

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Pank ji bohat hi kamaal ka likha hai aapne  Applause Applause

Bhai bohat khoob likha hai aapne... Applause Applause

Shukriya Rajesh Bhaiya,.
 Pank Ji,.

Jaya Didi,.
Aap Bhi Kuch Likhte To Achcha Lagta,.
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2008, 07:51:09 AM »
Aayi Hai Raat Phir Se, Mere Ghar Me Bhi,.
Dusron Ke Ghar, Ye Neend, Karaar Lekar Jaati Hai,.

Mere Ghar To Aksar, Kisi Ka Intezar Dekar Jaati Hai,.
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2009, 08:13:45 PM »
Quote from: pankshivam on December 07, 2008, 10:41:06 AM
Kaat di chupchap gam-e-raat,
  Har ghunt me roka, khudko rone na diya...
Tu chala gaya apni manzil ki taraf bhulkar mujhe,
  Par tere aane ki jidd ne aankho ko sone na diya...

~pank~
bahoot khoob Pank ji!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2009, 08:44:49 PM »
Quote from: pankshivam on December 07, 2008, 10:41:06 AM
Kaat di chupchap gam-e-raat,
  Har ghunt me roka, khudko rone na diya...
Tu chala gaya apni manzil ki taraf bhulkar mujhe,
  Par tere aane ki jidd ne aankho ko sone na diya...

~pank~
wah kya baat hai...........
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2009, 02:59:26 AM »
Bahut khoob Pank..
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«Reply #11 on: May 15, 2009, 03:01:57 AM »
Quote from: Azeem on December 07, 2008, 01:11:10 PM
Ek Arsa Hua, In Aakhon Ne Need Nahi Dekhi,.
Aa Kahin Se Bhi Aa, Mujhe Sulaa Jaa,.

Palkein Sookh Gayi Teri Raahein Dekhte Dekhte,.
Aa Meri "Jaan" Mujhe Aake Rulaa Jaa,.

Ek Muddat Se Chalta Raha, Umeedon Ka Charaag,.
Tu Nahi Aayega Samajhaata Main,
Ek Baar Tu Hi Aakar Ise Bujhaa Jaa,.

________________________-Jaanasheen-




waah azeem bhai...
kya baat hai.............
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«Reply #12 on: May 15, 2009, 03:04:26 AM »
Pankshivam ji bahut khoob... kea baat hai...



Quote from: pankshivam on December 07, 2008, 10:41:06 AM
Kaat di chupchap gam-e-raat,
  Har ghunt me roka, khudko rone na diya...
Tu chala gaya apni manzil ki taraf bhulkar mujhe,
  Par tere aane ki jidd ne aankho ko sone na diya...

~pank~
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2009, 03:05:08 AM »
Azeem bahi bahut khoob...

Quote from: Azeem on December 07, 2008, 01:11:10 PM
Ek Arsa Hua, In Aakhon Ne Need Nahi Dekhi,.
Aa Kahin Se Bhi Aa, Mujhe Sulaa Jaa,.

Palkein Sookh Gayi Teri Raahein Dekhte Dekhte,.
Aa Meri "Jaan" Mujhe Aake Rulaa Jaa,.

Ek Muddat Se Chalta Raha, Umeedon Ka Charaag,.
Tu Nahi Aayega Samajhaata Main,
Ek Baar Tu Hi Aakar Ise Bujhaa Jaa,.

________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #14 on: May 15, 2009, 03:06:12 AM »
Azeem bahi bahut khoob..

Quote from: Azeem on December 08, 2008, 07:51:09 AM
Aayi Hai Raat Phir Se, Mere Ghar Me Bhi,.
Dusron Ke Ghar, Ye Neend, Karaar Lekar Jaati Hai,.

Mere Ghar To Aksar, Kisi Ka Intezar Dekar Jaati Hai,.
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