sUraj ki garmi se bhii baDii.. hoti hai peT ki garmi.....!

by DhavalRami on November 03, 2009, 07:37:08 PM
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Mere pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab..!


Garmi ke mausam meiN.sabhee log garmi se pareShaan hote hai.n.. maiN uN dinoN news deKh rahaa thaa TV par garmi ke baare meN... tou maiNe apnii kalam  uThaa'ii aur garmi se pareShaan uN logoN ke ehsaasoN ko zubaaN dene kii ik chhoTii si koShiSh kar dii..jo apne peT ke liYe sUraj kii ees garmii ko bhee bhulaa dete haiN.. merii sabhee paRhne waaloN se guzaariSh hay kii we ees rachanaa ko samjHne kii koShiSh kareN.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh soch pasaNd aaYeNgee..!

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मैने देखा है.. मैने जाना है
ईस सच्चाई को मैने माना है

के सूरज की गर्मी से भी बड़ी होती है पेट की गर्मी

देखे है मैने तेज़ धूप में
वो थके लड़खड़ाते हुए कदम
कंधों पर अपने सामान को उठाये
छाव की खुदा से करते वो रहम

देखी है मैने एक बच्चे की आंखें
जो कड़ी धूप में बुट पालिश करता है
आइस क्रीम खाते हुए उन बच्चों को
अपनी लाचार ऩज़रों से वो देखता है

देखा है मैने कुछ लोगों को ट्राफ़िक सिग्नल पर
रुकती हुई गाड़ियों को साफ़ करते हुए
आग की लपटों जैसी सूरज की ईस गर्मी में
मेहनत में अपना पसीना बहाते हुए

इन मुश्किलों से भी गुज़र कर लोग
तेज़ धूप में भी मुश्कुराते हैं
सूरज की गर्मी से भी बड़ी होती हे पेट की गर्मी
यह इक रोटी की क़ीमत हमे समझाते हैं
हां !! इक रोटी की क़ीमत हमे समझाते हैं..!!


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maiNe deKhaa haii.. maiNe jaanaa haii
ees sachchhaa'ii ko maiNe maanaa haii

ke sUraj ki garmi se bhee baDii
hotii hay peT ki garmii

deKhe haiN maiNe tez Dhoop meiN
wo thake laDKhaDaate huye kadam
kaNdhoN par apne saamaan ko uThaayeN
chhaaNv ki Khudaa se karte wo reham

deKhi maiNe ek bachche ki aaNkheN
jo kaDii Dhoop meiN buT paaliSh kartaa hai
ice-cream Khaate huye uN bachchoN ko
apnii laachaar narzoN se wo deKhtaa hai


deKhaa hai maiNe kuch logoN ko,Traaffic signal par
rukti hu’ii gaaDiYoN ko saaf karte huye
aag ki lapToN jaisii sUraj kii ees gamri meiN
mehnat meiN apnaa pasinaa bahaate huye


iN muShkiloN se guzar kar bhee log
tez Dhoop meN bhee muSkuraate haiN
sUraj ki garmi se bhii baDii hoti hai peT kii garmii
yeh ik roTii kii qeemat hame samjhaate haiN

haaN ik roTii ki qeemat hame samjhaate haiN..!!


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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2009, 08:10:26 PM »
Bahut bahut khoob Dhaval ji,doosro ke khayal karne wala insaan bahut mahaan hote hai.aapne unke lachaari ko mahesus kiya aur hum tak pahunchaya. :icon_salut:god bless you.marvelous creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2009, 04:39:45 AM »
Bahut bahut Khooob Dhaval Ji..

Bahut Hi Nek Soch Aur uss Soch Ko lafzo Mein Dhaala Aapne..

bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2009, 06:35:54 AM »
Bahut hi sundar peshkash ki hai aapne Doosaro ke khayalo ko apne lafjo me dhal diya bahut hi accha laga padhkar nice and excellent creation Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2009, 07:16:35 AM »
kya baat hai    dhaval ji.......

TEZ  DHOOP MEIN
ROZ NIKAL TA HUN KAMAANE
PET KI BHOOK MEH
EH MAALIK KABHI MERE HOUNSLEY DAGMAGATE MAT DENA
ARDHI ROTI HI SAHI, IMAANDARI SE MUJHE KAMAANE KO DENA.


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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2009, 07:47:17 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Cara ji ,and Dhaval ji dil ko chu gayi aap dono ke sachai.
keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2009, 02:02:03 PM »
kya baat hai    dhaval ji.......

TEZ  DHOOP MEIN
ROZ NIKAL TA HUN KAMAANE
PET KI BHOOK MEH
EH MAALIK KABHI MERE HOUNSLEY DAGMAGATE MAT DENA
ARDHI ROTI HI SAHI, IMAANDARI SE MUJHE KAMAANE KO DENA.




Caraa jee:

namaste!

haMeShaa ki tarah ees baar bhee aapne merii koShiSh ko samjh ke apne ehsaas joReN.. maiN be-Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN aapka.. aise hi saath dete rahiye..

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: November 06, 2009, 05:06:55 AM »
Wah Dhaval ji...

SubanAllah Kya khoob Likha hai

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: November 06, 2009, 02:39:17 PM »
Dhaval Ji, aapne sachchi ko lafzon main bohot khoobsurti se dhala hai. Bohot Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2009, 05:55:49 AM »
Succhaai se Bhara Har Lafz Likha Hai Dhaval Bhai... Bahut Hi Umda Khayaalaaton Ko Yahan Pesh Kiya Hai aapne.. !!!

Lajawab Peshkash.. Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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