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sarfira
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chale the kiske dum par
kahkar aaj waqt hansne laga hai hum par---
kal tak hoti thi barish phooloN ki
taaz kaanto ka aaj sajne laga hai hum par--
bada laadla tha apni !MAAI! ka RAAZ
ilzaam sarfire ka aaj lagne laga hai hum par--
koi sikwa nahi koi shikayat nahi
Ghaao bhi jaise aaj ehsaan jatane laga hai hum par--
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2012, 05:57:15 AM » |
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Kuch mayush se lg rhe hain aap 'SARFIRA JI'
...ACCHA LIKHA HAI.
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2012, 06:18:40 AM » |
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sarfira ji aapkee is chhotee see peshkash par english men daad "I am speechless " bravo
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2012, 06:32:33 AM » |
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Kaun kahta hai ki aap sarfire hain.
aap to lafzoN ke jaadugar bade hain.
jo n samjhe aapke jazbaat shaayad.
Log vo meree nazar men sarfire hain. keep it up
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2012, 08:38:21 AM » |
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"Chale The Kiske Dam Par
Kehkar Aaj Waqt Hasne Laga Hum Par"....
Waaah S.f Ji...
Khoobsurat Aur Gehre Khayalaat..
Bahut Bahut Khoob 
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2012, 08:51:14 AM » |
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sarfira ji... bahut bahut khoob... har ek lafz pe lakho daad...  |
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2012, 08:40:28 AM » |
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2012, 03:48:09 AM » |
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wah ji wah. kya baat hai. aapki lafz toh dil ko choote hain. nicely written.
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2012, 09:05:37 AM » |
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Kuch mayush se lg rhe hain aap 'SARFIRA JI'
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2012, 09:08:07 AM » |
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sarfira ji aapkee is chhotee see peshkash par english men daad "I am speechless " bravo
humari sarfiriyat ko iss qadar sarahne ke lie behad sukriya Saini sahab |
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2012, 06:25:29 AM » |
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Kaun kahta hai ki aap sarfire hain.
aap to lafzoN ke jaadugar bade hain.
jo n samjhe aapke jazbaat shaayad.
Log vo meree nazar men sarfire hain. keep it up
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