!!!..Tabahi ka manzar..!!!

by nashwani on August 18, 2013, 10:57:14 PM
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Jisne sanwara kisi aur ka ghar,,
Dikha usi ko tabahi ka manzar..

Apni basti basana bhool gaya jo,,
Paya kya, ansuo.N ka samandar..

Saahil ban ke jiska kiya intezar,,
Na ayi kabhi kinare tak wo lehar..

Uddna sikha ke uss parinde ko,,
Wo khud hi kaat gaya phir par..

Katra katra maara jisne hamko,,
Diya tha usne aisa meetha zehar..

Jeeta tha sabke samne jee bhar ke,,
Marta rehta tha vo andar hi andar..

Dil ne kyu halchal chhod dee thi,,
Shayad khanzar-e-ishq ka tha asar..

Rabba ye tune kya tohfa hai diya,,
Ishq se rang kar, barsa diya kehar..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2013, 11:40:23 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2013, 11:56:34 PM »
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just fantastic........great job.........
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«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2013, 12:12:32 AM »
Personally I fill U r versatile writer....bhut kuch soch lete ho....just say Keep Writing!!!its really Nice.
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«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2013, 06:41:35 AM »
wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2013, 12:22:43 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2013, 01:13:59 PM »
Jeeta tha sabke samne jee bhar ke,,
Marta rehta tha vo andar hi andar..

WAAH WAAH NASHWANI JI BOHUT KHOOB ...
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«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2013, 01:14:57 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut hi umda khayal aur umda peshkash Ashwani... khaas kar yeh ashaar behad lajawab rahe..

Uddna sikha ke uss parinde ko,,
Wo khud hi kaat gaya phir par..

Katra katra maara jisne hamko,,
Diya tha usne aisa meetha zehar..

Jeeta tha sabke samne jee bhar ke,,
Marta rehta tha vo andar hi andar..

Dil ne kyu halchal chhod dee thi,,
Shayad khanzar-e-ishq ka tha asar.

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Is khoobsurat kalam par hazaron hazaron  daad daad daaaaaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #9 on: August 19, 2013, 03:44:41 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #10 on: August 19, 2013, 04:22:32 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: August 19, 2013, 04:27:37 PM »
bahoooot khoooob, dheron daaaad, waaah hi waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #12 on: August 19, 2013, 05:24:41 PM »
waah waah ashwani ji.. bahut umda peshkash.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #13 on: August 19, 2013, 11:21:40 PM »
Jisne sanwara kisi aur ka ghar,,
Dikha usi ko tabahi ka manzar..

Apni basti basana bhool gaya jo,,
Paya kya, ansuo.N ka samandar..

Saahil ban ke jiska kiya intezar,,
Na ayi kabhi kinare tak wo lehar..

Bahut khoob Nashwani jee..

Aur is sher ke kya kahne..
Jeeta tha sabke samne jee bhar ke,,
Marta rehta tha vo andar hi andar..
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«Reply #14 on: August 20, 2013, 12:20:33 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on August 18, 2013, 11:40:23 PM
just speechless....ek rau tumhare liye nahi is umda creation ke liye... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Areeeee bahut bahut bahut shukriya karan bhai..happy9
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