Tadpaane lagi hai bohot dil ke yeh lagi...!!

by Talat on January 02, 2007, 12:07:30 AM
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Talat
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Palkon par hai ek baar phir nami
Ek nayi chot phir se dil ko hai lagi

Udasiyon ke silsile rukte nahin kabhi
Aate aate paas, rooth jaati hai khushi

Tere har lamhe pe chahun apna naam
Nakaam hasratain hain deewane dil ki

Ashkon main bheegti rahi shab tamam
Daaman samet kar ab raat bhi chali

Khatm kar do silsile roothne manane ke
Tadpaane lagi hai bohot dil ke yeh lagi
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Bharat
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«Reply #1 on: January 02, 2007, 02:18:08 AM »
Talat,

Bohot hi achcha likha hai !!!
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paani
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«Reply #2 on: January 02, 2007, 04:13:52 AM »
Quote
Ashkon main bheegti rahi shab tamam
Daaman samet kar ab raat bhi chali



Bhaut Accha " Raat bhi chali Daaman samet kar ab"
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vikas2210
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«Reply #3 on: January 02, 2007, 06:01:08 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"

Palkon par hai ek baar phir nami
Ek nayi chot phir se dil ko hai lagi

Udasiyon ke silsile rukte nahin kabhi
Aate aate paas, rooth jaati hai khushi

Tere har lamhe pe chahun apna naam
Nakaam hasratain hain deewane dil ki

Ashkon main bheegti rahi shab tamam
Daaman samet kar ab raat bhi chali

Khatm kar do silsile roothne manane ke
Tadpaane lagi hai bohot dil ke yeh lagi



Talat Bahut khoobsurti se dil ki tadap ko kalam se utara hai......
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ALONE BAD
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«Reply #4 on: January 02, 2007, 06:15:42 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"

Palkon par hai ek baar phir nami
Ek nayi chot phir se dil ko hai lagi

Udasiyon ke silsile rukte nahin kabhi
Aate aate paas, rooth jaati hai khushi

Tere har lamhe pe chahun apna naam
Nakaam hasratain hain deewane dil ki

Ashkon main bheegti rahi shab tamam
Daaman samet kar ab raat bhi chali

Khatm kar do silsile roothne manane ke
Tadpaane lagi hai bohot dil ke yeh lagi




Bahoot Khoob Talat Ji.........!!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: January 02, 2007, 11:13:14 AM »
Bohot bohot shukriya hausla afzaai ka Bharat, Paani, Vikas and Alone Bad...!!! Usual Smile
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Meena is back
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2007, 11:05:52 AM »
wah talat kuddiye very nice... tumara 2nd sher behet pasand aya mujhe!!!

 :D
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2007, 05:39:57 PM »
Bohot shukriya Meena....!! :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2007, 06:33:14 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"

Palkon par hai ek baar phir nami
Ek nayi chot phir se dil ko hai lagi

Udasiyon ke silsile rukte nahin kabhi
Aate aate paas, rooth jaati hai khushi

Tere har lamhe pe chahun apna naam
Nakaam hasratain hain deewane dil ki

Ashkon main bheegti rahi shab tamam
Daaman samet kar ab raat bhi chali

Khatm kar do silsile roothne manane ke
Tadpaane lagi hai bohot dil ke yeh lagi


bahot  khob Talat.........   so  touching  Poem........
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2007, 06:42:05 PM »
Bohat khoob Talat.3rd n last sher are really awesome...!!!

"Tadpaane lagi hai mujhe ab bohat ye dil ki lagi,
      kyon itni samajh k baawajood itni nasamjhiyan?,
      ek dooje se pyaar hai itna ham dono ko hi.....,
      phir aakhir kya hai aisa,jo laa deta hai faasla."
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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: January 11, 2007, 06:52:17 PM »
Bahut achhe talat ji
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Aryaan
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«Reply #11 on: January 27, 2007, 04:04:49 AM »
Very Nice Talat...
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: February 12, 2007, 04:41:21 PM »
Wah kaya baat hai Talat

Dil mai dard ab uthane laga
Tu ek bewafa jab se lagne laga

Bahoot samjhaya dil ne deemag ko
Dil apna hi ab jhootha sa lagne laga

Fareb tu, aor yah mera tadpata dil
Tujko skoon mujko dard dene laga

Dil mai dard ab uthane laga
Tu ek bewafa jab se lagne laga
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: February 12, 2007, 04:43:41 PM »
Waheed, Nidhi, Angel, Aryaan (where are you :?), and Pooja...Thank You so much !! Usual Smile

Very Nice Nidhi ...and Pooja...bohot achcha likha hai aapne !
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«Reply #14 on: February 17, 2007, 11:34:45 AM »
sad5  sad5  sad5  sad5  sad5  sad5 Wahhhhhhh!!!!! Bohat Khoob tallu,nidhu,poojaJi very touching!
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