Tadpaane lagi hai bohot dil ke yeh lagi...!!

by Talat on January 02, 2007, 12:07:30 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 18, 2007, 10:41:04 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Bohat khoob Talat.3rd n last sher are really awesome...!!!

"Tadpaane lagi hai mujhe ab bohat ye dil ki lagi,
      kyon itni samajh k baawajood itni nasamjhiyan?,
      ek dooje se pyaar hai itna ham dono ko hi.....,
      phir aakhir kya hai aisa,jo laa deta hai faasla."


bahot  khoob  Nidhi.....  Pooja sis......

Yeh Sach hai ki  sari  umar  tujhse  door  raha
yeh bhi hai magar such ki tujhe dil se kbhi juda na kiya....
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Talat
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«Reply #16 on: February 18, 2007, 11:25:10 AM »
Quote from: "pyarikudi1983"
sad5  sad5  sad5  sad5  sad5  sad5 Wahhhhhhh!!!!! Bohat Khoob tallu,nidhu,poojaJi very touching!


Thank You Sweetie :D
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: February 18, 2007, 11:25:50 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Yeh Sach hai ki  sari  umar  tujhse  door  raha
yeh bhi hai magar such ki tujhe dil se kbhi juda na kiya....


Very nice Waheed !
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #18 on: February 18, 2007, 12:52:07 PM »
Shukriya  Talat :lol:
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Talat
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«Reply #19 on: August 28, 2007, 06:42:56 PM »
Faasle hain darmiyaan, koi rishta ab baaqi nahin
Kyun tera dil ab bhi mere dil main dhadakta hai !!
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Pooja
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«Reply #20 on: August 28, 2007, 06:54:51 PM »
Nice talat..

Dhadkati dhadkano main ab bhi tum baki ho
Aa jao laut kar, isse pahle ki sansein bagi ho....
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: August 31, 2007, 01:14:47 PM »
Thanks Pooja..Good lines

Ab intezaar ki shama bhi bujhne chali hai
Mita diya hasti, badi zaalim dil ki lagi hai !!
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: August 31, 2007, 01:28:35 PM »
shukaria and good one!!

Dil ki lagi ek baar lag jaaye to jaati nahi
Yah wo pyaas hai, jo jal jal kar bhi bujhai jaati nahi
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«Reply #23 on: September 05, 2007, 11:29:47 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Faasle hain darmiyaan, koi rishta ab baaqi nahin
Kyun tera dil ab bhi mere dil main dhadakta hai !!


very  nice  Talat  and Pooja didi......  old  topic  dekh  kar  raha nahi gaya..  soncha ki  main  bhi kuch apne  dil ki baat likhoon......  

kuch  is  tarah se kahna chahunga......

Umar Bhar Hum  Usay Apne Dil Mein Basaate Rahe
Woh Humesha Mujhe Dooriyan Youn Badhaate Rahe
Ummeed Thi  Mujhe  Woh Mere Pal Laut Aayenge
Hum Dooriyan Ghataate Rahe Woh Aur Badhaate Rahe

Khush They  Hum Ki Woh Mera Dost Ek Din Aayega
Nazrein Neechi Kiye  Apne Paas Mujhe Bulaayega
Dhadkane Chalti Rahi Hum Usay Gungunate  Rahe
Kafile Jaate Rahe Hum Uske Laut Aane Aas Lagate Rahe......Waheed...
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«Reply #24 on: September 05, 2007, 11:34:50 AM »
bahut ache waheed ...Talat, pooja ji n all

waheed bahut zabardast likha hai

keep writing
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«Reply #25 on: September 19, 2007, 08:03:56 PM »
Thanks Pooja, Waheed and Sam. Bohot khoob Pooja and Waheed...
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«Reply #26 on: September 22, 2008, 07:33:12 PM »
Thankyou ! Yoindia
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