Taish- bachi-khuchi TAMEEZ dhundta hooN maiN...!! -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #30 on: June 16, 2013, 01:11:31 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 12, 2013, 11:40:06 AM

diye mujhe haiN ishq me sanam ne tohfe bahut,
nishaaN haiN jinpe khooN ke vo kameez dhoNta hooN maiN...

bahut mila hun in adab ke logoN se janaab maiN,
hai 'taish' naam ka jo badtameez dhundta hooN maiN...

uffffffffff kya mast gazal kahi hai taish...... sachhiiiiii maza aagaya padhkar sply ye do sher to bas chha gaye ........
aaj se tumhara naam badtameez taish hi rakh dete hain kyun chalega naa...

anamika ji pehle to shukriya is ghazal ki tareef ke liye, aur waise aapka diya ye naam chalegaa nahin daudegaa ji, so do use it freely... tongue3


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Re: Taish- bachi-khuchi TAMEEZ dhundta hooN maiN...!!

«Reply #31 on: June 16, 2013, 01:14:29 AM »

Quote from: Arghya on June 13, 2013, 12:33:23 AM

Taish ji[/color] ,
is Ghazal ki jitni tareef kii jaye woh kam hain .

Hats off to you!

To YOU SIR !

arghya ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya is izzat afzaayi ke liye, bas aage bhi aap humara saath yunhi nibhaate rahiyegaa...


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- bachi-khuchi TAMEEZ dhundta hooN maiN...!!

«Reply #32 on: June 16, 2013, 01:15:26 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on June 13, 2013, 02:26:40 PM

wah kaya baat hai....bahoot khoob likha....

poooja ji tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi hausla afzaayi karti raheN...!! Usual Smile


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suman59

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Re: Taish- bachi-khuchi TAMEEZ dhundta hooN maiN...!!

«Reply #33 on: December 15, 2013, 04:17:02 PM »

Quote from: Taish on June 08, 2013, 01:58:00 AM

Bahut waqt baad ek din meN do ghazaleN likh paya huN, ya sach kahuN to beh'r seekhne ke baad shaayad pehle mauka hai ki ek din meN do ghazaleN likhi haiN, pata nahiN kaisi bani hai, par umeed hai jyada niraash nahiN karuNga aap sabhi ko...!!

khudaayi me bachi khuchi tameez dhundta hooN maiN,
jo aadmi ko aadmi ajeez dhuNdta hooN maiN...

ke baat meri saari maan.ni pade jo jeest ko,
to zindagi ke naam ki kaneez dhundta hooN maiN...

diye mujhe haiN ishq me sanam ne tohfe bahut,
nishaaN haiN jinpe khooN ke vo kameez dhoNta hooN maiN...

kabhi maiN bhi to unhe jaanuN jinhe sajde haiN kiye,
bataaye jo khuda vahi rameez* dhundta hooN maiN...

*learned

bahut mila hun in adab ke logoN se janaab maiN,
hai 'taish' naam ka jo badtameez dhundta hooN maiN...

Wah wah bahut umda ghazal Clapping Smiley

taish je aapko bahut daad


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