Taish- lafzoN se GILAA karte haiN vo...!!

by ghayal_shayar on July 02, 2013, 05:11:08 PM
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Ek taaza ghazal bazm ke hawaale kar raah huN....



ghazaloN se meri jalaa karte haiN vo,
roz lafzon se gilaa karte haiN vo...

toote dil se mashghalaa* karte haiN vo...
ke chalo kuch to bhalaa karte haiN vo...

*dil behlaana

jab kabhi humse mila karte haiN vo,
jaane kyun itna gilaa* karte haiN vo...

*shikayat

bhool jata hoon zara sa unhe gar,
ishq ka fir silsilaa karte haiN vo...

toote dil ke tootne ka darr nahiN,
pyar ka phir hauslaa karte haiN vo...

maut bhi meri paraayi ho chali,
jeest ka har faislaa karte haiN vo...

jab kali koi khile unke chaman,
bhej kaaNte ittellaa karte haiN vo...

main nahiN shamma na parwana haiN vo,
mujh meN phir kyuN kar jalaa karte haiN vo...

aaNkheN unse chaar hoN kasie yahaaN,
nazroN se jo zalzalaa karte hain vo...

tum bhi kore aur hum bhi saade haiN,
kore kaaghaz ka qilaa karte haiN vo...

husn unka kya bataayeN hum sanam
'taish' tujh meN hi milaa karte haiN vo...
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2013, 05:21:51 PM »
Quote from: Taish on July 02, 2013, 05:11:08 PM
Ek taaza ghazal bazm ke hawaale kar raah huN....



ghazaloN se meri jalaa karte haiN vo,
roz lafzon se gilaa karte haiN vo...

toote dil se mashghalaa* karte haiN vo...
ke chalo kuch to bhalaa karte haiN vo...

*dil behlaana

jab kabhi humse mila karte haiN vo,
jaane kyun itna gilaa* karte haiN vo...

*shikayat

bhool jata hoon zara sa unhe gar,
ishq ka fir silsilaa karte haiN vo...

toote dil ke tootne ka darr nahiN,
pyar ka phir hauslaa karte haiN vo...

maut bhi meri paraayi ho chali,
jeest ka har faislaa karte haiN vo...

jab kali koi khile unke chaman,
bhej kaaNte ittellaa karte haiN vo...

main nahiN shamma na parwana haiN vo,
mujh meN phir kyuN kar jalaa karte haiN vo...

aaNkheN unse chaar hoN kasie yahaaN,
nazroN se jo zalzalaa karte hain vo...

tum bhi kore aur hum bhi saade haiN,
kore kaaghaz ka qilaa karte haiN vo...

husn unka kya bataayeN hum sanam
'taish' tujh meN hi milaa karte haiN vo...
बहुत खूबसूरत पेशकश की है आपने,दाद क़बूल करें/
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2013, 05:41:57 PM »

Taish Sahaab Aadaab... !


Kya baat hai janab lagta hai instantly yeH gazal kahi hai aapne... kafi sadhe sidhe ashaar rahe..

Bahut khoob Meri dheroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez..
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2013, 07:03:12 PM »
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Bahut umda peshkash rahi..daad..happy9
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2013, 08:02:41 PM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 02, 2013, 05:21:51 PM
बहुत खूबसूरत पेशकश की है आपने,दाद क़बूल करें/

ravinder saaheb, is tareef ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya...!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2013, 10:11:18 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 02, 2013, 05:41:57 PM

Taish Sahaab Aadaab... !


Kya baat hai janab lagta hai instantly yeH gazal kahi hai aapne... kafi sadhe sidhe ashaar rahe..

Bahut khoob Meri dheroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez..



bhai aapki baat solah aane sach hai.... 10 min waali hi ghazal hai ye... tongue3 waise ahcha laga jaan kar ki aapko kosish pasand aayi, umeed karta hun ki aage bhi aapka saath yunhi milta rahegaa....
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2013, 11:05:12 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2013, 11:36:13 PM »
Ghazal bahaut achchhee lagi ..... Dheron daad apko !
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2013, 01:50:29 AM »
Quote from: nashwani on July 02, 2013, 07:03:12 PM
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Bahut umda peshkash rahi..daad..happy9

aapki tareef humare sar aaNkhon pe nashwani ji, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiye...
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2013, 01:58:06 AM »
khoob Taish saheb. 7 th 8 th sher bahut khoob hain .
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2013, 02:22:46 AM »
Quote from: Taish on July 02, 2013, 05:11:08 PM

jab kali koi khile unke chaman,
bhej kaaNte ittellaa karte haiN vo...

Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2013, 07:18:09 AM »
Quote from: Taish on July 02, 2013, 05:11:08 PM
Ek taaza ghazal bazm ke hawaale kar raah huN....



ghazaloN se meri jalaa karte haiN vo,
roz lafzon se gilaa karte haiN vo...

toote dil se mashghalaa* karte haiN vo...
ke chalo kuch to bhalaa karte haiN vo...

*dil behlaana

jab kabhi humse mila karte haiN vo,
jaane kyun itna gilaa* karte haiN vo...

*shikayat

bhool jata hoon zara sa unhe gar,
ishq ka fir silsilaa karte haiN vo...

toote dil ke tootne ka darr nahiN,
pyar ka phir hauslaa karte haiN vo...

maut bhi meri paraayi ho chali,
jeest ka har faislaa karte haiN vo...

jab kali koi khile unke chaman,
bhej kaaNte ittellaa karte haiN vo...

main nahiN shamma na parwana haiN vo,
mujh meN phir kyuN kar jalaa karte haiN vo...

aaNkheN unse chaar hoN kasie yahaaN,
nazroN se jo zalzalaa karte hain vo...

tum bhi kore aur hum bhi saade haiN,
kore kaaghaz ka qilaa karte haiN vo...

husn unka kya bataayeN hum sanam
'taish' tujh meN hi milaa karte haiN vo...
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«Reply #12 on: July 03, 2013, 10:20:42 AM »
bahut khoob.......nice one.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: July 03, 2013, 12:48:40 PM »
bahut umdaa kalaam ek rau zaroor doonga
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«Reply #14 on: July 03, 2013, 12:49:21 PM »
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wowwwwwww! taishji bahut achchi ghazal kahi hai aapne. har sher bahut hi khoob hai aur in ashaar ke kya kehne

bhool jata hoon zara sa unhe gar,
ishq ka fir silsilaa karte haiN vo...

toote dil ke tootne ka darr nahiN,
pyar ka phir hauslaa karte haiN vo...

maut bhi meri paraayi ho chali,
jeest ka har faislaa karte haiN vo...

jab kali koi khile unke chaman,
bhej kaaNte ittellaa karte haiN vo...

mujhe bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh kalaam. is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaron dili daad.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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