Taish- mera naseeb mujhse ROTAA hua milaa...!! -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: July 19, 2013, 02:46:26 AM »

Quote from: KavitaKavita on July 18, 2013, 06:28:22 PM

khoob likha aapne

shukriya kavita ji, yuNhi padhti raheN aap aage bhi...


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Re: Taish- mera naseeb mujhse ROTAA hua milaa...!!

«Reply #16 on: July 19, 2013, 03:32:10 AM »

Quote from: nandbahu on July 18, 2013, 07:19:35 PM

wah wah

bahukhandi saaheb kosish ko pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab...!!


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Re: Taish- mera naseeb mujhse ROTAA hua milaa...!!

«Reply #17 on: July 19, 2013, 03:45:55 AM »

Quote from: Taish on July 18, 2013, 06:09:33 PM

Ek aur league se hatkar peshkash bazm ke saamne hai, apni raaye se jaroor nawaaziyegaa...!!

sochaa hua mila hai na chaahaa hua milaa,
humko to dil janam se hai tootaa hua milaa...
mujhe ye sher bikul samjh nahin aayaa....!
kisne haiN zakhm mere guloN meN piro diye,
har phool mere haar meN hai sehmaa hua milaa...
wah wah wah aur wah.....! is sher ka wazn bahut hai taish just cherish it
barsoN ke baad ek shikashta kitaab meN,
ik khat kisi ke haath ka likkhaa hua milaa...
wah wah wah.........! mujhe khushi hui tumne mere khat ko is tarah sambhaal ke rakha hua hai. per mazmoo.n mujhe yaad nahin zara batana kya likha tha main ne aur taarikh kya thi
hum raah-e-ishq se bhala kyunkar gilaa kareN,
jo bhi mila yahaaN hume rotaa hua milaa...
bahut hadd tak sahi farmayaa.ye jo ghazlein hain zayadatar to aanso.on mein doobi hui milti hain
naazaN raha jo apne ujaale pe raat bhar,
diyaa mujhe vo subah ko toota hua milaa..
kya kahne . waise koi kita bhi bada ho, kitna bhi acha ho, kisi bhi darje ka ho, sab ka apna ek waqt muqarrar hai paerwardigaar ki taraf se. wo apne kaam ko anjaam deta hai aur waqt poora hone per rukhsat ho jata hai...!
basti men aadmi ki suna beshumaar hai,
par ishq kabra meN mujhe letaa hua milaa...
insaaniyat rahi kahaan ab nafsi nafsi ka aalaam hai ji
ab khauf aashiqui ka yahaaN zindagi meN hai,
mujhse hi chehra mera chuptaa hua milaa...
bahut bahut khoob....!
likh di shikasta ek ghazal 'taish' ne yahaaN,
mera naseeb mujhse hai rotaa huaa milaa...

ye sher khull kar mere saamne nahin aaya taish is liye is pe main wah wah bhi nahin kar sakti aur tabsera bhi nahin kar sakti.! icon_silent

bahut khoob.....!


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Re: Taish- mera naseeb mujhse ROTAA hua milaa...!!

«Reply #18 on: July 19, 2013, 05:20:12 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on July 18, 2013, 08:01:14 PM

awesome creation taish ji,.....
sab ashaar khoob hain
ye asaar dil choo gaye

insaan ban zara mohabbat baaNtne chale,
to pyar kabra meN hume letaa hua milaa...

ab khauf aashiqui ka kitna zindagi meN hai,
mujhse ye chehra mera chuptaa hua milaa...

likh di shikasta ik ghazal jo 'taish' ne yahaaN,
mera naseeb mujhse hai rotaa huaa milaa.

bohat c daad rau ke sath,...........

laaiba ji humari khushnaseebi ki aapko ye experimental sher hoo paaye, umeed karta hUn aage bhi aap par prabhaav chodne layak likh paaungaa... aapke hausla afzayai aur rau dono hi ke liye tah-e-dil se shukraguzaar hun aapka, umeed karta hun aage bhi aapka saath hume yunhi milta rahegaa... Usual Smile


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Re: Taish- mera naseeb mujhse ROTAA hua milaa...!!

«Reply #19 on: July 19, 2013, 11:41:25 AM »

Quote from: qalb on July 18, 2013, 10:32:00 PM

qalb ji pasand karne ka shukriya janaab...


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Re: Taish- mera naseeb mujhse ROTAA hua milaa...!!

«Reply #20 on: July 19, 2013, 11:42:14 AM »

BOHUT KHUB TAISH BHAI WAAAH WAAH WAAH


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«Reply #21 on: July 19, 2013, 01:38:49 PM »

Quote from: Saavan on July 18, 2013, 11:25:48 PM

Bade dino bad aisi umda post padhi.. Dhero daad.

saavan saaheb humari khusnaseebi ki aapki ikcha poori kar paaye, aapka bahut bahut aabhaari huN is izzat afzaayi ke liye, umeed karta hun ki aage bhi aapka saath yunhi milta rahegaa...


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Re: Taish- mera naseeb mujhse ROTAA hua milaa...!!

«Reply #22 on: July 19, 2013, 01:47:30 PM »

Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on July 19, 2013, 12:29:41 AM

kisne haiN zakhm mere guloN meN piro diye,
har phool mere haar meN hai sehmaa hua milaa...

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Wah,Wah,Wah Taishji,
Bahut umdaaaaa.

shukriya sudhir ji, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko kosish pasand aayi, umeed karta hun ki aap aage bhi yuNHi saath nibhaate raheNge...


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«Reply #23 on: July 19, 2013, 03:35:00 PM »

hmmmmmmm taish ji kya baat hai. bahut achchi peshkash. kuch ashaar toh bahut hi khoobsurat soch se saje hue. taish ji agar aap ise koshish kahte hai toh phir aage kya haal hoga. likhte rahiye. aapki kalaam padhne ka ek alag hi maza aata hai. hazaron dili daad daad daad daad.

kisne haiN zakhm mere guloN meN piro diye,
har phool mere haar meN hai sehmaa hua milaa...
waaah waah aur sirf waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.

hum raah-e-ishq se bhala kyunkar gilaa kareN,
jo bhi mila yahaaN hume rotaa hua milaa...
bahut khoooooooob..

ab khauf aashiqui ka yahaaN zindagi meN hai,
mujhse hi chehra mera chuptaa hua milaa...
kya baat hai bahut khoob...

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Re: Taish- mera naseeb mujhse ROTAA hua milaa...!!

«Reply #24 on: July 19, 2013, 10:30:06 PM »

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on July 19, 2013, 12:52:19 AM

I must say Taish, u hav beautifully sketchd d emotions which preview ur unique identity n ur evry para touchd d core of my heart. Hats off ......
Hum khush hain, ek lehkak mei hume ek pyara sa dost b mila...

bhupinder ji u known the dreams I have, and these are just my tries to reach near it, hoping that one day i may, n it is a pleasure indeed to have such a wonderful frnd in you with whom I cud actually share them... and can't actually thank u enough in words for the amount of understanding u had for the feleings I tried to portray with my words, do keep reading the same way maam, ur admiration gives me hope of achieving my dream one day.... Usual Smile


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«Reply #25 on: July 19, 2013, 11:39:30 PM »

Quote from: theyash on July 19, 2013, 01:37:07 AM

bahut khoob taish ji....

yash saaheb pasand karne ka shukriya janaab, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete rahen...!!


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«Reply #26 on: July 20, 2013, 12:07:45 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on July 19, 2013, 03:45:55 AM

bahut khoob.....!

sheba ji pehle to tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya mohtarma, rahi baat matla aur maqta samajh men na aane ki, to hum kis marz ki dawaa hain aakhir...

matla me kaha hai ki na hi mujhe waisa dil mila jaisa maine socha tha aur na hi waisa dil mila jise kisi ne chaaha ho, balki mujhe janam se hi toota hua dil milaa...

aur maqta ke do maane ho sakte hain, ek ye ki taish ne mera naseeb mujhse rota hua naam ki ghazal likhi hai, agar aap gaur kareN to wahi naam hai ghazal ka... Doosra maane ye ho sakta hai ki jab taish ne ek haari hui ghazal likhi to uska naseeb bhi khud ko uske dard pe ashaay mehsus karne laga, aur usse khud aa kar rota hua milaa... mere khayaal se ab aapko poori ghazal ke maane saaf ho chuke hoNge... Usual Smile


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«Reply #27 on: July 20, 2013, 10:34:42 PM »

Quote from: saahill on July 19, 2013, 11:42:14 AM

BOHUT KHUB TAISH BHAI WAAAH WAAH WAAH

saahil saaheb pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya saaheb... Usual Smile


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«Reply #28 on: July 21, 2013, 01:52:37 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on July 19, 2013, 03:35:00 PM

aqsh ji kabhi kabhi to aap itni tareef kar deti hain jitni meri qaabiliyat hi nahiN... umeed karta hun ki aage bhi aapka saath hume yunhi milta rahegaa...


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Re: Taish- mera naseeb mujhse ROTAA hua milaa...!!

«Reply #29 on: July 21, 2013, 03:22:19 PM »

kisne haiN zakhm mere guloN meN piro diye,
har phool mere haar meN hai sehmaa hua milaa...

naazaN raha jo apne ujaale pe raat bhar,
diyaa mujhe vo subah ko toota hua milaa..

waah waah taish ji bohut umda khyaal hai,

apne ye ghazal aise hi nahi likhi bohut gehrai hai inme
SOCHI SAMJHI SAAZISH HAI Laughing hard

LAJAWAAB


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