Taish- vo phool hi ab FAKAT ek rang reh gaya...!!

by ghayal_shayar on May 10, 2013, 02:24:58 AM
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Bazm ko ek baar fir is nacheez ka salaam, muddatoN baad nazm sa kuch likhne ki kosish ki hai umeed karta hooN jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga, khaamiyoN ke liye maafi ka talabgaar hooN...!! waise nazm se jyada muktak chand ki kavita si lag rahi ai ye.... Usual Smile


Waqt ki saakh se chand lamheN churaa loon, fir itminaan se khud ko sambhaalooN,, koi to bataaye mujhe is jahaaN men, marz-e-mohabbat ki kaun si davaa loon,, koi nahi milta hai isme sivaa tere, ab tu hi bata dil-e-khangushta ko aur kitna khangalooN,, mohabbat jab hui thi, tab to roka na tune, ab kaise ise duniyaa se chipaa loon,, waqt ki saakh se chand lamheN churaa loon………….




Mohabbat ki maiyyat pe ro raha tha,
Ashqon se tere likhe khat bhigo raha tha….


Haalat-e-ishq dekh ke dang reh gaya,
Mehboob ka daaman jo tang reh gaya.
Jis khusboo ke peeche deewana tha main,
Wo phool hi ab fakat ek rang reh gaya.
Us khusboo ki yaad me kho raha tha,
Ashqon se tere likhe khat bhigo raha tha….


Ashq palkoN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN,
SaaNseN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN,
AansuoN me baha bhula dete ghum unka,
Gir ke tasveer unki banaayeN to kya kareN….
Un tasveeroN ko kaaNdhe pe dho raha tha,
Ashqon se tere likhe khat bhigo raha tha….


Zakhm, ashq, zillat aur hum,
Rahe saath jaise humdum..
Socha tha thoda aur jee looN,
Par tumne de di apni kasam.
Un kasmoN aur vaadoN pe ro raha tha,
Ashqon se tere likhe khat bhigo raha tha….


Teri yaadoN se khud ko chubho raha tha,
Ashqon se tere likhe khat bhigo raha tha….

HaaN sach apne ishq ki maut pe ro raha tha..........
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Iftakhar Ahmad
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2013, 02:37:42 AM »
Bahut hi khoob dard bhari nazm likhi hai Bhushan jee, Mohabbat ki mayyat/Ishq ki maut waale misre mujhe theek nahiN lage. Baaqi nazm kaafi zordaar hai, yuN hi likhte rahiye aur hameiN nawaazte rahiye.
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2013, 02:38:37 AM »
Woh kehte hai, jab kuch jyada achai lage, toh uski khoobsurati ko bayan karne ke liye, hum nishabd reh jate hain, aur sochte hai, koi itna khoobsurat kaise ho sakta, thik waise hi, aapki nazm hai, jo jasbaato ki gehrayee tak choo jati hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2013, 08:21:35 AM »
waah waah excellent
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2013, 08:45:16 AM »
beutiful nazam and beutiful wording
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2013, 10:41:23 AM »
Dard ka dariya,
sirf aah, aah, aur aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2013, 11:34:36 AM »
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Waah excellant nazm. bahut daad Taish ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2013, 12:27:02 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2013, 03:04:24 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2013, 05:26:47 PM »
Taish Sahaab Aadaab...!



Janab kya baat hai badi hi umdaa nazam kahi hai aapne.. pahle dono mukhde behad khoob lage ... Usual Smile

Bhai tusi v vadi dukhi aatma ho ... tongue3 bahut khoob lage raho..
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2013, 05:35:16 PM »
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Dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh nazm taish jee. bahut achcha likha hai aapne. dili mubarakbad qubool kare..
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2013, 07:18:27 PM »
Quote from: Taish on May 10, 2013, 02:24:58 AM
Bazm ko ek baar fir is nacheez ka salaam, muddatoN baad nazm sa kuch likhne ki kosish ki hai umeed karta hooN jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga, khaamiyoN ke liye maafi ka talabgaar hooN...!! waise nazm se jyada muktak chand ki kavita si lag rahi ai ye.... Usual Smile


Waqt ki saakh se chand lamheN churaa loon, fir itminaan se khud ko sambhaalooN,, koi to bataaye mujhe is jahaaN men, marz-e-mohabbat ki kaun si davaa loon,, koi nahi milta hai isme sivaa tere, ab tu hi bata dil-e-khangushta ko aur kitna khangalooN,, mohabbat jab hui thi, tab to roka na tune, ab kaise ise duniyaa se chipaa loon,, waqt ki saakh se chand lamheN churaa loon………….




Mohabbat ki maiyyat pe ro raha tha,
Ashqon se tere likhe khat bhigo raha tha….


Haalat-e-ishq dekh ke dang reh gaya,
Mehboob ka daaman jo tang reh gaya.
Jis khusboo ke peeche deewana tha main,
Wo phool hi ab fakat ek rang reh gaya.
Us khusboo ki yaad me kho raha tha,
Ashqon se tere likhe khat bhigo raha tha….


Ashq palkoN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN,
SaaNseN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN,
AansuoN me baha bhula dete ghum unka,
Gir ke tasveer unki banaayeN to kya kareN….
Un tasveeroN ko kaaNdhe pe dho raha tha,
Ashqon se tere likhe khat bhigo raha tha….


Zakhm, ashq, zillat aur hum,
Rahe saath jaise humdum..
Socha tha thoda aur jee looN,
Par tumne de di apni kasam.
Un kasmoN aur vaadoN pe ro raha tha,
Ashqon se tere likhe khat bhigo raha tha….


Teri yaadoN se khud ko chubho raha tha,
Ashqon se tere likhe khat bhigo raha tha….

HaaN sach apne ishq ki maut pe ro raha tha..........
bohat achi nazm taish ji ,...........bohat c daad,...
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2013, 09:38:35 PM »
Waqt ki saakh se chand lamheN churaa loon, fir itminaan se khud ko sambhaalooN,, koi to bataaye mujhe is jahaaN men, marz-e-mohabbat ki kaun si davaa loon,, koi nahi milta hai isme sivaa tere, ab tu hi bata dil-e-khangushta ko aur kitna khangalooN,, mohabbat jab hui thi, tab to roka na tune, ab kaise ise duniyaa se chipaa loon,, waqt ki saakh se chand lamheN churaa loon………….

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«Reply #13 on: May 10, 2013, 09:51:38 PM »
Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 10, 2013, 02:37:42 AM
Bahut hi khoob dard bhari nazm likhi hai Bhushan jee, Mohabbat ki mayyat/Ishq ki maut waale misre mujhe theek nahiN lage. Baaqi nazm kaafi zordaar hai, yuN hi likhte rahiye aur hameiN nawaazte rahiye.

are saaheb jaan kar khushi ki aapko likha pasand aaya, waise sach kahuN to vo lines mujhe bhi bahut bekaar lagiN, par chunki ek sitting me likha hua tha, to waisa ka waisa hi maine post kar diya.... Usual Smile bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath nibaate rahiye... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2013, 04:11:52 AM »
Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on May 10, 2013, 02:38:37 AM
Woh kehte hai, jab kuch jyada achai lage, toh uski khoobsurati ko bayan karne ke liye, hum nishabd reh jate hain, aur sochte hai, koi itna khoobsurat kaise ho sakta, thik waise hi, aapki nazm hai, jo jasbaato ki gehrayee tak choo jati hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bhupinder ji aapki tareef humare sar aaNkhoN pe, muddaton baad kisi ki tareef padh ke dil ko itna sukoon mila hai, ahcha laga jaan kar ki kisi ko alfaaz itne pasand aaye, umeed yahi karta huN ki aage bhi aapko pasand aane laayak likhta rahuN aur aapka saath yuNhi milta rahe...!!
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