Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!:Shayri-E-Dard

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Bazm ko mera aadaab, ye bataate hue mujhe bahut khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai ki jald hi meri pehli kitaab "Khusboo Khareed Laaya HooN" chap ke taiyaar ho jaayegi... Usi kitaab ka pehle misra aur uski pehli ghazal aapko nazar kar raha huN, umeed karta huN jyada niraash nahiN karuNga...

"Tum hawaaoN ka raasta hi dekho,
Main to khusboo khareed laaya hooN...."

Wafaa ka silaa aap kya dijiyega,
Yahi kijiyega bhula dijiyega...

Ye dil kya hai mai apni jaa bhi luta du,
Zara muskura kar daga dijiyega...

Sitamgar kahuN ke maseeha tumhe maiN,
Jo dil tod kar yuN dawaa dijiyega...

Puraane bahut ho chuke aashiqui meN,
Hume dard koi naya dijiyega...

Kati hai meri zindagi rote rote
Kabhi hans paduN to rulaa dijiyegaa...

YahaaN kaam hota nahiN muft koi,
Mujhe dijiyega to kya dijiyega...

Bahut ho chuka huN dhuaan jalte jalte,
Bachi raakh meri udaa dijiyegaa..

Kami ho kisi cheez ki jo kabhi to,
Meri ye mohabbat lutaa dijiyega...


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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2013, 02:33:48 PM »

bohut khub taish ji Applause


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Shireen Hakani

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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2013, 02:50:31 PM »

Wah Wah!!! It's Awesome!!! Very Very Good!! Aap ki shayad yeh pehle ghazal hai jo mujhe itni pasand aayi hai. Har Ashaar Khubsurat Hai.

Aap Ko Aap Ki Kitaab Mubarak Ho!!! I wish u all the Good Luck And Success. If you have a soft copy, do share with us all.

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Bhupinder Kaur

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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2013, 02:52:52 PM »

WaaH WaaH Taishji Bahut Khoob..................

Aur, Aapne Kitaab ko naam bhi, bahut sahi diya, seedhe dil ko choo jaatha hai
"Khusboo Khareed Laaya Hoo"

"Tum hawaaoN ka raasta hi dekho,
Main to khusboo khareed laaya hooN...."

"Ye dil kya hai mai apni jaa bhi luta du,
Zara muskura kar daga dijiyega...

Puraane bahut ho chuke aashiqui meN,
Hume dard koi naya dijiyega...

Bahut ho chuka huN dhuaan jalte jalte,
Bachi raakh meri udaa dijiyegaa..

Kami ho kisi cheez ki jo kabhi to,
Meri ye mohabbat lutaa dijiyega"...

Wish You ALL THE VERY BEST dear

Clapping Smiley


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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2013, 03:05:52 PM »

Ye dil kya hai mai apni jaa bhi luta du,
Zara muskura kar daga dijiyega...

Kati hai meri zindagi rote rote
Kabhi hans paduN to rulaa dijiyegaa...

Bahut ho chuka huN dhuaan jalte jalte,
Bachi raakh meri udaa dijiyegaa..

Bahut khoob taish sahab..bahut umda peshkash rahi..Hazron dili daad rau ke sath..n all the very best.. happy9


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pawan16

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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2013, 03:07:02 PM »

Bhut khoob taish!!!!!!!

Congrates for Your Book "Khusbhu le aya hu".....name hi kafi hai.....keep going....


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laaiba

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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2013, 04:09:04 PM »

Quote from: Taish on June 21, 2013, 02:24:41 PM

sab se pehle aapkee kitab kee aapko advance bohat mubarak ho taish jee,...................bohat achee our khubsoorat ghazal hai har sher oomdaa hai ,......bohat bohat c daad,...


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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2013, 04:40:03 PM »

Nice 1


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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2013, 07:28:48 PM »

Quote from: Taish on June 21, 2013, 02:24:41 PM

Bahut Mubaraq Aur Bahut Khub Janaab Applause

shad o aabaad rahiye

shihab


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2013, 11:06:38 PM »

Quote from: saahill on June 21, 2013, 02:33:48 PM

bohut khub taish ji Applause

saahil saaheb pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya, bas yahi duaa karta huN ki aage bhi aapka saath yuNhi bana rahe...


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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2013, 11:13:58 PM »

Quote from: Taish on June 21, 2013, 02:24:41 PM

Bazm ko mera aadaab, ye bataate hue mujhe bahut khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai ki jald hi meri pehli kitaab "Khusboo Khareed Laaya HooN" chap ke taiyaar ho jaayegi... Usi kitaab ka pehle misra aur uski pehli ghazal aapko nazar kar raha huN, umeed karta huN jyada niraash nahiN karuNga...

"Tum hawaaoN ka raasta hi dekho,
Main to khusboo khareed laaya hooN...."
excellent,sir

Wafaa ka silaa aap kya dijiyega,
Yahi kijiyega bhula dijiyega...

Ye dil kya hai mai apni jaa bhi luta du,
Zara muskura kar daga dijiyega...
wonderful,sir
Sitamgar kahuN ke maseeha tumhe maiN,
Jo dil tod kar yuN dawaa dijiyega...

Puraane bahut ho chuke aashiqui meN,
Hume dard koi naya dijiyega...

Kati hai meri zindagi rote rote
Kabhi hans paduN to rulaa dijiyegaa...

YahaaN kaam hota nahiN muft koi,
Mujhe dijiyega to kya dijiyega...

Bahut ho chuka huN dhuaan jalte jalte,
Bachi raakh meri udaa dijiyegaa..

Kami ho kisi cheez ki jo kabhi to,
Meri ye mohabbat lutaa dijiyega...

MR TAISH, WITH A SMALL RAU ,GR88888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 GHAZAL,SIR. AND CONGRATULATION FOR THE PUBLICATION.


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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2013, 12:41:09 AM »

Quote from: Taish on June 21, 2013, 02:24:41 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause


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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2013, 12:46:15 AM »

sab se pehle, aap ki kitaab chhapne par apko tah e dil se mubaarkabaad Taish bhai, aur us ki kaamyaabee ke liye duaaein aur "all the very best".

aur is laajawaab ghazal par laakhon se bhi zyaada daad ... waaqayee ye is bazm ko ek naayaab tohfa hai....very very well done my friend !!!


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: Taish- WAFA ka silaa aap kya dijiyegaa...!!

«Reply #14 on: June 22, 2013, 01:37:34 AM »

Bhushan jee, bahut bahut mubarakbaad aapki book ke liye, aur kaamyaabi ke liye duaaeiN.

Janaab ye ghazal bahut pasand aai. bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne, khususann ye she'r bahut pasand aaya:

Sitamgar kahuN ya maseeha tumhe maiN
Jo dil tod kar yuN dawaa dijiyega


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