Tajrubaa,.

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Zindagi Bhar Gunaahon Mein Mubtilaa Raha,.
Main Khud Apne Qateelon Se Milaa Raha,.

Dekhi Hai Khudki Barbaadi Aankhon Se Apne,.
Buri Sohbat Se Milne Ka Ab Tajrubaa Raha,.

Dost Bhi Pesh Aaye Dushmano Se Bardhkar,.
Dosti Ka Ek Rang Dekha, Kisi Se Na Ab Gilaa Raha,.

Kaise Bachaata Ghar Ko Apne Buraai Ki Aag Se,.
Bhalaai Ke Samander Se Umr Bhar Faaslaa Raha,.

Dekha Hai Munaafeeqon Ka Rang Bhi Yahaan Maine,.
Labon Pe Hasi, Haton Mein Jinke Khanjar Chupaa Raha,.

Apne Hi Nazm Likhkar Mili Ruswaai "Azeem, Ko,.
Ruswa Bhi Usne Kiya, Jiske Saath Iska Waastaa Raha,.

Ab Haal Likhne Ko Bhi Apna, Darte Hain Hum,.
Aisa Yahaan Ke Mahaul Se Mera Tajrubaa Raha,.

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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2009, 03:52:48 PM »
Achha likha hai Azeem. Nice wordings Nice presentation. Each word from the heart. Right?

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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2009, 04:18:08 PM »
Wah Azeem ! Bahoot Umda likha hai...
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2009, 04:23:34 PM »
Bohot Khoob Azeem
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2009, 05:11:12 PM »
Quote from: {Angel} on June 07, 2009, 03:52:48 PM
Achha likha hai Azeem. Nice wordings Nice presentation. Each word from the heart. Right?

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Sahi Kaha Dil Se Likha Hai,. Thank U Sis,.
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2009, 05:18:50 PM »
Azeem Bhai.. Lafzon ka Chunaaw Behad Khubsooorat hai.. Isse is Rachna ki Sunderta me Chaar-Chaand lag gaye Hain.. Bahut Pyaara likha hai dost.. bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2009, 10:36:57 PM »
Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat likha hai apne Azeem bhaijan...Bahaut bahaut khoob...Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2009, 12:42:59 AM »
Bohot khoob azeem bhai

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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2009, 06:30:59 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on June 07, 2009, 04:18:08 PM
Wah Azeem ! Bahoot Umda likha hai...

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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2009, 06:31:44 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 07, 2009, 04:23:34 PM
Bohot Khoob Azeem

Shukriya Talat Sis.
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2009, 06:32:32 AM »
Quote from: Mann on June 07, 2009, 05:18:50 PM
Azeem Bhai.. Lafzon ka Chunaaw Behad Khubsooorat hai.. Isse is Rachna ki Sunderta me Chaar-Chaand lag gaye Hain.. Bahut Pyaara likha hai dost.. bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2009, 07:04:50 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on June 08, 2009, 07:01:47 AM
Behtreen Bohat Hi Umda Likha Hai Mere Bhai
Par Ye Lines To Dil Ko Hi Chhu Gayi Bohat Khoob

Khuha Raho....

Shukriya Bhai, Waise Ye Lines Badi Hi Gehraai Se Nikle Hain,.
Kisi Ke Liye,.
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2009, 08:05:35 AM »
Bahut Khoob Azeem Ji!!!, Kya khoob likha hai.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2009, 11:39:18 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on June 08, 2009, 08:05:35 AM
Bahut Khoob Azeem Ji!!!, Kya khoob likha hai.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.

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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2009, 12:38:39 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on June 08, 2009, 12:25:44 PM
Waah waah bahot dil se aur behad behatreen likha hai bhai,excellent poem Azeem

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