Takdeer

by nishita on February 05, 2005, 11:07:56 AM
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nishita
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Meri Taqdeer ka na puchoo fasaana
Yeh tau kambakht harjaai hai
Iss ne hamesha ki hai mohabaat sachi
Mager badley mein isey mili sirf bewafaai hai

nm
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thycreator
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2005, 11:10:01 AM »
Quote from: "nishita"
Meri Taqdeer ka na puchoo fasaana
Yeh tau kambakht harjaai hai
Iss ne hamesha ki hai mohabaat sachi
Mager badley mein isey mili sirf bewafaai hai

nm


Wah Nishita ji,
Taqdeer ko apne kyu dosh deti ho aap dost,
Ek bewafa ke liye isko na yu ilzam do.....
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pandit
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2005, 11:12:17 AM »
wah nishita ji ...
bewafai dil nahi sikhata,bewafa to log hote hai,
dard e judai dil nahi deta,
ye to zamaana deta hai.
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nishita
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2005, 11:24:21 AM »
gud both

zamane ki sang tarashi ne pathar bana diya.
tanhai ko shayad mera muqadar bana diya.
ankhon mai meri aksar namee si rehti hai.
uski yaad me ise miane  samandar bana diya
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thycreator
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2005, 11:26:33 AM »
Waqt ne sitam kuch aaise hum pe dhaye hai,
Chune chale the aasama,dhool chat ke aaye hai,
Bahut guman tha humko khud ke pak muhabbat pe,
Aaj dil toota hai apno se kuch yu dhoke khaye hai.
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thycreator
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2005, 11:29:52 AM »
Quote from: "nishita"
gud both

zamane ki sang tarashi ne pathar bana diya.
tanhai ko shayad mera muqadar bana diya.
ankhon mai meri aksar namee si rehti hai.
uski yaad me ise miane  samandar bana diya


Gud one again dear...u write real gud stuff....

Yu kissi ki yad mein aakhon mein nami rehne do,
Iss toote dil mein bhi uski kami ko rehne do,
Dunia ke sitam na tumko bhi jeene denge,
Uske yadon ki parat ko jami hi rehne do.
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pandit
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2005, 11:33:44 AM »
dard e isq itna badh gaya hai duniya me,
kya iski koi dawa hai iss duniya me.
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2005, 12:20:48 PM »
very nice nishita,amit,pandit Usual Smile
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2005, 01:03:24 PM »
very  nice  nishita.........thy.........pandit........excelle nt  work...........

Uljhi hui zindagi hai, bhigri hui takdeer hai
Ek haara hua shaks hun magar jeene ki aarzoo hai

Kushiya banke phool, khilli thi kabhi
Phir waqt guzarthe hi murjha bhi gayee
Ab ruhu mein bas unki kushbhu hai
Ek haara hua shaks hun magar jeene ki aarzoo hai.....................(nm)
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thycreator
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2005, 03:42:36 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
very nice nishita,amit,pandit Usual Smile


Thanx Nidhi ji.... tongue3
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thycreator
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2005, 03:44:05 PM »
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very  nice  nishita.........thy.........pandit........excelle nt  work...........

Uljhi hui zindagi hai, bhigri hui takdeer hai
Ek haara hua shaks hun magar jeene ki aarzoo hai

Kushiya banke phool, khilli thi kabhi
Phir waqt guzarthe hi murjha bhi gayee
Ab ruhu mein bas unki kushbhu hai
Ek haara hua shaks hun magar jeene ki aarzoo hai.....................(nm)


Wah Waheed ji,
Jeene ki aarzoo ko kabhi haarne na dena tum dost,
Ye wo seh hai jo sabko naseeb nahi hoti....
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2005, 03:46:21 PM »
Quote from: "nishita"
Meri Taqdeer ka na puchoo fasaana
Yeh tau kambakht harjaai hai
Iss ne hamesha ki hai mohabaat sachi
Mager badley mein isey mili sirf bewafaai hai

nm


WoW Nishi!!!

Zard patton ke siwa kuch na aaya mere haath
Maine aangan main kayi perh laga kar dekhe!!! (NM)
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thycreator
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2005, 03:53:09 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Quote from: "nishita"
Meri Taqdeer ka na puchoo fasaana
Yeh tau kambakht harjaai hai
Iss ne hamesha ki hai mohabaat sachi
Mager badley mein isey mili sirf bewafaai hai

nm


WoW Nishi!!!

Zard patton ke siwa kuch na aaya mere haath
Maine aangan main kayi perh laga kar dekhe!!! (NM)


Gud one talat ji,
Aise hi aasha ke perh lagate rehna aye dost,
Dekhna ek din bahar tere ghar bhi aayegi..
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2005, 05:34:57 PM »
Quote from: "nishita"
Meri Taqdeer ka na puchoo fasaana
Yeh tau kambakht harjaai hai
Iss ne hamesha ki hai mohabaat sachi
Mager badley mein isey mili sirf bewafaai hai

nm


wahhhhhhhh nishuuuuuuuu!!!!!! gud one kuddiye!!

 :D
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nishita
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2005, 05:36:29 PM »
wah all... and thanks Usual Smile

Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "nishita"
gud both

zamane ki sang tarashi ne pathar bana diya.
tanhai ko shayad mera muqadar bana diya.
ankhon mai meri aksar namee si rehti hai.
uski yaad me ise miane  samandar bana diya


Gud one again dear...you write real gud stuff....

Yu kissi ki yad mein aakhon mein nami rehne do,
Iss toote dil mein bhi uski kami ko rehne do,
Dunia ke sitam na tumko bhi jeene denge,
Uske yadon ki parat ko jami hi rehne do.


kahan se laungi usko ko jab woh nahi hoga.
woh koi tasweer nahi jise dekh kar bana diya.
gum-e- jana kabhi hum ko bohot azeez tha.
isi gum ne mere jism ko zahar bana diya
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