talluk..............(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on May 18, 2012, 05:29:02 PM
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                       kar    sako  dil se gar dharkan, judaa tum ..!
                       karna  hans  ke  phir  mujhe   bidaa  tum ..!!

                       hoon  zindaa  jab  talak sataa lo chaahe jitna,
                       baad   maut   ke mere  na  karna   gilaa   tum,

                       hai  aazaadi  buss tumhein hi lafzo.n ki shayad,
                       jab  chaaho jahaan chaho mujhe dena  sadaa  tum,

                       aakhri  saanso.n tak karoon gaa main wafaa tumse,
                       yaqeen   na    ho   to  kabhi  aazmaa  lenaa tum,

                       hai qata-talluk ka rivaaj maashre mein tumhaare,
                       chaaho jab 'khomosh' ko paas bulaa lenaa tum..!!!!!!


                      

                      

                      

                    
                      
                      
                      
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2012, 07:21:29 PM »
bahut achhi peshkash khamosh sahab !


Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2012, 08:11:04 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob K_A ji....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2012, 12:38:12 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2012, 04:04:15 AM »
t khub khamoshji
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2012, 04:32:36 AM »
waah... kya aawaj de hai aapne apne kalaam ko Khamosh Ji, bahut khoob aur ek RAU bhi Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2012, 04:36:07 AM »
BAHUT   KHOOB   KAHA   HAI  .  MUBARAK   HO  .
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2012, 05:54:11 PM »
waah Khamosh sahab
bht khoob kalaam se nawaza h aapne mehfil ko
daad daad daad
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Sanjeev kash
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2012, 05:00:54 AM »
Wah Wah Khamosh g Bahut Khud Kaha Hai
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Quateel Ahmad
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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2012, 07:30:34 PM »
WELL SAID K A!
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2012, 06:29:18 PM »
wah Kya Kehne Bahut Khub Khamosh Ji
Dil Kuch Aisa Hi Parhna Chah Raha Tha
Maza Aa Gaya. Bahut Bahut Khub Janab
Is Khoobsurat Peshkash Pe Dili Daad Aur
Ek Rau Haazir Hai Kabul Farmaayen....
Aur Han Aapko Nahi Lagta Kya Ki
Aakhri Saanso.n Ki Jagaah
Aakhri Saans Theek Rehta...!

Khair

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab

thanx
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«Reply #11 on: May 24, 2012, 07:46:27 PM »
bahut achhi peshkash khamosh sahab !


Intezar !

thanx
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laaiba
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2012, 08:58:57 AM »
waah bohat khoob....
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #13 on: June 01, 2012, 06:36:18 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob K_A ji....!!!

thanx
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