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tamam hui jaati hai

by bekarar on August 19, 2009, 07:15:03 PM

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Quote from: smardia on August 25, 2009, 12:47:12 PM

Bekararji kyu aap ne ye itni dard bhari gazal likhi........
Haalaat padh kar kuchh lines likhne ka man hua so pesh hain

Ay mere khuda ye umra tamaam hui jaati hai
Ruswai meri ab tou sare aam hui jaati hai
Tan-man ki shakti ab khatam hui jaati hai
Bata mere Bhagwaan bata kya mere hisse mai
Thodi khushi bhi tujh se likh nahi jaati hai

bahoot khoob smardia ji!!!

Quote from: smardia on August 25, 2009, 12:07:32 PM

Poojaji aap tou yu he jarre ko aasmaan par bitha rahi hain....
Aap tou khud itna achha likhti hain....Mai kya sara yoindia aap k hunar ka kayal hai....Shukriya...Dhanywad..Poojaji....

Such such he hota hai... aor yah such bhi such hai ki apki likhi kavitaye, shabd bahoot himmat dete hai, sahi rasta dikhate hai aor ek khushi dete hai ki itna acha likhne wala insaan, humare sath likhte hai!!


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