Tamam umar zindagi se dur rahe

by reeta_sharma on July 17, 2008, 01:41:31 PM
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reeta_sharma
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Tamam umar zindagi se dur rahe,
tere khushi ke liye apni khusi se dur rahe.
Ab isse badhkar wafa ki saza kya hoti ki,
tere hokar bhi tujhse dur raheโ€ฆ
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2008, 01:55:55 PM »
wah kaya baat hai Reeta... good lines... apka Yoindia mai sawagat hai...
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2008, 02:02:15 PM »
Quote from: reeta_sharma on July 17, 2008, 01:41:31 PM
Tamam umar zindagi se dur rahe,
tere khushi ke liye apni khusi se dur rahe.
Ab isse badhkar wafa ki saza kya hoti ki,
tere hokar bhi tujhse dur raheโ€ฆ


Nice Sharing.....Welcome to Yoindia Reeta Sharma !!
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reeta_sharma
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2008, 02:44:29 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on July 17, 2008, 01:55:55 PM
wah kaya baat hai Reeta... good lines... apka Yoindia mai sawagat hai...

thnk u pooja
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reeta_sharma
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2008, 02:47:38 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on July 17, 2008, 02:02:15 PM
Nice Sharing.....Welcome to Yoindia Reeta Sharma !!

bahut bahut sukariya
hamari kismat bahut hi acchi he
hame yo mein aate hi (pooja & celmira) frnd mel gayi  happy3
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Sammual
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2008, 03:06:21 PM »
Bahut Acha Likha Hai. Applause
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reeta_sharma
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2008, 03:10:46 PM »
Quote from: Sammual on July 17, 2008, 03:06:21 PM
Bahut Acha Likha Hai. Applause

thnk u sam
(sam means garam masala mein tha woh?) read2
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kiiller_1
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2008, 03:25:09 PM »
Quote from: reeta_sharma on July 17, 2008, 01:41:31 PM
Tamam umar zindagi se dur rahe,
tere khushi ke liye apni khusi se dur rahe.
Ab isse badhkar wafa ki saza kya hoti ki,
tere hokar bhi tujhse dur raheโ€ฆ


gr8
 
del se  icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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reeta_sharma
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2008, 06:29:23 AM »
Quote from: Sammual on July 17, 2008, 03:06:21 PM
Bahut Acha Likha Hai. Applause

thnk u sam
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reeta_sharma
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2008, 06:31:51 AM »
Quote from: kiiller_1 on July 17, 2008, 03:25:09 PM
gr8
 
del se  icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut

thnk u very very much  Grin
kiiller ji aap kis ka katal kar ne
yaha aaye he ?  read2
aap ka naam batana kiiller ji
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punam
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2008, 06:35:53 AM »
Nice sharing Reeta Sharma ji.....welcome to yoindia..
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reeta_sharma
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2008, 07:11:26 AM »
Quote from: punam on July 18, 2008, 06:35:53 AM
Nice sharing Reeta Sharma ji.....welcome to yoindia..

thnk u punam ji
punam hmmmmm nice name
   happy3         Usual Smile
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ANKIT RAO
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«Reply #12 on: July 19, 2008, 12:43:05 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAIN AAPNE REETA JI AAPKA YOINDIA MEIN SWAGATH HAIN.
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reeta_sharma
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«Reply #13 on: July 19, 2008, 03:07:21 PM »
Quote from: ANKIT RAO on July 19, 2008, 12:43:05 PM
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAIN AAPNE REETA JI AAPKA YOINDIA MEIN SWAGATH HAIN.
thnk u ankit ji
aap ka bhaut bahut sukariya
aap ne wel com bhi kiya aur
hamari sayri ki tarif bhi ki
thnk u  Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #14 on: July 20, 2008, 05:22:16 AM »
Bahut hi khoobsurat alfaz, nice sharing reeta, welcome to yoindia Usual Smile
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