**Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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Aj ek ajeeb manzar hai, mood hai dil ka...

Yeh nazm main janta hoon technically khamion bhari hai mager mere dil ki awaz hai...dil se parriega aur dhadkanon se samajhiyega...

Badalon ke uper ek daagzar chand baitha hai,
Mere dil par usse pane ka adhura armaan baitha hai…

Log kehte hai ke main bilawaja rota rehta hoon us’se juda hokar,
Mujhe shaq hai ke meri dhoori se tadapta ghar pe koi insaan baitha hai…

Aur yaaron kehdena usse jisse meri mohobat par shak hai,
Ke dhoor us’se yahan koi behad pareshan baitha hai…

Dukh iss baat ka nahin ke woh chorr gaye mujhe balke iska hai,
Woh aksar mujhe dekh kehte hai ‘woh dekho mere ghumon ka wajahgar baitha hai…’

Toote hue sapnon aur bikhre hue armaanon se sajha hai kafan humara,
Dekho yaaron meri mayat par mere adhure pyaar ka saman baitha hai…

Aj ek darkhwast karta hai ‘Khamosh’ sabhi se,
Kabhi bhi kisi se toot kar mohobat na karna,
Bhale jeena seekhati hai mohobat,
Bhale dilon ko milati hai mohobat,
Bhale khushian phelati hai mohobat,
Bhale ehsaas jagati hai mohobat,
Warna meri tarha khud ko kisi tanhai se sajhi mehfil main paoge,
Yehi sabse kehte hue nazar aoge,
Ke dekho yaaron apke samne ek gunhegaar ashiq baitha hai,
Adhure toote armanon ka khazana baitha hai,
Kuch dafan yaadon ka kabrastan baitha hai,
Bas aur kya likhe ‘Khamosh’ iss dard bhari nazm main,
Itna kehke apni kalam ko aram dena chahta hoon,
Koi hai idhar dhoor yeh nazm sunata,
Tanha sa dukhi shayar,
Jo dil main kisi ko pane ki tamana liya baitha hai…

~Rahim~


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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2010, 07:31:01 PM »

bahut achche Rahim bhai... sach kaha hai aapne agar technical kavita ki baat karein to shayad kuch galtiyaan mil bhi jaayein... par agar unhe andekha karke dil se is kavita ko padha jaaye to isse khoobsurat kavita banna mushkil hi hoga. bahut khoobsurat kavita hai Rahim bhai. Meri bhi ek ajeeb si aadat hai... main kabhi kabhi jab flow me padhta hoon to jo word k spelling galat hote hain apne aap unhe sahi dekh leta hoon aur padhta jata hoon.. tabhi kavitaon ko enjoy kar pata hoon... haan kisi kisi ko dikkat hoti hogi isme par mujhe nahi hoti.. achchi kavita apne aap mujhe padhne k liye majboor karti hai aur sab achcha achcha aut sahi sahi dikhne lagta hai... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... aapki baki kavitaon ki tarah ye bhi bahut pyaari hai... bahut achcha laga isko padhke... shukriya dost itni achchi kavita likhne k liye aur yahan share karne k liye...!!!


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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2010, 08:46:59 PM »

Wah Rahim bhai bahut hi gaherai aur dard bhari kavita pesh kiya aapne.great creation.excellent Hats off to you!


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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2010, 09:05:57 PM »

Gr8 Creation RAhim............
Its vry nyc Yh kuch words punjabi touch hai I understnd .........

Very Very EMotional!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2010, 04:55:48 AM »

Achhi nazm likhi hai Abdul Rahim Bhai. Bahot khoob.


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dead heart

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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2010, 03:02:16 PM »

Shukriya Kapil Dost, Madhu di, Neel jee aur Riyaz jee..

Neel jee, hum toh bas likh rahe the jo dil kehte gaya..ab punjabi touch laga ho toh pata nahin..

Sabhi ka dobara se teh dil se shukriya!


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neelgold

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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2010, 10:38:07 PM »

Areee acHI BAAT HAI AGAR PUNJABI TOUCH hai to yaar im punjabi ........

I dnt hv any issue .....
Maine to khushi main kaha

thnx

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 30, 2010, 03:02:16 PM

Shukriya Kapil Dost, Madhu di, Neel jee aur Riyaz jee..

Neel jee, hum toh bas likh rahe the jo dil kehte gaya..ab punjabi touch laga ho toh pata nahin..

Sabhi ka dobara se teh dil se shukriya!


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2010, 10:41:34 PM »

Bahut khoob Rahim Ji


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dead heart

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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2010, 03:24:51 PM »

Quote from: neelgold on April 30, 2010, 10:38:07 PM

Areee acHI BAAT HAI AGAR PUNJABI TOUCH hai to yaar im punjabi ........

I dnt hv any issue .....
Maine to khushi main kaha

thnx

I know...Thanks...


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dead heart

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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2010, 03:26:39 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 30, 2010, 10:41:34 PM

Bahut khoob Rahim Ji

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Rajesh jee..


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: May 04, 2010, 11:55:40 AM »

Rahim ji.jaise Maths ke teacher math ke paper mein hindi ki galatiyan nahin dekhte vaise hi dil se padhne aur samajhne wale technical mistakes nahin dekhte.
.Aapne sach likha hai bahut umdaa likha hai, aksar aisa sabhi ke saath hota hai.


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dead heart

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Re: **Tamanna dil ki** by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2010, 04:18:03 PM »

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Sarvesh jee dil se parrne ke liye...


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