"" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala':Shayri-E-Dard

nirala

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tamanao ka qatl kiye jate hai ab
has hans ke zahar piye jate hai ab

yun uzdi zindgi veeran si lgti hai
gamo ka koi saya jese mherban si lgti hai

tanhaiyo k sune bag me dard ke ab phool khilte hai
gairon ki tarah dekho apne bhi ab roz milte hai

hasrten asiyane ki kho chuki hai kahi
gulzaar iss dil ki dhadkane ab so chuki hai kahin

kabhi koi tufaa sa bhi uthta hai
bechain sa hokr dil mera andar hi fir kahin ghutt ta hai

qatl kar ke tamanao ka ab dekho
jiye jate h kis qadar ab jiye jate h


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Anshumali

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #1 on: January 02, 2011, 01:16:49 PM »

Quote from: nirala on January 02, 2011, 12:01:36 PM

Very Nice Creation ......... Nirala Ji !

Bahut Khoob ... Janaab ! dili daad li jiye ... !

aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahe aage bhi ... khush rahen ...!

duaaon ke saath ... !


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nirala

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #2 on: January 02, 2011, 02:34:12 PM »

sukriya Anshumaali ji.
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thanx
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brokenbyluv

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #3 on: January 02, 2011, 03:17:17 PM »

Quote from: nirala on January 02, 2011, 12:01:36 PM

Bahut khoob nirala ji bus end mein thodi baaat nhi bani ho sake tou end per dhyan dijiyega..


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nirala

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #4 on: January 02, 2011, 03:50:01 PM »

sukriya Geet ji.
actually mene aaj socha kuch dard bhara likhne ki kosis kar daalun--hehe
aur jaisa ki aapko pta hai mera space jada nhi--aur ye end jabrdasti daala mene.
mera poem to lamba tha. sad5

anyway aage se dhyan rakhunga mai.
sukriya aapka itna dhyan dene ke liye
"
thanx
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brokenbyluv

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #5 on: January 02, 2011, 03:56:37 PM »

ok ji...


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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #6 on: January 02, 2011, 06:54:39 PM »

mast mast likha hai aapne nirala ji too good hai ji


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nirala

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2011, 02:27:16 AM »

dhanyabaad K mam


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manjum

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2011, 10:04:32 AM »

bahut bahut achha Niralaji...

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kya khoob likha hai sirji aapne..


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2011, 07:47:30 AM »

Nice Nirala JI


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nirala

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2011, 01:47:06 PM »

thanx Rishi
sarahne ke liye dhanyabaad.
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thanx
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nirala

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2011, 01:47:41 PM »

thanx Rishi
sarahne ke liye dhanyabaad.
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thanx
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ek_tamanna

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 01:41:59 PM »

dil meiN aag hai ............kalam pe saaf nazar aarahi hai
kahte hain dard bayan nahin hoti lafzoN mein
magar aapki bayan baji achhi hai


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nirala

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2011, 01:47:45 PM »

ji aapka sukriya lekin ye hamare kalam bayani nahi aapki nazren inayat hai bas.
jo aapne pasand kiya
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thanx
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nirala

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Re: "" tamannaon ka qatl kiye jaate hain "" 'nirala'

«Reply #14 on: May 09, 2011, 12:34:04 PM »

Quote from: ek_tamanna on February 03, 2011, 01:41:59 PM

dil meiN aag hai ............kalam pe saaf nazar aarahi hai
kahte hain dard bayan nahin hoti lafzoN mein
magar aapki bayan baji achhi hai

aapka ye cmnt lajawaab hai…
aise cmnt ke kabil nirala nahi


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