~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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I miss her..Alot...!

Teri awaaz sun’ne ko dil tarasta raha,
Main umr bhar bas tanha hi chalta raha..

Koi keh raha tha kay tere saath usne waqt bitaya,
Main toh bas teri yaadon kay sahare hi jeeta raha..

Dil phenk ashiqon kay shikar toh kayi dekhe hai maine,
Main toh teri wafa kay haathon hi qatl hota raha..

Ae Zalim main tujse bahaut zada mohobat karta hoon,
Mera dil har guzarti sans main bas yehi kehta raha..

‘Khamosh’ bikhar gaya hai jabse tu juda hua hai,
Ashkon main jeeta raha, dafan khwabon main sota raha,
Tanha akeli raaton main chup chup ke rota raha..

Mehfilon main rehta hoon main apne labon par muskurahat sajaye,
Sach toh bas itna sa hai;main meri palkon main ashk chupata raha..

Yaaron main umr bhar bas tanha hi chalta raha..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2010, 03:53:20 PM »

ashkon me jeeta raha, dafan khabon me sota raha...
Maa kasam kya line hai yaar..
best lines.---uff yaar kya feelings hai ye 100% sachhi mohabbat krnewala hi likh sakta hai..
Bahut umda peshkas Jug jug jiyo Raheem bhai---meri saari duawayen ab tumhare naam.


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2010, 07:00:18 PM »

aap us-e miss krte h wo bhi aapko krti hogi
nigaho s door hokr milne ki dua krti hogi
keep writting


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: December 04, 2010, 07:13:28 PM »

you all are the best... rahim bhAI jaan i am big fan of you... you just awsm...


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: December 04, 2010, 10:33:02 PM »

Quote from: killbill on December 04, 2010, 03:53:20 PM

Teh dil se apka shukriya dost..
Waqei apka yeh reply, dil choo gaya..
Apka shukriya..
Duaon kay saath dher sari mohobatein..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: December 04, 2010, 10:34:42 PM »

Quote from: yasmeen khan on December 04, 2010, 07:00:18 PM

aap us-e miss krte h wo bhi aapko krti hogi
nigaho s door hokr milne ki dua krti hogi
keep writting

Shukriya Yasmeen jee..!
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: December 04, 2010, 10:38:15 PM »

Quote from: theyash on December 04, 2010, 07:13:28 PM

you all are the best... rahim bhAI jaan i am big fan of you... you just awsm...

Theyash jee, I am touched..
Really, dil choo gaya apka reply..
Mujhe nahin pata tha kay dhoor kahin koi hai jo mera fan hai..
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Usual Smile

Bahaut sari duaein aur mohobatein..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: December 05, 2010, 12:25:55 AM »

Wah! Rahim kamaal ki peshkash hai


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: December 05, 2010, 04:00:39 AM »

shukhe askon se ankhe bhigota raha
kafan udhe armaano me jeeta raha
dekh le ae mehbub mere
tere khayalo me hi tanha chalta raha chalta raha
****
Raheem ji ..
uparwale pr bharosa rakhiye
God bless u..


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2010, 04:57:00 AM »

Bahut dard aur khoobsurat peshkash Rahim bhai.really touched.excellent,great lines by Kb ji.hats off icon_thumleft


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: December 06, 2010, 09:55:49 AM »

Shukriya Rajesh jee..!
Teh dil se shukriya..

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 05, 2010, 12:25:55 AM

Wah! Rahim kamaal ki peshkash hai


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: December 06, 2010, 09:57:08 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on December 05, 2010, 04:57:00 AM

Bahut dard aur khoobsurat peshkash Rahim bhai.really touched.excellent,great lines by Kb ji.hats off icon_thumleft

Shukriya di..!
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #12 on: December 06, 2010, 10:09:00 AM »

Quote from: killbill on December 05, 2010, 04:00:39 AM

shukhe askon se ankhe bhigota raha
kafan udhe armaano me jeeta raha
dekh le ae mehbub mere
tere khayalo me hi tanha chalta raha chalta raha
****
Raheem ji ..
uparwale pr bharosa rakhiye
God bless u..

Ussi par toh bharosa hai mujhe..
Bahaut achi lines..
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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #13 on: December 06, 2010, 10:21:33 AM »

thanx Raheem ---
mai darrta hun ab Ishq ke naam se
dekhe nahi mene kabhi aise deewane
jinke dilon me hariyali ho mohabbat ke jaam se!
ehsaanmand hu uss khuda ka mai kuki--
usne kisi ke dil ko meri dhadkan na banayee
iss jahan me mohabbat bhala kise raas ayeee
****


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Re: ~Tanha chalta raha~ by Rahim

«Reply #14 on: December 07, 2010, 05:47:16 AM »

Killbill jee,
Mohobat toh duniya ka sabse acha ehsaas hai..
mujhe bahaut khushi hai kay maine kuch lamhe iss ehsaas main jeeye hai aur sach bolun toh woh kuch lamhe zindagi kay sabse khubsoorat aur acche lamhon main se the..
Ek baar isme jee kay dekhiyega..apko Jannat sa lagega..!


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