Tanha Hain ........Kaise mitaayen haathon ki lakeer.........

by dolly on April 13, 2005, 03:51:27 AM
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«Reply #165 on: July 03, 2005, 08:48:49 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Teri maasoomiyat par mujhe naaz tha.....
jo tha nahi kal woh aaj tha....

waqt ne aaj kaisi karwat hjai lii...
jiski thi kal main bandagi...
aaj hoon uski main bandini....

kis mukaam par laake tune mujhe choda...
zindagi se door ,maut ki god mein lakar choda.....


wonderfull   dolly.......................  bahot accha  likha  aap  ne................
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«Reply #166 on: July 03, 2005, 01:32:47 PM »
Thank you Waheed....................

tujhe bhulna chahoon magar teri yaad dilse naa jaaye..
mere tanha mann mein naa dhoond tu apne humsafar ko
aansoon ki is leher mein kahin tu beh naa jaaye...

taron ki chahat mein kahin suraj ki kiran nikal naa jaye
jeene ka sahara hai jab teri yadein,to bata yad kaise chali jaaye...

(lil mod)
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Talat
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«Reply #167 on: July 03, 2005, 01:34:52 PM »
Waah waah Dolly ........... kyaa baat hai.........!!!!!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #168 on: July 03, 2005, 01:45:25 PM »
What a fantastic one Dolly ...
Keep going ...
Wanna see more from your side ...


Aakhon ke aaine mein tere dil ka aks hai,
Logo se apne dil ka raaz kaha tak chhupayega Huh?
Wo shaks bhi ajeeb sa zakham de gaya,
Jisse ummeed thi ki mera gum mitaayega ...
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dolly
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«Reply #169 on: July 03, 2005, 01:54:58 PM »
Thanx TALAT DI......N JUST HATE LOVE...........

Wow JHT .....too gud..........

woh kahin aankhein naa padle...
issi darse uske dekhte hi jhuk jaati hain yeh aankhein....
par woh kahin Tanha naa chod jaaye....
issi darse dil mein liye firte hain hum uski yaadein......
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #170 on: July 03, 2005, 01:58:43 PM »
Wah ...
Again a good one Dolly ...
Keep it up ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #171 on: July 03, 2005, 02:01:09 PM »
Thanks a lot Dolly for appreciation ...


Dil pe zakhmo ke nishan bahut gehre lagaa gaye, Wo dost the magar humse dusmani nibhaa gaye,
Khwabo ke siwa shayad kuchh bhi na sochte hum, Wo jaate-jaate apni hakikat bataa gaye,
Chot khakar bhi jisko sambhalte rahe hum,
Apne naam ki khaatir meri hasti mitaa gaye ...
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«Reply #172 on: July 03, 2005, 02:14:30 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Thanks a lot Dolly for appreciation ...


Dil pe zakhmo ke nishan bahut gehre lagaa gaye, Wo dost the magar humse dusmani nibhaa gaye,
Khwabo ke siwa shayad kuchh bhi na sochte hum, Wo jaate-jaate apni hakikat bataa gaye,
Chot khakar bhi jisko sambhalte rahe hum,
Apne naam ki khaatir meri hasti mitaa gaye ...


bahut achhe JHT.......bahut khoob

teri yaadon ko yaad karke hum muskuraate hain....
par inn zakmo ko dekhkar aansoon tapak jaate hain....
hamari umeedon ko tu raund gaya kadmon tale....
hum tere kadomon ke mitti ko apne maathe se lagate hain.......
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #173 on: July 03, 2005, 07:40:56 PM »
Balle Balle ................................................. ................... Dolly nice
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dolly
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«Reply #174 on: July 04, 2005, 01:35:38 PM »
Thanx Naveed....................

humne bhi kisi par aitbaar kiya,
humne bhi ksis ka intezar kiya,

humne bhi khaayi thi kasme,
usne bhi nibhaayi thi rasmein,

humne to mohabbat ka izhaar kiya,
usne bhi to iqraar kiya,

lekin hua kya aisa......

pehna diya ruswaaiyon ka haar,
de diya humein aansuon ka sansar,

aur kuch naa tha,
ye tha ek bewafa ka pyaar.............(nm)
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«Reply #175 on: July 04, 2005, 01:37:33 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
yeh dil ho gaya tumhara,haryaad mein ho tum,
pukarta hai tumhe ,kyun nahi laut aate ho tum,
saansein hain chalti har saans mein ho tum,
Tanha ki Tanhaai hai roti,phir bhi khaamosh ho tum...



dono baithe the jaise bejaan tasveer,
nikle jo lavz,badal hi gayee taqdeer,
koshisein hain mitaane ki inn haathon ki lakeer,
tere bandhan mein bandhe hain,jaise koi zanjeer.


ek pal ka ehsaas bankar aate ho.
doosre hi pal khwab bankar ud jaate ho,
jaante ho ki lagta hai darr tanhaaiyonse,
phir bhi baar baar humein Tanha chod jaate ho(nm)


very good write dolly , lovely  tongue3
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«Reply #176 on: July 04, 2005, 01:40:53 PM »
thank you.............Unicorn gurl............................................. .
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«Reply #177 on: July 04, 2005, 04:55:26 PM »
bohat khoob JHl and Dolly,excellent work both of u Usual Smile
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«Reply #178 on: July 05, 2005, 09:55:12 AM »
Thank you Nidhs............................................ .................
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«Reply #179 on: July 05, 2005, 12:32:04 PM »
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Thanx Naveed....................

humne bhi kisi par aitbaar kiya,
humne bhi ksis ka intezar kiya,

humne bhi khaayi thi kasme,
usne bhi nibhaayi thi rasmein,

humne to mohabbat ka izhaar kiya,
usne bhi to iqraar kiya,

lekin hua kya aisa......

pehna diya ruswaaiyon ka haar,
de diya humein aansuon ka sansar,

aur kuch naa tha,
ye tha ek bewafa ka pyaar.............(nm)


aaja ke teri yaad me dil bekaraar hai
na din ko sukoon hai, na raat me karar hai
dunya kahti hai tumne bhula diya mujhko
mujhe aaj bhi yakeen hai tujh per, aitbaar hai
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