Tanha Hain ........Kaise mitaayen haathon ki lakeer.........

by dolly on April 13, 2005, 03:51:27 AM
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«Reply #240 on: July 16, 2005, 12:58:30 PM »
Nice one JHL...Sunny.....ghundaji................

thanx......Aryaanji.....Nidhiiiiiiiii.......Jhl.. .....Samnoj.............

jab tu saath tha to tere sapno ne rulaaya  ......
kuch waqt beeta to teri judaaine humein rulaaya .....
shaayad ansoon hi meri taqdeer main hain....
jab tu door chala gaya to teri yaadon ne humein rulaaya ....
in ashkon ki keemat tu nahi samjhaa....
chod gaya mujhe ke aaj tere janaaze ne mujhe rulaaya.......
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«Reply #241 on: July 16, 2005, 01:07:13 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
yeh dil ho gaya tumhara,haryaad mein ho tum,
pukarta hai tumhe ,kyun nahi laut aate ho tum,
saansein hain chalti har saans mein ho tum,
Tanha ki Tanhaai hai roti,phir bhi khaamosh ho tum...



dono baithe the jaise bejaan tasveer,
nikle jo lavz,badal hi gayee taqdeer,
koshisein hain mitaane ki inn haathon ki lakeer,
tere bandhan mein bandhe hain,jaise koi zanjeer.


ek pal ka ehsaas bankar aate ho.
doosre hi pal khwab bankar ud jaate ho,
jaante ho ki lagta hai darr tanhaaiyonse,
phir bhi baar baar humein Tanha chod jaate ho(nm)



wow!!!!  wow!!!! this is cool dolly
very beautifully written
bahut achi hai , toh phir yeh finally aaya ya nahi ?? :wink:
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«Reply #242 on: July 16, 2005, 01:09:36 PM »
lolzzzzzzz....Thanx.......unicorn............

aaya naaaaaaa................mujhse bach kar kahan jata.........lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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«Reply #243 on: July 16, 2005, 02:23:21 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Nice one JHL...Sunny.....ghundaji................

thanx......Aryaanji.....Nidhiiiiiiiii.......Jhl.. .....Samnoj.............

jab tu saath tha to tere sapno ne rulaaya  ......
kuch waqt beeta to teri judaaine humein rulaaya .....
shaayad ansoon hi meri taqdeer main hain....
jab tu door chala gaya to teri yaadon ne humein rulaaya ....
in ashkon ki keemat tu nahi samjhaa....
chod gaya mujhe ke aaj tere janaaze ne mujhe rulaaya.......


wah dolly,kya khoob likha hai,last line to bas sad5 .
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«Reply #244 on: July 16, 2005, 02:27:22 PM »
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Quote from: "dolly"
Nice one JHL...Sunny.....ghundaji................

thanx......Aryaanji.....Nidhiiiiiiiii.......Jhl.. .....Samnoj.............

jab tu saath tha to tere sapno ne rulaaya  ......
kuch waqt beeta to teri judaaine humein rulaaya .....
shaayad ansoon hi meri taqdeer main hain....
jab tu door chala gaya to teri yaadon ne humein rulaaya ....
in ashkon ki keemat tu nahi samjhaa....
chod gaya mujhe ke aaj tere janaaze ne mujhe rulaaya.......


wah dolly,kya khoob likha hai,last line to bas sad5 .


thank uuuuu dear Nidhs................
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«Reply #245 on: July 17, 2005, 01:05:17 PM »
teri bewafaai ka karwan hai,
mere armaanon ki numaaish hai.....

waqt se ladte ladte aise zakhmi hue...
zindagi ki bisaat par aaj haar gaye hain....

kal tak thi jism mein aisi jaan
aaj toot raha hai mera badan....

muskuraate honton ko aansoon hai pade peene...
ke jahan mein koi kisis ka pyaar naa cheene......
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«Reply #246 on: July 17, 2005, 01:07:47 PM »
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teri bewafaai ka karwan hai,
mere armaanon ki numaaish hai.....

waqt se ladte ladte aise zakhmi hue...
zindagi ki bisaat par aaj haar gaye hain....

kal tak thi jism mein aisi jaan
aaj toot raha hai mera badan....

muskuraate honton ko aansoon hai pade peene...
ke jahan mein koi kisis ka pyaar naa cheene......

Bohat Umdah Dolly......
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«Reply #247 on: July 17, 2005, 01:13:23 PM »
Thank u Aryaanji................................................. .................
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«Reply #248 on: July 17, 2005, 01:17:31 PM »
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teri bewafaai ka karwan hai,
mere armaanon ki numaaish hai.....

waqt se ladte ladte aise zakhmi hue...
zindagi ki bisaat par aaj haar gaye hain....

kal tak thi jism mein aisi jaan
aaj toot raha hai mera badan....

muskuraate honton ko aansoon hai pade peene...
ke jahan mein koi kisis ka pyaar naa cheene......


wah,kya kehna Usual Smile .

"Toote dil ki fariyaad khaali nahi jaati,
 sacchai ki imaarat yun nahi dheh jaati,
 vishwas se banaya thha jo rishta maine,
 toota jab,to paayi kitni khokhli deewarein thhin."
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«Reply #249 on: July 17, 2005, 01:31:30 PM »
wah wah Nidhi .........very nice........

kyun tujhe maanga kyun ki teri fariyad....
viraan zindagi ko karne chali thi aabad....
socha naa tha mera saath tujhe ganwaara naa hoga.....
aur meri zindagi ka aisa hoga badanjam.......
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«Reply #250 on: July 17, 2005, 01:35:30 PM »
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wah wah Nidhi .........very nice........

kyun tujhe maanga kyun ki teri fariyad....
viraan zindagi ko karne chali thi aabad....
socha naa tha mera saath tujhe ganwaara naa hoga.....
aur meri zindagi ka aisa hoga badanjam.......
thanx dolly and again excellent dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #251 on: July 17, 2005, 01:38:32 PM »
thank u Nidhi............................................ ...................
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«Reply #252 on: July 17, 2005, 01:48:51 PM »
Nice ones Doly ..... and Nidhi ..... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Really good ones !!!
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«Reply #253 on: July 17, 2005, 01:51:18 PM »
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Nice ones Doly ..... and Nidhi ..... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Really good ones !!!
thanx Talat Usual Smile
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«Reply #254 on: July 17, 2005, 02:01:29 PM »
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Nice ones Doly ..... and Nidhi ..... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Really good ones !!!


Thanx Diiiiiiiiiiiiiii.... Usual Smile
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