Tanha Hain ........Kaise mitaayen haathon ki lakeer.........

by dolly on April 13, 2005, 03:51:27 AM
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«Reply #30 on: June 14, 2005, 09:02:08 AM »
bohot bohot khoob dolly ji !!!!!!!!!!!! aap ki shayari ke to hum kayal ho gaye.
lagta hai kuch karna he padega.
lekin itni shikayat kis se kar rahi ho . bata to do lol.

hum bewafa hargiz na the per hum wafa ker na sake
humko mili uski saza hum jo khta ker na sake.

bbye. take care.
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«Reply #31 on: June 14, 2005, 09:06:41 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Thanx ARYAANJI...

kabhi fool to kabhi kaanton par chalaayegi yeh zindagi
gham aur khushi ke saagar chalkayegi ye zindagi

naa jaane kab tak hans hans ke rulaayegi yeh zindagi
adhoori tamanaon aur khwaishon mein simatkar rehjayegi ye zindagi

apno se door gaironse ka saath karayegi yeh zindagi
fir ekdin bheed mein tanha chod jaayegi ye zindagi

kabhi khwaab kabhi haqeeqat bankr samne ayegi ye zindagi
aur inn paanon ko sametkar khatm ho jayegi meri ye zindagi


 Shocked  omg dolly,tum itni senti ho,wow kya baat hai,kya likha hai,chill dear,cool.Bohat khoob,loved it from the bottom of my heart.Excellent.
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«Reply #32 on: June 14, 2005, 11:06:34 AM »
Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
bohot bohot khoob dolly ji !!!!!!!!!!!! aap ki shayari ke to hum kayal ho gaye.
lagta hai kuch karna he padega.
lekin itni shikayat kis se kar rahi ho . bata to do lol.

hum bewafa hargiz na the per hum wafa ker na sake
humko mili uski saza hum jo khta ker na sake.

bbye. take care.


Shukriya ji ..Tanha JI....... Usual Smile

sab kuch karke kehte hain karna padega..
naa jaane kab tak unke bina rehna padega...

intezaar mein hi naa umr guzar jaaye
ke unke liye inn hoton ko seena padega...
judaai ka yeh zehar mujhko peena padega.....

hai unko ye shikaayat ke hum karte hain shikaayat
hai unko ye shikayat ke hum karte hain Mohabbat...


U also Tak care.Bbye.
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dolly
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«Reply #33 on: June 14, 2005, 11:09:53 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "dolly"
Thanx ARYAANJI...

kabhi fool to kabhi kaanton par chalaayegi yeh zindagi
gham aur khushi ke saagar chalkayegi ye zindagi

naa jaane kab tak hans hans ke rulaayegi yeh zindagi
adhoori tamanaon aur khwaishon mein simatkar rehjayegi ye zindagi

apno se door gaironse ka saath karayegi yeh zindagi
fir ekdin bheed mein tanha chod jaayegi ye zindagi

kabhi khwaab kabhi haqeeqat bankr samne ayegi ye zindagi
aur inn paanon ko sametkar khatm ho jayegi meri ye zindagi


 Shocked  omg dolly,tum itni senti ho,wow kya baat hai,kya likha hai,chill dear,cool.Bohat khoob,loved it from the bottom of my heart.Excellent.


WOW Nidhs.....tum itti shocked.....lolz :lol: ........

Thanx Alot........ :D
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«Reply #34 on: June 14, 2005, 01:04:25 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Thanx ARYAANJI...

kabhi fool to kabhi kaanton par chalaayegi yeh zindagi
gham aur khushi ke saagar chalkayegi ye zindagi

naa jaane kab tak hans hans ke rulaayegi yeh zindagi
adhoori tamanaon aur khwaishon mein simatkar rehjayegi ye zindagi

apno se door gaironse ka saath karayegi yeh zindagi
fir ekdin bheed mein tanha chod jaayegi ye zindagi

kabhi khwaab kabhi haqeeqat bankr samne ayegi ye zindagi
aur inn paanon ko sametkar khatm ho jayegi meri ye zindagi

Wah Dolly... kya khoob likha hai aap ne....
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«Reply #35 on: June 15, 2005, 10:33:26 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"
yeh dil ho gaya tumhara,haryaad mein ho tum,
pukarta hai tumhe ,kyun nahi laut aate ho tum,
saansein hain chalti har saans mein ho tum,
Tanha ki Tanhaai hai roti,phir bhi khaamosh ho tum...



dono baithe the jaise bejaan tasveer,
nikle jo lavz,badal hi gayee taqdeer,
koshisein hain mitaane ki inn haathon ki lakeer,
tere bandhan mein bandhe hain,jaise koi zanjeer.


ek pal ka ehsaas bankar aate ho.
doosre hi pal khwab bankar ud jaate ho,
jaante ho ki lagta hai darr tanhaaiyonse,
phir bhi baar baar humein Tanha chod jaate ho(nm)


wahhhhhhhhh dolly bahut khoob.................

keep it up
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«Reply #36 on: June 15, 2005, 10:58:52 AM »
Thanx Aryaanji.......n Khushiii........................................ Usual Smile
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nishita
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«Reply #37 on: June 15, 2005, 12:18:51 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
hum jiske wajood mein khud ko talaashte hain...
woh auron ki baahon ko apnaa pyaar maante hain...

hum jiska saaya ban kar saath chalnaa chahte hain..
woh humaare ehsaas ko bhi thokar maarte hain...
hum jiske kadmon mein phool bichana chahte hain..
woh to humein apne raaste ka kaanta maante hain...

hum unse shikaayat karte jaate hain.....
woh apne har sitam ko wafaa ki chaadar pehnaate hain......



bohat khoob dolly
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Aarzuu
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«Reply #38 on: June 15, 2005, 08:48:26 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
yeh dil ho gaya tumhara,haryaad mein ho tum,
pukarta hai tumhe ,kyun nahi laut aate ho tum,
saansein hain chalti har saans mein ho tum,
Tanha ki Tanhaai hai roti,phir bhi khaamosh ho tum...



dono baithe the jaise bejaan tasveer,
nikle jo lavz,badal hi gayee taqdeer,
koshisein hain mitaane ki inn haathon ki lakeer,
tere bandhan mein bandhe hain,jaise koi zanjeer.


ek pal ka ehsaas bankar aate ho.
doosre hi pal khwab bankar ud jaate ho,
jaante ho ki lagta hai darr tanhaaiyonse,
phir bhi baar baar humein Tanha chod jaate ho(nm)



bahut khoobsurat.........................
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«Reply #39 on: June 16, 2005, 02:35:34 AM »
Fanaa ho jaane mein aitbaar chahiye
Pyar ke liye dil mein bas ehsaas chahiye

Hothon se kehne ki tau zaroorat hi nahi
Bas aankhon mein khamoshi ki aawaaz chahiye

Anjaam ki kab fikr karte hain deewaane
Bas ek khoobsurat sa aaghaaz chahiye

Zindagi ki hadh ke bhi paar pyar hai
Kisi pe marr ke jeene ka andaaz chahiye

Iss duniya ko apne Qadmon mein jhukaa deinge
Dil mein tera pyar, haathon mein haath chahiye
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #40 on: June 16, 2005, 04:54:41 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"
hum jiske wajood mein khud ko talaashte hain...
woh auron ki baahon ko apnaa pyaar maante hain...

hum jiska saaya ban kar saath chalnaa chahte hain..
woh humaare ehsaas ko bhi thokar maarte hain...
hum jiske kadmon mein phool bichana chahte hain..
woh to humein apne raaste ka kaanta maante hain...

hum unse shikaayat karte jaate hain.....
woh apne har sitam ko wafaa ki chaadar pehnaate hain......


wah.............. dolly.......... bahut achha likha hai ...............
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dolly
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«Reply #41 on: June 16, 2005, 10:48:12 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Fanaa ho jaane mein aitbaar chahiye
Pyar ke liye dil mein bas ehsaas chahiye

Hothon se kehne ki tau zaroorat hi nahi
Bas aankhon mein khamoshi ki aawaaz chahiye

Anjaam ki kab fikr karte hain deewaane
Bas ek khoobsurat sa aaghaaz chahiye

Zindagi ki hadh ke bhi paar pyar hai
Kisi pe marr ke jeene ka andaaz chahiye

Iss duniya ko apne Qadmon mein jhukaa deinge
Dil mein tera pyar, haathon mein haath chahiye


wowwwww....ARYAANJI....bahut sach likha  hai....bahut achha......
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dolly
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«Reply #42 on: June 16, 2005, 10:49:32 AM »
Thanx Nishu...Aarzu.....N Khushiii......................................... ...... Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #43 on: June 17, 2005, 01:27:30 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"

wowwwww....ARYAANJI....bahut sach likha  hai....bahut achha......


Shukriya Dolly.....
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dolly
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«Reply #44 on: June 17, 2005, 08:02:34 AM »
Ok Guys....this is my second ever creation in English....pehli waali bahut bakwaas thi..lolzz.....yeh bhi bas likh di hai aisei........ Usual Smile

 Read my eyes,it tells about you,

Understand my feelings,which feels for you,

Club my words,they say sthg to you,

Have a luk at my face,it smiles for you,

Its jus sthg,i wan to share with you.

Need noone with me,but only you,

Take from me,evythg for you,

And my senses jus thinking of you,

Neither its me ,nor its you,


Because you are me and me only you.  
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