Tanha Hain ........Kaise mitaayen haathon ki lakeer.........

by dolly on April 13, 2005, 03:51:27 AM
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #45 on: June 17, 2005, 08:22:32 AM »
yaar bohot achhi likhi hai...............
lekin tum per yakeen nahi hota ki tum itni acchhi poems kaise likh sakti ho.....lolzzzzzzzzzz

anyways nice poem............
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«Reply #46 on: June 17, 2005, 09:19:31 AM »
Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
yaar bohot achhi likhi hai...............
lekin tum per yakeen nahi hota ki tum itni acchhi poems kaise likh sakti ho.....lolzzzzzzzzzz

anyways nice poem............



well....wo to thoda sa ghutno par zor dete to pata chal jaata tumhe.....khair..............Thanx for appreciation....... Usual Smile
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«Reply #47 on: June 17, 2005, 09:21:49 AM »
Ghamon mein doobi,uljhano mein uljhi hui hai,
Jal jal kar mom ki tarah pighli hui hai,
Kisiko ko kya kahein,kya dilaayein hum yakin,
Jab khud ki parchaayi hi aaj dhundli hui hai.
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«Reply #48 on: June 17, 2005, 09:37:05 AM »
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Ghamon mein doobi,uljhano mein uljhi hui hai,
Jal jal kar mom ki tarah pighli hui hai,
Kisiko ko kya kahein,kya dilaayein hum yakin,
Jab khud ki parchaayi hi aaj dhundli hui hai.


wow  wonderful  dolly.............kya  khoob aap ne  kaha..........excellent  work  all  friends...........

youn hi  be-sabab  aankh mein  aansoo  aate  nahi
jaroor  meri  rooh ko kisi  ne  dard  pahuchaya hoga................
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«Reply #49 on: June 17, 2005, 09:40:00 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Ok Guys....this is my second ever creation in English....pehli waali bahut bakwaas thi..lolzz.....yeh bhi bas likh di hai aisei........ Usual Smile

 Read my eyes,it tells about you,

Understand my feelings,which feels for you,

Club my words,they say sthg to you,

Have a luk at my face,it smiles for you,

Its jus sthg,i wan to share with you.

Need noone with me,but only you,

Take from me,evythg for you,

And my senses jus thinking of you,

Neither its me ,nor its you,


Because you are me and me only you.  


Beautiful poem Dolly,bohat acchi hai,hope 2 c more from you.

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Ghamon mein doobi,uljhano mein uljhi hui hai,
Jal jal kar mom ki tarah pighli hui hai,
Kisiko ko kya kahein,kya dilaayein hum yakin,
Jab khud ki parchaayi hi aaj dhundli hui hai


this one is also very nice,very well said.

"is kadar aaj hamein gam hai uska,
 thhamna chaha thha jiska haath,
 zindagi veeraan lagti hai hamein,
 parchaiyon ne choda jabse saath."
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«Reply #50 on: June 17, 2005, 10:32:46 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "dolly"
Ghamon mein doobi,uljhano mein uljhi hui hai,
Jal jal kar mom ki tarah pighli hui hai,
Kisiko ko kya kahein,kya dilaayein hum yakin,
Jab khud ki parchaayi hi aaj dhundli hui hai.


wow  wonderful  dolly.............kya  khoob aap ne  kaha..........excellent  work  all  friends...........

youn hi  be-sabab  aankh mein  aansoo  aate  nahi
jaroor  meri  rooh ko kisi  ne  dard  pahuchaya hoga................


Thanx Waheed.... Usual Smile .....aur sahi keh diya aapne bilkul....
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dolly
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«Reply #51 on: June 17, 2005, 10:36:43 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "dolly"
Ok Guys....this is my second ever creation in English....pehli waali bahut bakwaas thi..lolzz.....yeh bhi bas likh di hai aisei........ Usual Smile

 Read my eyes,it tells about you,

Understand my feelings,which feels for you,

Club my words,they say sthg to you,

Have a luk at my face,it smiles for you,

Its jus sthg,i wan to share with you.

Need noone with me,but only you,

Take from me,evythg for you,

And my senses jus thinking of you,

Neither its me ,nor its you,


Because you are me and me only you.  


Beautiful poem Dolly,bohat acchi hai,hope 2 c more from you.

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Ghamon mein doobi,uljhano mein uljhi hui hai,
Jal jal kar mom ki tarah pighli hui hai,
Kisiko ko kya kahein,kya dilaayein hum yakin,
Jab khud ki parchaayi hi aaj dhundli hui hai


this one is also very nice,very well said.

"is kadar aaj hamein gam hai uska,
 thhamna chaha thha jiska haath,
 zindagi veeraan lagti hai hamein,
 parchaiyon ne choda jabse saath."


Thanx Dear Nidhs..... Usual Smile ............thanx alot....for appreciation..... :D .........

ur words hav really made me happyn vud try to write more.....koshish karoongi zaroor.... Usual Smile

Thanx for otherone also..

N ur one also nice..... Usual Smile
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dolly
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«Reply #52 on: June 17, 2005, 10:38:37 AM »
Zindagi ki shaam hai,gham ka jaam hai,
saharon ki talaash hi zindagi tamaam hai.
tanha dil,khaamosh awaazon ka paigaam hai,
jaankar bhi duniya banti iss dard se anjaan hai.....
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sanya310
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«Reply #53 on: June 17, 2005, 10:50:10 AM »
wah wah dolly...sachmein kya shayri ki hai...main in sab ko save kar ke rakh rahi hoon as collection!!! wonderful shayri ...by everyone...
keep writing dolly!
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dolly
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«Reply #54 on: June 17, 2005, 10:53:18 AM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
wah wah dolly...sachmein kya shayri ki hai...main in sab ko save kar ke rakh rahi hoon as collection!!! wonderful shayri ...by everyone...
keep writing dolly!




Thanx Sani..... :D .......well U r saving all these.....then thats a real reward for me...... Usual Smile ...........main likhoongi...aur tum padna....lolzz...... tongue3

Thanx once again...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #55 on: June 17, 2005, 11:55:07 AM »
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Ghamon mein doobi,uljhano mein uljhi hui hai,
Jal jal kar mom ki tarah pighli hui hai,
Kisiko ko kya kahein,kya dilaayein hum yakin,
Jab khud ki parchaayi hi aaj dhundli hui hai.


wow  wonderful  dolly.............kya  khoob aap ne  kaha..........excellent  work  all  friends...........

youn hi  be-sabab  aankh mein  aansoo  aate  nahi
jaroor  meri  rooh ko kisi  ne  dard  pahuchaya hoga................


Thanx Waheed.... Usual Smile .....aur sahi keh diya aapne bilkul....


ur  welcome  Dolly...................tongue3...........soncha  aap  zajbaat  ko  kuch  aage  badha  doon........... thanx  alot  sanya,...................
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #56 on: June 17, 2005, 12:00:37 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Zindagi ki shaam hai,gham ka jaam hai,
saharon ki talaash hi zindagi tamaam hai.
tanha dil,khaamosh awaazon ka paigaam hai,
jaankar bhi duniya banti iss dard se anjaan hai.....


again    very  nice  dolly...............

tanha  tere shaher  k  mukabil  khada  hai
wah  shaks  jo kaanch  ki tarah toot raha hai.......................nm
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #57 on: June 17, 2005, 12:13:34 PM »
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Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
yaar bohot achhi likhi hai...............
lekin tum per yakeen nahi hota ki tum itni acchhi poems kaise likh sakti ho.....lolzzzzzzzzzz

anyways nice poem............



well....wo to thoda sa ghutno par zor dete to pata chal jaata tumhe.....khair..............Thanx for appreciation....... Usual Smile

hum to ghutno per jor de denge lekin tum kahan jor dogi?Huh???
kaheen bhi to nahi......lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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«Reply #58 on: June 17, 2005, 12:36:03 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Ok Guys....this is my second ever creation in English....pehli waali bahut bakwaas thi..lolzz.....yeh bhi bas likh di hai aisei........ Usual Smile

 Read my eyes,it tells about you,

Understand my feelings,which feels for you,

Club my words,they say sthg to you,

Have a luk at my face,it smiles for you,

Its jus sthg,i wan to share with you.

Need noone with me,but only you,

Take from me,evythg for you,

And my senses jus thinking of you,

Neither its me ,nor its you,


Because you are me and me only you.  

Great Dolly... its beautiful
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #59 on: June 18, 2005, 05:44:08 AM »
jawab nahi aaya abhi tak ..............................................
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