Tanha Hain ........Kaise mitaayen haathon ki lakeer.........

by dolly on April 13, 2005, 03:51:27 AM
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«Reply #60 on: June 18, 2005, 06:10:02 AM »
Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
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Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
yaar bohot achhi likhi hai...............
lekin tum per yakeen nahi hota ki tum itni acchhi poems kaise likh sakti ho.....lolzzzzzzzzzz

anyways nice poem............



well....wo to thoda sa ghutno par zor dete to pata chal jaata tumhe.....khair..............Thanx for appreciation....... Usual Smile

hum to ghutno per jor de denge lekin tum kahan jor dogi?Huh???
kaheen bhi to nahi......lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


hmmm..aapke paas to kam tha naa....maine apnaa de diya.....ab ye kya maaloom tha ke itna kam haiki usse bhi ghutno mein hi daal doge.................
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«Reply #61 on: June 18, 2005, 06:20:17 AM »
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Quote from: "dolly"
Zindagi ki shaam hai,gham ka jaam hai,
saharon ki talaash hi zindagi tamaam hai.
tanha dil,khaamosh awaazon ka paigaam hai,
jaankar bhi duniya banti iss dard se anjaan hai.....


again    very  nice  dolly...............

tanha  tere shaher  k  mukabil  khada  hai
wah  shaks  jo kaanch  ki tarah toot raha hai.......................nm


Thanx Waheed......n nice one........
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«Reply #62 on: June 18, 2005, 06:23:00 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
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Great Dolly... its beautiful[/quote]

Thanx Aryaanji.....thanx alot.....
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«Reply #63 on: June 18, 2005, 07:50:32 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "dolly"
Zindagi ki shaam hai,gham ka jaam hai,
saharon ki talaash hi zindagi tamaam hai.
tanha dil,khaamosh awaazon ka paigaam hai,
jaankar bhi duniya banti iss dard se anjaan hai.....


again    very  nice  dolly...............

tanha  tere shaher  k  mukabil  khada  hai
wah  shaks  jo kaanch  ki tarah toot raha hai.......................nm


Thanx Waheed......n nice one........


thanx  alot.............dolly.........................tongue3
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«Reply #64 on: June 18, 2005, 08:07:29 AM »
ur welcome  Waheed....

ok guys...ye jo post hai maine bahut pehle likhi thi ,infact tab jab i hadnt even joined Yoindia....bt post nahi ki...........aaj kar rahi hoon....me too lazyyyyy.....

khushnaseeb hain woh jinke khaton ka jawab aata hai,
ye dil to to bas yun hi tarasta reh jaata hai,

usoolon ki tarah nibhaate rahe hum jasbaaton ko,
koshsih bhi ki par hata naa sake,raah mein biche kaatonko,

apne dard ke saazo saaman ko ab kahan le jaaon,
isse kis jhooti aasha ki odni pehnaaon,

lahu ka har katra aaj cheekh cheekh kar kehta hai,
naa uthe iss dil mein tamanna koi bas yahi tamanna rakhta hai....
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #65 on: June 18, 2005, 08:30:15 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"
ur welcome  Waheed....

ok guys...ye jo post hai maine bahut pehle likhi thi ,infact tab jab i hadnt even joined Yoindia....bt post nahi ki...........aaj kar rahi hoon....me too lazyyyyy.....

khushnaseeb hain woh jinke khaton ka jawab aata hai,
ye dil to to bas yun hi tarasta reh jaata hai,

usoolon ki tarah nibhaate rahe hum jasbaaton ko,
koshsih bhi ki par hata naa sake,raah mein biche kaatonko,

apne dard ke saazo saaman ko ab kahan le jaaon,
isse kis jhooti aasha ki odni pehnaaon,

lahu ka har katra aaj cheekh cheekh kar kehta hai,
naa uthe iss dil mein tamanna koi bas yahi tamanna rakhta hai....


wah bohot khoob dolly...................

itna dard hai aapke inn words mein............. :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:
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«Reply #66 on: June 18, 2005, 08:42:25 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"
ur welcome  Waheed....

ok guys...ye jo post hai maine bahut pehle likhi thi ,infact tab jab i hadnt even joined Yoindia....bt post nahi ki...........aaj kar rahi hoon....me too lazyyyyy.....

khushnaseeb hain woh jinke khaton ka jawab aata hai,
ye dil to to bas yun hi tarasta reh jaata hai,

usoolon ki tarah nibhaate rahe hum jasbaaton ko,
koshsih bhi ki par hata naa sake,raah mein biche kaatonko,

apne dard ke saazo saaman ko ab kahan le jaaon,
isse kis jhooti aasha ki odni pehnaaon,

lahu ka har katra aaj cheekh cheekh kar kehta hai,
naa uthe iss dil mein tamanna koi bas yahi tamanna rakhta hai....


thanxxxxxxxxx   dolly....................bahot  acchi  ghazal  hai.........very  nice........
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dolly
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«Reply #67 on: June 18, 2005, 10:52:11 AM »
Thanx Tanha n Waheed........................................... ...
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #68 on: June 18, 2005, 11:17:57 AM »
ab ye thanks kis liye kaha............................

tum bhi na apni he dhun mein chalti rehti ho............
lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

don't mind waise tum ker bhi nahi sakti.
lolzzzzzzzzz
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«Reply #69 on: June 18, 2005, 11:28:57 AM »
Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
ab ye thanks kis liye kaha............................

tum bhi na apni he dhun mein chalti rehti ho............
lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

don't mind waise tum ker bhi nahi sakti.
lolzzzzzzzzz


Haan  main  kuch nahi kar sakti..............jo doosre karte hain woh dekhti zaroor hoon..........achhi baat hai aage se thanx nahi kaha kahoongi........kuch bhi nahi kaha kahoongi.........

Kabhi pada sakht,kabhi pada naram,
har pal jhinjhorta raha koi naa koi gham,

naaa jaane haqeeqat thi ya tha koi bhram,
jisli mohabbat ke liye bharte rahe dam,

kabhi naa mil saka uska rehmo-karam,
khud par hi hanste hain,khud par hi rote hain hum,
aye khuda kab hogi teri inaayat,kab hoga mera yeh jeevan khatm.
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #70 on: June 18, 2005, 11:32:53 AM »
bohot khoob wah wah ,
kya baat hai dolly ji...........


yaar tum to mind ker gayi meri baat ko aur haan taane mat maro.

waise tumne mind kaise kiya. kuchh samajh nahi aaya?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh?
lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


nice lines yaar....................
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Tosha
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«Reply #71 on: June 18, 2005, 11:36:38 AM »
aapni hi dhun main is kadar na chalo rahi
san chalne wale musafir ko bhul jayo
aapne dhun main aapno ko na gavao rahi
ki manzil mile to basar tanha ho jaye
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«Reply #72 on: June 18, 2005, 11:38:06 AM »
Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
bohot khoob wah wah ,
kya baat hai dolly ji...........


yaar tum to mind ker gayi meri baat ko aur haan taane mat maro.

waise tumne mind kaise kiya. kuchh samajh nahi aaya?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh?
lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


nice lines yaar....................


aur tum mujhe majboor naa karo ye sab kehne ke liye............mind to kiya hai......kyunki maine apna mind waapis le liya hai..........
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #73 on: June 18, 2005, 11:44:33 AM »
jo cheez ek baar le leta hoon woh main wapas nahi deta kuchh samjhi.............

nahi tum nahi samajh sakogi.........
lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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«Reply #74 on: June 18, 2005, 11:50:17 AM »
nice one Tosha.......pehli baar tumne mere thread mein likha hai.....thanx for that.......... Usual Smile

kisi ko kya payenge kisiko kya khoyenge,
hum akele hain akele hi royenge...
kaante hi kaante hain daaman mein,
bas unn kaaton ko hi sanjoyenge.....
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