tanha hoon main

by anupam saxena on January 12, 2008, 07:07:47 PM
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anupam saxena
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Kitne poochhnewale log aas paas hain mere
phir bhi jaane kyun itna tanha hoon main,

kis raftaar se bhaaga yeh waqt saath mere
hosh hi nahin mujh ko,ab kahan hoon main,

kis kaam ki yeh shohrat, yeh daulat meri
jaante sab hain phir bhi anjaan hoon main.

 
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2008, 12:32:37 AM »
Anupam

Very nice expression of feelings !

Nice work ! Keep it up !
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anupam saxena
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2008, 08:19:56 AM »
Thanks a lot Rajbir,
for reading my poetries and appreciating them.I feel so good being here on this forum,sharing my sentiments with u all.Thanx for being there!
Anupam Saxena
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2008, 08:39:28 AM »
Kitne poochhnewale log aas paas hain mere
phir bhi jaane kyun itna tanha hoon main,

kis raftaar se bhaaga yeh waqt saath mere
hosh hi nahin mujh ko,ab kahan hoon main,

kis kaam ki yeh shohrat, yeh daulat meri
jaante sab hain phir bhi anjaan hoon main.


Wow lovely lines... last two lines... bahut khoob.. daad hazir hai
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2008, 08:42:47 AM »
Yeh hum nahi kehte ki tanha hai raat,
Log kehte hain ki tanha ho aap..
Jab akele baith kar aata hai kuch yaad..
Nahi hota hai jab kisi pe aitbaar..
To kehna padta hai Dilse..
Akeli hai yeh raahein ..
Tanha chale hain..
Jeena bhi tanha hai aur Maut ka to jawaab hi nahi hai !!
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2008, 09:40:43 PM »
bahoot khoob Anupam ji and nice reply Roja!!!

ab tanhai ko kaya naam du
ek saheli se meri yah lagati hai
karati hai baatein mujhse her dum yah
bahoot apni si yah lagati hai

hoti hu main akeli kaha
her roj to mela lagta hai
meri tanhai main atta hai har koi
jaise yaadon ka mela lagta hai

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