~Tanha kargaya~ by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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Yeh nazm unn tamam kay naam jo kisi se yeh puchna chahte hai 'kay mohobat kay badle tu kyun bewaffai kar gaya?
Tu mujhe kyun tanha kar gaya?'

Mere dil ko uske dil se woh kyun juda kar gaya,
Ae janasheen, tu kyun mujhe yun tanha kar gaya..

Jab karna hi tha usse meri zindagi main andhera,
Toh pehle kyun woh iss main savera kar gaya..

Ek musafir se badi shiddat se mohobat ki hai maine,
Par woh musafir wafa kay badle bewaffai kar gaya..

Jo sirf mohobat dikhata raha mager chaha nahin mujhe,
Woh shaks meri zindagi main zindagi ka darja le gaya..

‘Khamosh’ ne kayi nazmon main uski tasveer banayi hai,
Jiske liye kalam meri mohobat main ghazlein likha karti thi,
Woh shaks kalam main ashkon ki sihai bhar kar chala gaya..

Bas yehi ek sawal puchna chahta hoon us’se,
Tu kyun mujhe iss tarha tanha kar gaya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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Re: ~Tanha kargaya~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2010, 04:28:17 PM »

bhai.......ye sawal to har dil kisina kisi se puchna chahta hai..aaj aapne puch kar shayad kai logon k dil ki baat keh di....

bht dard aur taklif nazar aarahi hai inn shabdon me.....

bht hi behtareen peshkash hai ye tumhari......


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Re: ~Tanha kargaya~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2010, 05:31:36 PM »

Bahut khoob rahiim ji...


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Re: ~Tanha kargaya~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2010, 07:51:04 AM »

Rahim Mere Bhai.. Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut Khubsoorat Jazzbaaton se Saji Rachna hai aapki.. Waqai Yeh Sawal Har Kisi ke Zahan Me Rahata hai. aur raha kar Pareshan karta hai.. Aapne ise Mehsoos kiya aur Lafzon me Utara.. Waqai Taareef Ke Qaabil Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: ~Tanha kargaya~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2010, 08:07:07 AM »

mere pas koi jawab anhi ....gar wo mujhse puchh le...

Rahim Bhai...bahut khoob likha hai...

kahin chubh gaya koi kanta mere dil ko..
dekha to unki sadaye rokar kuchh puchh rahi thi~


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Re: ~Tanha kargaya~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2010, 09:04:44 AM »

Bahaut bahaut bahaut shukriya Anamika di, Geet di aur Vikas bhaijan..
Ap sabhi ka teh dil se shukriya..!


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Re: ~Tanha kargaya~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2010, 09:06:38 AM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 03, 2010, 08:07:07 AM

mere pas koi jawab anhi ....gar wo mujhse puchh le...

Rahim Bhai...bahut khoob likha hai...

kahin chubh gaya koi kanta mere dil ko..
dekha to unki sadaye rokar kuchh puchh rahi thi~

Dher sari dard apke inn do lines kay liye..
bahaut bahaut sunder likha hai mere bhai..
Shukriya apka bhi..
Khush rahiye.!


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