~~" TANHA RAAT "~~

by k.shael on August 08, 2008, 07:49:05 AM
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BAHUT ROYI THI MEIN TANHA USS RAAT,

TERE HAATHON SE JAB CHOOTE THE MERE
HAATH,
YAAD KIYE WO PAL JO BITAYE THE TERE
SAATH,

BAHUT ROYI THI MEIN TANHA USS RAAT,

JANE KYUN BAHUT KOSSA KHUD KO USS
RAAT,
KHAFA TUJHSE NAHI KHUD SE THI MEIN
USS RAAT,

BAHUT ROYI THI TANHA MEIN USS RAAT,

KYA TUJHE BEWAFAI KARTE HUE EK BAAR
NAHI AAYI MERI YAAD,
KAISE TU BADAL GAYA TERA DIL KAISE
BADAL GAYE THE HALAT,

BAHUT ROYI THI TANHA MEIN USS RAAT,

CHAH KAR BHI TUJHE BEWAFA KEH NAHI
SAKTI,
KUCH TO WAFA NIBHATA MERE WAFA KE
SAATH,

BAHUT ROYI THI TANHA MEIN USS RAAT,

PAL PAL NIHARA TERI TASVEER KO JAISE
WO BHI HASS RAHI
THI MERI KISMAT PE USS RAAT,SAB SAPNE
MERE TOOT GAYE KAANCH KI TARAH USS
RAAT,

BAHUT ROYI THI TANHA MEIN USS RAAT,

JAISE MERA DIL KAR RAHA THA TERE
BERAHAM DIL SE FARIYAD,
KI BASS KAR AAB AUR NA DARD DE MUJHE
KI INTAHA HO GAYI HAI AAJ RAAT,

BAHUT ROYI THI TANHA MEIN USS RAAT....

BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2008, 07:52:41 AM »
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bahut hi aacha likha hai shael ji







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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2008, 09:11:18 AM »
 Applause Applause
nice creation shally
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k.shael
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2008, 09:22:42 AM »
THANX SO MUCH,
BAADAL JI,
& BEKARAR BROTHER,
SHUKRIYA....
AAP BHI KUCH LIKHTE TO AACHA
LAGTA,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2008, 10:25:27 AM »
BAHUT HI ACCHI POST HAI SHALLY
HAR EK LINE MEIN AAPKE JAZBAAT NAZAR AATE HAIN
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Kanta
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2008, 10:56:28 AM »
han kshal tumhara bhi dard ka poetry muje pasand laga. mein bhi likhugi turant ab.
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ANKIT RAO
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2008, 03:34:06 PM »
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BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAIN APNE K.SHAEL JI.
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2008, 08:46:20 PM »
Beautiful creation Shael Applause as always
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k.shael
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2008, 09:58:08 AM »
THANX SO MUCH,
DIYA JI,
KANTA JI,
ANKIT JI,
& CELMIRA JI,
SHUKRIYA AAPNE KALAM KO PADA
AUR SARAHA....
BY. K.SHAEL
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Kanta
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2008, 03:26:44 PM »
mein shayri try marti kshal

 tanha mein ne rat kati
 mera derd pir bhi na gya
 derd mein dil jala diya
 dil jalaya tu jan chali gayi
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«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2008, 04:21:56 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on August 08, 2008, 07:49:05 AM
BAHUT ROYI THI MEIN TANHA USS RAAT,

TERE HAATHON SE JAB CHOOTE THE MERE
HAATH,
YAAD KIYE WO PAL JO BITAYE THE TERE
SAATH,

BAHUT ROYI THI MEIN TANHA USS RAAT,

BY. K.SHAEL
Fir Badi Der Se aaya durust aaya.
aapki Ye Taweel Nazam Badhiya aur saada va suffaf alfaaz k jiske Ma'ne va Mataaleeb awaam ke jehno va dilo ko dard se Mushaheeda karwaate hai.
waqaee awwaln va aakhiran badhiya kalaam.

Muje To Kalaam Likhana aata hi Nahi..reply shayrana andaaz me kar nahi saktaa..
Lekin aap k liye dua Jaroor Karta Hun K aap ko Is " Raah-e-sukhan " Me  " Manzil-e-Maqsood " Mile.

   
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sweetie2210s
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«Reply #11 on: August 12, 2008, 08:11:17 PM »
It's so heart touching k.shael ji,aisa laga jaise mere hi dard ko aapni lafzon mein piro diya ho..."PAL PAL NIHARA TERI TASVEER KO JAISE
WO BHI HASS RAHI
THI MERI KISMAT PE USS RAAT,SAB SAPNE
MERE TOOT GAYE KAANCH KI TARAH USS
RAAT" these line are so touching.
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Roja
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2008, 02:39:24 AM »
Bahut khoob Shael sis.. Each line touched my heart
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k.shael
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«Reply #13 on: August 14, 2008, 09:38:54 AM »
AACHA LIKHA KANTA,
THANX ASHRAF,SWEETI JI,
& ROZA SIS.
SHUKRIYA....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2008, 11:47:45 AM »
shael jee aap bahut aacha likhte ho aap ke kuch line tao mere dil ko cheer ka likal gyi very nice 1 bat hor aap ka naam shael ha ja shally
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