Tanha Safar

by nishi gahlaut on August 21, 2012, 10:08:14 AM
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Tanha the tanha hain tanha he rah jaynge,
Pyar jisko kiya usko hasil na kar paynge,
Akele aye akele he rah gaye akele he chale jaynge,
Duniya ke in dasturo ko hum chah kar bi na badal paynge,
Heer ranjha ke kahani hum bi phir se dohraynge,
Na band paye hum ek bandhan mein par pyar toh hum nibhaynge,
Yeh saas Rahegi jab tak hum saath tera he change,
Tanha the tanha hain tanha he rah jaynge.
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Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2012, 10:55:20 AM »
Very Good!!! But thoda sad hai!!! End positive karti toh aacha hota!!! Applause Applause Applause
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nishi gahlaut
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2012, 11:04:24 AM »
real life mein sab kuch hamesha positive nhi hota isliye sach he likhna chaheye.. sad5
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mkv
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2012, 03:27:24 PM »
Accha hai.
likhte rahiye..bas yahi kah sakta hun.
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Sps
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2012, 04:11:29 PM »
nice
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soudagar
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2012, 04:44:48 PM »
bahut khub bahut badhiya bahut hi achha likha aapne mubarakbaad...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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suman59
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 04:27:15 PM »
very nice  Thumbs UP
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