Tanha ..tanha...!!

by Talat on December 20, 2007, 11:18:02 AM
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Kyun har shakhs haathon main,
khanjar liye nazar aata hai..
Kyun ajnabi chehron ko dekh,
yeh dil sehem jaata hai.....
Kyun dhoondti hain aankhain, koi
apna, koi meherbaan....
Kyun lagti hai humko,
har dagar tanha, tanha !!

Aasmaan ka rang bhi,
kuch gehra nazar aata hai..
Andheron ko cheerta suraj,
kuch maddham sa pad jata hai...
Rangon se khaali kyun,
lagta hai har gulistan..
Zindagi ka ye safar,
chale hum tanha, tanha !!

Dhuaan dhuaan sa hota,
har manzar nazar aata hai...
hathon main pakde jitna,
paani magar beh jata hai...
Roothe hain hum isse, ya
humse rootha yeh jahan...
Bheed main reh kar aksar
rahe hum tanha, tanha !!
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2007, 07:12:18 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB TALAT..BAYAAN-E-ANDAAZ BAHUT ACHA THA..

KYON AANKHON MEIN AANSU AA GAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...
KAISE KAISE DHOKE KHAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...

JIVAN BHAR SAATH NIBHANE KI,
JISNE KASAME KHAI THI,
KYA USNE WOH KASME NIBHAAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...

TANHA-TANHA SA SAFAR ZINDAGI KA,
GUZAR JAAYE TO BAHUT ACHA,
KITNE ZAKHM DIL PE KHAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HI...

WOH BESHAK HUMEIN BHOOL JAAYE,
KOI GHAM NAHI,
PAR KYA HUM UNHE BHOOL PAAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...
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izzy
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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2007, 08:26:45 PM »
wow talat u've said wat my heart wanted to say from yearz...

nyc 1 yea
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izzy
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2007, 08:27:56 PM »
WOH BESHAK HUMEIN BHOOL JAAYE,
KOI GHAM NAHI,
PAR KYA HUM UNHE BHOOL PAAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...

wow thats the best one...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2007, 10:58:29 PM »
Tallu, Khwaish

AAp dono ne bahut he achcha likha hai !

Daad kabool kijiye !

Khwaish bro,

Tumhari poem se mujhe apna ek all time favorite song yaad aa gaya...tumhare saath share karna chahoonga !

main ye soch kar uske dar se uThaa thaa
ke vo rok legi manaa legi mujhko

havaaoN mein lahraataa aataa thaa daaman
ke daaman pakaDkar biThaa legi mujhko

kadam aise andaaz se uTh rahe the
ke aawaaz dekar bulaa legi mujhko

magar usne rokaa
na usne manaayaa
na daaman hi pakaDaa
na mujhko biThaayaa
na aawaaz hi dii
na waapas bulaayaa
main aahistaa aahistaa baDhtaa hi aayaa
yahaaN tak ke us se judaa ho gayaa main -2
judaa ho gayaa main -4 Crying Crying Crying
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: December 21, 2007, 12:45:34 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on December 20, 2007, 07:12:18 PM
BAHUT KHOOB TALAT..BAYAAN-E-ANDAAZ BAHUT ACHA THA..

KYON AANKHON MEIN AANSU AA GAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...
KAISE KAISE DHOKE KHAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...

JIVAN BHAR SAATH NIBHANE KI,
JISNE KASAME KHAI THI,
KYA USNE WOH KASME NIBHAAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...

TANHA-TANHA SA SAFAR ZINDAGI KA,
GUZAR JAAYE TO BAHUT ACHA,
KITNE ZAKHM DIL PE KHAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HI...

WOH BESHAK HUMEIN BHOOL JAAYE,
KOI GHAM NAHI,
PAR KYA HUM UNHE BHOOL PAAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...



Wow lovely sharing Kwaish ji. Yeh sher mujhe bahut pasand hai.
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2007, 12:47:06 AM »
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Dhuaan dhuaan sa hota,
har manzar nazar aata hai...
hathon main pakde jitna,
paani magar beh jata hai...
Roothe hain hum isse, ya
humse rootha yeh jahan...
Bheed main reh kar aksar
rahe hum tanha, tanha !!

Talat sis... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne. Keep flowing.
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prmchawla
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«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2007, 04:05:35 AM »
very nice so sweet dear
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sapnaa
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2007, 04:31:55 AM »
bahut khub talat,khwaish..aap dono ne kamaal ka likha hai..yeh kuch lines aap dono ke bahut ache the

WOH BESHAK HUMEIN BHOOL JAAYE,
KOI GHAM NAHI,
PAR KYA HUM UNHE BHOOL PAAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...

Dhuaan dhuaan sa hota,
har manzar nazar aata hai...
hathon main pakde jitna,
paani magar beh jata hai...
Roothe hain hum isse, ya
humse rootha yeh jahan...
Bheed main reh kar aksar
rahe hum tanha, tanha !![/b]
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sapnaa
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2007, 04:43:40 AM »
Toot gayi thi neend par,
khwab aaj bhi wahi hai..
door rehte hai hum par,
pyaar aaj bhi wahi hai..
sawaal to badalte reh gaye,
waqt ke saath-saath par,
dil ka jawaab aaj bhi wahi hai..
jaanti hoon,mil nahi sakte par,
aankhon mein intezaar,
aaj bhi wahi hai..
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SHONA
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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2007, 11:56:23 AM »
beautiful one talat..u have left me speechless..too good
khwaish equally good one by you..
very nice sharing of that song rajbir
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aankhain
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2008, 06:42:10 PM »
bohat acha likha ap ny talet g. asel main kya ha na k . mjhy pta nai k sahi sy taref kesy kerty hain werna kafi sari taref kerti. abi to yahi kehn aata ha taref k tor per k ap ny bohat acha likha ha:)=D>
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2008, 10:49:56 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on December 20, 2007, 07:12:18 PM
BAHUT KHOOB TALAT..BAYAAN-E-ANDAAZ BAHUT ACHA THA..

KYON AANKHON MEIN AANSU AA GAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...
KAISE KAISE DHOKE KHAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...

JIVAN BHAR SAATH NIBHANE KI,
JISNE KASAME KHAI THI,
KYA USNE WOH KASME NIBHAAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...

TANHA-TANHA SA SAFAR ZINDAGI KA,
GUZAR JAAYE TO BAHUT ACHA,
KITNE ZAKHM DIL PE KHAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HI...

WOH BESHAK HUMEIN BHOOL JAAYE,
KOI GHAM NAHI,
PAR KYA HUM UNHE BHOOL PAAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...



Thanks Khwaish and a beautiful reply !
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: January 07, 2008, 10:58:28 AM »
Quote from: izzy on December 20, 2007, 08:26:45 PM
wow talat u've said wat my heart wanted to say from yearz...

nyc 1 yea

Thanks a lot Izzy...for liking my poem and relating to it...thanks
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: January 07, 2008, 10:59:05 AM »
Quote from: Rajbir on December 20, 2007, 10:58:29 PM
Tallu, Khwaish

AAp dono ne bahut he achcha likha hai !

Daad kabool kijiye !

Bohot bohot shukriya Rajbir !
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