Tanha ..tanha...!! -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Talat

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«Reply #15 on: January 07, 2008, 10:59:40 AM »

Quote from: Roja on December 21, 2007, 12:47:06 AM

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Dhuaan dhuaan sa hota,
har manzar nazar aata hai...
hathon main pakde jitna,
paani magar beh jata hai...
Roothe hain hum isse, ya
humse rootha yeh jahan...
Bheed main reh kar aksar
rahe hum tanha, tanha !!

Talat sis... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne. Keep flowing.

Thanks a lot Roja sis ...will try !


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Talat

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #16 on: January 07, 2008, 11:00:09 AM »

Quote from: prmchawla on December 21, 2007, 04:05:35 AM

very nice so sweet dear

Thank you so much !


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Talat

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #17 on: January 07, 2008, 11:01:35 AM »

Quote from: sapnaa on December 23, 2007, 04:31:55 AM

bahut khub talat,khwaish..aap dono ne kamaal ka likha hai..yeh kuch lines aap dono ke bahut ache the

WOH BESHAK HUMEIN BHOOL JAAYE,
KOI GHAM NAHI,
PAR KYA HUM UNHE BHOOL PAAYE,
YEH MAT PUCHO TO ACHA HAI...

Dhuaan dhuaan sa hota,
har manzar nazar aata hai...
hathon main pakde jitna,
paani magar beh jata hai...
Roothe hain hum isse, ya
humse rootha yeh jahan...
Bheed main reh kar aksar
rahe hum tanha, tanha !![/b]

Thanks a lot Sapnaa


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Talat

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #18 on: January 07, 2008, 11:02:02 AM »

Quote from: sapnaa on December 23, 2007, 04:43:40 AM

Toot gayi thi neend par,
khwab aaj bhi wahi hai..
door rehte hai hum par,
pyaar aaj bhi wahi hai..
sawaal to badalte reh gaye,
waqt ke saath-saath par,
dil ka jawaab aaj bhi wahi hai..
jaanti hoon,mil nahi sakte par,
aankhon mein intezaar,
aaj bhi wahi hai..

Bohot khoob Sapnaa


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Talat

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #19 on: January 07, 2008, 11:02:47 AM »

Quote from: SHONA on December 28, 2007, 11:56:23 AM

beautiful one talat..u have left me speechless..too good
khwaish equally good one by you..
very nice sharing of that song rajbir

Thank you so much for the compliments Shona !


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Talat

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #20 on: January 07, 2008, 11:03:38 AM »

Quote from: aankhain on January 04, 2008, 06:42:10 PM

bohat acha likha ap ny talet g. asel main kya ha na k . mjhy pta nai k sahi sy taref kesy kerty hain werna kafi sari taref kerti. abi to yahi kehn aata ha taref k tor per k ap ny bohat acha likha ha:)=D>

Thanks a lot Ankhain..aapne yeh likh diya..bas mere liye yahi bohot menaing rakhta hai...thanks


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Shikha12

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #21 on: January 07, 2008, 11:15:15 AM »

Quote from: Talat on December 20, 2007, 11:18:02 AM

Kyun har shakhs haathon main,
khanjar liye nazar aata hai..
Kyun ajnabi chehron ko dekh,
yeh dil sehem jaata hai.....
Kyun dhoondti hain aankhain, koi
apna, koi meherbaan....
Kyun lagti hai humko,
har dagar tanha, tanha !!

Aasmaan ka rang bhi,
kuch gehra nazar aata hai..
Andheron ko cheerta suraj,
kuch maddham sa pad jata hai...
Rangon se khaali kyun,
lagta hai har gulistan..
Zindagi ka ye safar,
chale hum tanha, tanha !!

Dhuaan dhuaan sa hota,
har manzar nazar aata hai...
hathon main pakde jitna,
paani magar beh jata hai...
Roothe hain hum isse, ya
humse rootha yeh jahan...
Bheed main reh kar aksar
rahe hum tanha, tanha !!

Wow.. Its So thoughtful... Talat..
Very well compiled..

Beautiful Replies Khwaish and Sapnaa


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Pooja

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«Reply #22 on: January 11, 2008, 09:15:33 PM »

bahoot khoob Talat, sapna and Khwaish ji...

Nice sharing Veer ji!!!


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anupam saxena

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #23 on: January 13, 2008, 06:13:45 PM »

Talat ,
Aapne to ghazab likha hai....!


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Talat

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #24 on: January 14, 2008, 06:02:58 PM »

Quote from: Shikha12 on January 07, 2008, 11:15:15 AM

Quote from: Talat on December 20, 2007, 11:18:02 AM

Wow.. Its So thoughtful... Talat..
Very well compiled..

Beautiful Replies Khwaish and Sapnaa

Thanks a lot Shikha Usual Smile


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Talat

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #25 on: January 14, 2008, 06:03:39 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 11, 2008, 09:15:33 PM

bahoot khoob Talat, sapna and Khwaish ji...

Nice sharing Veer ji!!!

Thank You Pooja ! Usual Smile


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Talat

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #26 on: January 14, 2008, 06:04:08 PM »

Quote from: anupam saxena on January 13, 2008, 06:13:45 PM

Talat ,
Aapne to ghazab likha hai....!

Bohot bohot shukriya Anupam ki aapko ye poem pasand aayi ! Usual Smile


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Talat

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Re: Tanha ..tanha...!!

«Reply #27 on: September 22, 2008, 06:47:32 PM »

Yoindia


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