-----/// Tanhaa safar baaki haii ///----- Hriday

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sab  kuch  lut  gayaa, kuch  ab bhi magar baaki hai
barbaad  hone  ke  liye  abhi  yeh shahar baaki hai

bujh gaye  hain  chiraag har  taraf to kyaa huwaa
andheron mein roshan  ab  bhi  yeh ghar baaki hai

yeh  mat  soch  lijiye  aap ki bikhar jaayemge hum
tootkar sambhalne  kaa hum mein hunar baaki hai

sab to  loot  liyaa thaa  aapne hamaaraa  pehle hi
tanhaa  zindagi  kaa  sirf  tanhaa  safar  baaki hai

kar nahi paayenge ab mohabbat kisi se  dobaaraa
dil  ke  toot jaane  kaa  ab  tak  woh  dar baaki hai





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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2015, 08:50:22 AM »

 
sab  kuch  lut  gayaa, kuch  ab bhi magar baaki hai
barbaad  hone  ke  liye  abhi  yeh shahar baaki hai

bujh gaye  hain  chiraag har  taraf to kyaa huwaa
andheron mein roshan  ab  bhi  yeh ghar baaki hai

yeh  mat  soch  lijiye  aap ki bikhar jaayemge hum
tootkar sambhalne  kaa hum mein hunar baaki hai

sab to  loot  liyaa thaa  aapne hamaaraa  pehle hi
tanhaa  zindagi  kaa  sirf  tanhaa  safar  baaki hai

kar nahi paayenge ab mohabbat kisi se  dobaaraa
dil  ke  toot jaane  kaa  ab  tak  woh  dar baaki hai





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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2015, 02:17:54 PM »
kyaa kahne wah wah bahut umda
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2015, 06:41:39 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2015, 08:24:21 PM »
Kyaa baat bahut umdah Janaab, dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaad Rau ke saath.
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2015, 05:57:12 AM »
Bahut umda. wah wah wah.
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2015, 02:13:03 AM »
Very good! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2015, 07:14:06 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Srishti Raj ji....!!!


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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2015, 10:01:58 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!


kyaa kahne wah wah bahut umda
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2015, 08:18:49 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Mqadir ji....!!!

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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2015, 05:36:46 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Surindar ji....!!!


Kyaa baat bahut umdah Janaab, dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaad Rau ke saath.
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2015, 05:37:17 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Raji ji....!!!


Bahut umda. wah wah wah.
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2015, 05:38:16 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Pooja ji....!!!


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«Reply #13 on: May 26, 2015, 08:48:05 AM »
It deserves a Rau so given!
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«Reply #14 on: May 26, 2015, 05:02:30 PM »
Thank u sooo much Pooja ji....!!!


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