Tanhaa

by Sonu on July 12, 2004, 02:49:38 AM
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khavaeshey jindgi thi ki tum sath hutey chand taro sey hum ashiyaa ko sajatey, mahaki phijow key saz cheydtey khusi key taraney laboo per thiraktey, khushi key mahull mey hum sham key mehman hutey, bhari mahphil mey hum tanhaa na hutey.
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Saima
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2004, 05:33:39 PM »
Sonu ji.. Jaisa ki maine pehle kaha ! Apkey kalam khoobsoorat hai magar  aap forum mein aise post kartey hain ki padney miein dikkat hoti hai or sara mahul kirkira ho jata hai. Meine aur logo ko bhi aisa apko suggest kartey hue paya hai.
Ummid hai aapko bura naa lage .. or plz aise hi likhtey rahiyega..

Shukriya.
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Sonu
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2004, 05:26:51 AM »
saima ji mey samjhi nahi app keya kheyna chatey hai mujhey bora nahi lageyga ager app khul ker batey key ap kheyna keya chatey ahi or kes forum mey post kerna chahey mujhey actually mey new hu parsu  he meyney loging keya or mujhey peta nahi tha keysey use kertey hai es site ka to agr app khul ker bahya kareyngey to beyhter huga. thanks again for u r apperication
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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2009, 04:41:36 PM »
aap ne bohot khub likha
me samjh sakta hu Thumbs UP
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