Tanhaai ke shor main...

by Pooja on January 18, 2010, 01:43:23 PM
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Apni tanhaai ke shor mai khud ko dhoonda karte hai
khud he khud main ro kar, khud ke ansoo poncha karte hai

samjhate hai khoob ki, her sath ka anjaam judaai he hoga
phir bhi khud ko khud he dhoka diya karte hai

Her subah wo he jhoothi muskaan, her raat wo he suche ansoo
kuch log her pal mar mar kar jiya karte hai

Apni tanhaai ke shor mai khud ko dhoonda karte hai
khud he khud main ro kar, khud ke ansoo poncha karte hai
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2010, 02:11:39 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja ji...

Tanahaiyaan Khamosh hokar bhi SHor karti hai
Raat ke ghor Andhere ko Ashqo se Bhor Karti hai
Tarsa Jaati hai Mann Mea Ak Tufaan sa bhar ke
Kyun yea Dard bankar Hume Har Pal Majboor karti hai

Dard mea likha nahi jata ab... But koshish ki hai !! Same like to see you in Ishq !
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cara
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2010, 02:20:05 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI   POOJA JI....

MERA MUSHKARATA CHEHERA HAR WAQAT LOG JO DEKHA KARTE HAI
WO KYA JAANE MERE JUDAAI KA GUM
APNE TANHAAI KE SHOR MEIN DABA KAR HAM RAKHTE HAI...
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2010, 03:10:38 PM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoobsurat Aur Jazbaaton Se Bharpoor!!!

Bahut Ache Kaashji..Bahut Achi Soch Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Nice One Sophi And Caraji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2010, 03:19:07 PM »
thanks Sophi, Kaash ji, khwaish ji and cara ji...

raat ke andhiare main roshani ka khawab
jeevan ke darpan main, pyaar ka ehsaas
lagati hai jab bhi manjil kareeb apne
aa jaati hai, mere hatho main, mere armaano ki Rakh
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2010, 03:28:57 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja di !
 
Kehti yea Chandani bhi
Ab Dard e tanhai ki dastan
Reh Rahe iss Asmanjas mea
ke Kar Na ab hum koi Khata !!
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riyaz106
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2010, 04:37:47 PM »
Very nice and painful poem. Nice creation Pooja JI.
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2010, 06:02:05 PM »
Nice lines Sophi..

Shukaria Riyaz ji..

Dard ki inthan... khata kar wa jaati hai
jo nahi iske kabil, unhe yaad karwa jaati hai

Zindagi bhi na jaane kaya kaya Mukaam dikhati hai
khoob samjhati hai dhoko ko, Phir bhi yakin kiye jaati hai

na dard bas main, na hi bas main mere armaan
Zindagi unhi kabhi hans kar, kabhi ro kar, Pooja basar kiye jaati hai

dard ki inthan.....
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2010, 06:10:54 PM »
waah pooja ji bahut hi khoob likha hai apne...tooo gud ...Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

sophi ji cara ji kaash ji aap sab ne bhi bahut hi acha likha hai tooo gud....Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2010, 06:12:55 PM »
shukaria BBL dear!!
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #10 on: January 18, 2010, 06:38:37 PM »
Dard ki inteha kuch iss kadar badh gyi hai,
ki koi dawa bhi lagaye tou aram nhi aata,

roz lekar ghumte hai khaali botal,
per pyas bujhane koi jaam nhi lata,

karte tou hai ankho hi ankho mein izhaar,
per hath hamara thamne koi sar-e-aam nhi aata,


aksar suna hai merre yaro logo k alfazo mein,
toota hua dil kisi k kaam nhi aata...
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2010, 06:44:24 PM »
wah wah bahoot khoob BBL DEAR!! Bahoot khoob...

Tota dil khud ke he bas kaam atta hai
dard bad jaaye jab had sem, ashqo ka samunder ka bahata hai

Intzaar ki ghadia bas yahi ek toota dil hai jaane
toot kar bhi jo intzaar kiye jaata hai

Umeend per kahte hai yeh dunia hai kayam...
toot , toot kar bhi, bas issi pe yakin kiye jaata hai..
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kameeney
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«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2010, 06:59:01 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2010, 07:06:35 PM »
thnx pooja ji aur bahut hi acha likha hai apne.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Dil ibabat karta hai kisi ka yaar na chhute,
koi kisi ko chahe dil-o-jan se tou uska pyar na ruthe,
jina bahut dard bhara ho jata hai sathi k bina..
jab tak sanse chalti rahe kisi ka aetbaar na toote......
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: January 18, 2010, 07:09:28 PM »
again good lines BBL Dear!!
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