Tanhaai Ko Gale Laga Raha Hoon

by majid on July 16, 2008, 07:22:49 AM
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majid
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Jalte Hue Dil Ki Aag Ko Kuchh Yun Bujha Raha Hoon.
Ki Tere Ahsason Ke Jaam Bana Bana Ke Pee Raha Hoon.

Har Taraf Phaila Hai Andhera In Judaai Ke Baadalon Se
Aur Aise Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Deep Jala Raha Hoon

Aaj Bhi Yaad Hai Hamen Tera Woh Baarish Mein Bheegna
Bus Yahi Sochkar Aaj Barsaat Ka Lutf Uthha Raha Hoon

Darta Hoon Yun To Main Bhi Koi Dekh Na Le Aankhon Ki Nami
Isiliye Barasti Hui Bundo Ke Saath Aansu Baha Raha Hoon.

Tere Baghair Mumkin Nahin Yun To Zindagi Ko Guzaar Pana
Bus Tujhse Jo Kiya Tha Kabhi Woh Waada Nibha Raha Hoon.

Jaanta Hoon Ab Chalna Hoga Mujhe Tanha Hi Is Safar Mein
Bus Main Hoon Dard Hai Aur Tanhaai Ko Gale Laga Raha Hoon
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Muhammed
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2008, 08:56:30 AM »
Tere Baghair Mumkin Nahin Yun To Zindagi Ko Guzaar Pana
Bus Tujhse Jo Kiya Tha Kabhi Woh Waada Nibha Raha Hoon.

Jaanta Hoon Ab Chalna Hoga Mujhe Tanha Hi Is Safar Mein
Bus Main Hoon Dard Hai Aur Tanhaai Ko Gale Laga Raha Hoon

Bhai Shihaab..Aap Ke Ye Ash'aar Bahot Hi Khoob Hai.,
Hammesha Aapki Post Badhiya Se Badhiya Hoti Hai.
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Sonia01
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2008, 08:59:49 AM »
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Tere Baghair Mumkin Nahin Yun To Zindagi Ko Guzaar Pana
Bus Tujhse Jo Kiya Tha Kabhi Woh Waada Nibha Raha Hoon.

Jaanta Hoon Ab Chalna Hoga Mujhe Tanha Hi Is Safar Mein
Bus Main Hoon Dard Hai Aur Tanhaai Ko Gale Laga Raha Hoon

Superb  Applause well expressed lines Jee...
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punam
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2008, 09:23:18 AM »
wah ji wah shihab ji kya baat hai...
bahut badiya rachna hai...
aap ka kalam se yun barsate raho hum padh ke khush hote rahenge...
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bulbul
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2008, 09:54:56 AM »
wah! Shihab ji! these r the most amazing lines I have ever read... they r too good to be expressed in word...aap k kalam ki to baat hi kuch aur hai
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2008, 10:38:25 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on July 16, 2008, 07:22:49 AM
Jalte Hue Dil Ki Aag Ko Kuchh Yun Bujha Raha Hoon.
Ki Tere Ahsason Ke Jaam Bana Bana Ke Pee Raha Hoon.

Har Taraf Phaila Hai Andhera In Judaai Ke Baadalon Se
Aur Aise Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Deep Jala Raha Hoon

Aaj Bhi Yaad Hai Hamen Tera Woh Baarish Mein Bheegna
Bus Yahi Sochkar Aaj Barsaat Ka Lutf Uthha Raha Hoon

Darta Hoon Yun To Main Bhi Koi Dekh Na Le Aankhon Ki Nami
Isiliye Barasti Hui Bundo Ke Saath Aansu Baha Raha Hoon.

Tere Baghair Mumkin Nahin Yun To Zindagi Ko Guzaar Pana
Bus Tujhse Jo Kiya Tha Kabhi Woh Waada Nibha Raha Hoon.

Jaanta Hoon Ab Chalna Hoga Mujhe Tanha Hi Is Safar Mein
Bus Main Hoon Dard Hai Aur Tanhaai Ko Gale Laga Raha Hoon

shihab bro....khoob likha hai dard hi dard  tearyeyed
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~princess~
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2008, 11:10:37 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on July 16, 2008, 07:22:49 AM
Jalte Hue Dil Ki Aag Ko Kuchh Yun Bujha Raha Hoon.
Ki Tere Ahsason Ke Jaam Bana Bana Ke Pee Raha Hoon.

Har Taraf Phaila Hai Andhera In Judaai Ke Baadalon Se
Aur Aise Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Deep Jala Raha Hoon

Aaj Bhi Yaad Hai Hamen Tera Woh Baarish Mein Bheegna
Bus Yahi Sochkar Aaj Barsaat Ka Lutf Uthha Raha Hoon

Darta Hoon Yun To Main Bhi Koi Dekh Na Le Aankhon Ki Nami
Isiliye Barasti Hui Bundo Ke Saath Aansu Baha Raha Hoon.

Tere Baghair Mumkin Nahin Yun To Zindagi Ko Guzaar Pana
Bus Tujhse Jo Kiya Tha Kabhi Woh Waada Nibha Raha Hoon.

Jaanta Hoon Ab Chalna Hoga Mujhe Tanha Hi Is Safar Mein
Bus Main Hoon Dard Hai Aur Tanhaai Ko Gale Laga Raha Hoon


Jeete raho mere sher...kya likha hai..awesomeeeee
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2008, 05:55:41 AM »
shihab ji bohut hi achi rachna likhi hai aapne
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honeyrose
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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2008, 10:03:43 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on July 16, 2008, 07:22:49 AM
Jalte Hue Dil Ki Aag Ko Kuchh Yun Bujha Raha Hoon.
Ki Tere Ahsason Ke Jaam Bana Bana Ke Pee Raha Hoon.

Har Taraf Phaila Hai Andhera In Judaai Ke Baadalon Se
Aur Aise Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Deep Jala Raha Hoon

Aaj Bhi Yaad Hai Hamen Tera Woh Baarish Mein Bheegna
Bus Yahi Sochkar Aaj Barsaat Ka Lutf Uthha Raha Hoon

Darta Hoon Yun To Main Bhi Koi Dekh Na Le Aankhon Ki Nami
Isiliye Barasti Hui Bundo Ke Saath Aansu Baha Raha Hoon.

Tere Baghair Mumkin Nahin Yun To Zindagi Ko Guzaar Pana
Bus Tujhse Jo Kiya Tha Kabhi Woh Waada Nibha Raha Hoon.

Jaanta Hoon Ab Chalna Hoga Mujhe Tanha Hi Is Safar Mein
Bus Main Hoon Dard Hai Aur Tanhaai Ko Gale Laga Raha Hoon
   Clapping Smiley khoob shihab bohat acha likha hai aapne
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: July 25, 2008, 10:31:22 AM »
Bohat hi khoob Majid miyan...
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Shikha12
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2008, 10:43:52 AM »
Bahut Khoob Shihab ji.. Bahut achha likha hai.. Applause
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syednaami
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«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2008, 03:47:49 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on July 16, 2008, 07:22:49 AM
Jalte Hue Dil Ki Aag Ko Kuchh Yun Bujha Raha Hoon.
Ki Tere Ahsason Ke Jaam Bana Bana Ke Pee Raha Hoon.

.............
Tere Baghair Mumkin Nahin Yun To Zindagi Ko Guzaar Pana
Bus Tujhse Jo Kiya Tha Kabhi Woh Waada Nibha Raha Hoon.

Jaanta Hoon Ab Chalna Hoga Mujhe Tanha Hi Is Safar Mein
Bus Main Hoon Dard Hai Aur Tanhaai Ko Gale Laga Raha Hoon

Wah Shihab baba kya andaaz-e-bayaan hai,,, pasand aaya...


Hum bhi sar-e-zoq men hone lage the mast,,
Khud ki hi chaah men khud ko mita liya..

Ghan ghor ghata ke saaye tale the vyast,,
Subah men bhi andhere ko saathi bana liya..

Tha gumaan yeh ki baarish karegi sust,,
Do aansu jo nikle to jism nahla liya..

Sach baaten jahan ki hui dil men jo paivast,,
Pashaimaan man ko sharam se jhuka liya..

Dekho zara aaj hum bhi pad gaye hain past,,
Koi saathi na mila to tanhai ko gale laga liya..

|Syed Naami|
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Muhammed
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«Reply #12 on: July 28, 2008, 04:06:44 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on July 28, 2008, 03:47:49 AM
Wah Shihab baba kya andaaz-e-bayaan hai,,, pasand aaya...


Sach baaten jahan ki hui dil men jo paivast,,
Pashaimaan man ko sharam se jhuka liya..

Dekho zara aaj hum bhi pad gaye hain past,,
Koi saathi na mila to tanhai ko gale laga liya..

|Syed Naami|

Bhai Syed...Bade Khoob Hai Ye Do Ash'aar aapke.
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syednaami
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«Reply #13 on: July 28, 2008, 02:01:09 PM »
Quote from: Muhammed on July 28, 2008, 04:06:44 AM
Bhai Syed...Bade Khoob Hai Ye Do Ash'aar aapke.


Raza bhai,,,
Aap ki nazr-e-karam pad gayi bas yahi kaafi hai...
Aap ka dil se shukriya ada karta hun...
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Roja
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«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2008, 02:12:06 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on July 16, 2008, 07:22:49 AM
Jalte Hue Dil Ki Aag Ko Kuchh Yun Bujha Raha Hoon.
Ki Tere Ahsason Ke Jaam Bana Bana Ke Pee Raha Hoon.

Har Taraf Phaila Hai Andhera In Judaai Ke Baadalon Se
Aur Aise Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Deep Jala Raha Hoon

Aaj Bhi Yaad Hai Hamen Tera Woh Baarish Mein Bheegna
Bus Yahi Sochkar Aaj Barsaat Ka Lutf Uthha Raha Hoon

Darta Hoon Yun To Main Bhi Koi Dekh Na Le Aankhon Ki Nami
Isiliye Barasti Hui Bundo Ke Saath Aansu Baha Raha Hoon.

Tere Baghair Mumkin Nahin Yun To Zindagi Ko Guzaar Pana
Bus Tujhse Jo Kiya Tha Kabhi Woh Waada Nibha Raha Hoon.

Jaanta Hoon Ab Chalna Hoga Mujhe Tanha Hi Is Safar Mein
Bus Main Hoon Dard Hai Aur Tanhaai Ko Gale Laga Raha Hoon

Wah wah Majid ji bahut khoob  Applause  Applause
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