Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!! -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

_Vicky_

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«Reply #15 on: February 28, 2008, 09:43:25 AM »

Wah Kya Baat Hai TALAT Ji.. Dard Ko Behad khubsoorati se Lafzon Ki Zubaan
Di hai Aapne.. Dil ko Chhoo gai aapki Yeh Rachna.. Daad Kubool Karen..!!

Aur sabhi ne ek se badh kar ek likha Hai.. !!

Vicky


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #16 on: February 28, 2008, 03:34:00 PM »

Quote from: zakhmola on February 28, 2008, 07:10:21 AM

Accha hua mil gaya
Tamhaiyon ka saath
Ek muddat ho gayi thi mujhey
Khud sey miley huye...

Very nice Zakhmola !

Tanhaaiyon ka saath hume achcha laga,
Jo chehra dikhaya apna is zamane ne !


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #17 on: February 28, 2008, 03:34:24 PM »

Quote from: _Vicky_ on February 28, 2008, 09:43:25 AM

Bohot bohot shukriya Vicky !


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #18 on: February 28, 2008, 03:34:47 PM »

Quote from: Bharat on February 28, 2008, 04:01:30 AM

Hi Talat,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai !!!

Pooja,
Very nicely written !!!

Talat,
I have started with 2 lines of yours.

yaadain teri aaj phir aayi hain baar baar
pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

har manzar pe, har mod pe ek ummeed hai
shayad tum kahin mil jaao muze ek baar

yeh sunapan, yeh tanhaai aur rishto ki deeware
hum hai deewar ke is paar aur tum ho us paar

kyun ho muze gile-shikwe, sab kho jane ka
teri chahat ka ehsaas, dil mein hai barkaraar

kuch jawaab tumne diye, kuch zindagi ne
ab hum kismat se kya kare koi istefsaar?

istefsaar - question

Thanks Bharat...Very beautifully written...and I cant tell you how happy I am to see you writing here again Usual Smile

Shayad koi paighaam humaare naam bhi aaye,
Karte rahe har roz tere khat ka intezaar

Na raabta hai logon se na fikr duniya ki
Apne hi masaa'il main rahe hum giraftaar

Apne hi saaye se darne lage hain hum,
Luta hai kuch iss tarah se aitebaar

Milta sukoon, to shayad band ho jaati saansain
Achcha hai nahin aaya kabhi dil ko mere qarar


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #19 on: March 01, 2008, 09:39:03 PM »

Shukriya Majid !


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Just_Hate_Love

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #20 on: March 04, 2008, 02:53:10 PM »

Its awesome Talat ...
I really missed all these things all these days ...
Glad to be back and read you all ...


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Bharat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #21 on: March 05, 2008, 08:10:38 PM »

Talat,
Thanks for the appreciation !


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #22 on: March 06, 2008, 08:54:45 AM »

Thanks a lot JHL...aapne kuch nahin likha ?

You are most welcome Bharat.


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #23 on: March 06, 2008, 08:57:00 AM »

Quote from: majid on March 03, 2008, 07:15:48 AM

bus is khayal se kahin unko dukh na ho.
humse to haal.e.gum bhi sunaya na jaa saka..

tanhaayon ki aag main hum jal gaye..
magar fasla doori ka fir bhi mitaya na jaa saka..

Bohot Khoob Majid..!!

Tanhaayi ne jeene a diya,
Tere pyaar ne marne na diya.
Is tarah hue hum barbaad,
Har din har pal dil mera jala !


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waheed_rose2004

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #24 on: March 06, 2008, 10:07:16 AM »

Quote from: Talat on February 27, 2008, 06:51:47 PM

Bohot khoob Pooja...

Tahaaiyon ka karb sehne ki kuch is tarah aadat hui
Akelapan achcha laga, dekh logon ko, wahshat hui

Dard-o-ghum se jaise jaise hum wabasta hone lage
Rafta rafta har khushi ghar se mere rukhsat hui !

bahot khoob. Talat........ Pooja didi and all......... yeh avatar mein Talat ki pic hai kya Puzzled !

ek gham ki kahani hai,kehte bhi to kya kehte
aur apni zabani hai,,kehte bhi to kya kehte

ek soz e nihani hai kehte bhi to kya kehte
ek unki nishani hai kehte bhi to kya kehte

wo waqt bhi tha jab tum milte the mohabbat se
ye baat purani hai kehte bhi to kya kehte

uthta hai dhuan dil se,hotte hain rawan aansoo
iss aag mein paani hai kehte bhi to kya kehte

hum ishq se baaz aayen?ye baat to aye nassayh
mainey na maani hai kehte bhi to kya kehta ..........nm


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #25 on: March 06, 2008, 10:22:45 AM »

Thanks Waheed.....aur bohot achchi poem share ki, Very Nice !

Shakal mil rahi hai na avtar main Winking


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #26 on: March 07, 2008, 12:55:20 PM »

Kaun hota hai kisi ka, sab apne ghum ke maare hain
Zamane ke thukraye hue, kabhi taqdeer se haare hain
Tanhaaiyon main, iss dard-e-dil ne saath nibhaya hai
Koi nahin jo hota saath, sang aah-o-fughan humare hain !


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Aryaan

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #27 on: March 12, 2008, 06:42:33 PM »

Lajawaab Shayeri Talat..

Baqi sab ne bhi khoob likha..


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #28 on: March 12, 2008, 06:52:07 PM »

Bohot bohot shukriya Aryaan Usual Smile

Aaj itne din baad aapko dekh ke achcha laga ! Usual Smile


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Aryaan

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #29 on: March 12, 2008, 06:58:04 PM »

Aap sabki yaad mujhe yahaan kheench laayi..


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