Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!! -Panna 4:Shayri-E-Dard

harashmahajan

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«Reply #45 on: March 15, 2008, 03:19:16 AM »

Shukriyaa talat ji and aryan ji...

talat wrote:-

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Tanhaaiyon ka karb sehte hue ek umr guzri
Yaadon ke moti sahejte hue ek umar guzri
Jaane zakhm diya kisne, jaane kisne dil toda
Dil ki karchiyan samet te hue ek umr guzri

AnjaaN sii jab Guzri, Thhodi si tab Guzri
Hud se toh tab Guzri,Woh Zind se jab Guzri

Harash


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sarthika

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #46 on: March 15, 2008, 03:21:53 AM »

wah Harsh ji and Talat... bahoot khoob likha!!!!


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harashmahajan

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #47 on: March 15, 2008, 07:29:16 AM »

Shukriya^h sarthika


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Just_Hate_Love

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #48 on: March 17, 2008, 08:00:15 AM »

Good job everyone ...
It was nice time reading all the posts ...
Keep it up ...


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #49 on: March 17, 2008, 02:29:05 PM »

Bohot khoob Pooja...and Harash....!!

Thanks Pooja, Aryaan, Harash, Sarthika and JHL..!!


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #50 on: August 31, 2008, 01:09:07 AM »

Tanhaaiyon ka silsila khatm hota nahin
Pal koi aisa na guzra ki dil rota nahin

Saanson ke sang hi khatm ho shayad ye karb
Zinda rehte koi pal sukoon milta nahin


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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #51 on: August 31, 2008, 02:25:33 AM »

excellent thread......sabhi ne behtreen likha...doston


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #52 on: September 02, 2008, 12:18:23 PM »

Thanks a lot Sanjeev Usual Smile


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abdulqadeer

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #53 on: February 03, 2009, 02:21:48 PM »

Subhan Allah Subhan allah !! Wah wali nahi aah baten kahin hai apne ghazal me !! dard ki eak aisi daastan banadi apne is ghazal ko ke dil halka ho gaya padke aur kasam khuda ki zindagi ki aisi ka-e- yadon ko apne taza kar diya jisko shayad hum bhool gaye the !! subhan subhan allah bahoth umda shayar hain app janab !! allah apko khush rakhe talat ji !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #54 on: February 03, 2009, 05:42:48 PM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 03, 2009, 02:21:48 PM

Qadeer Ji, shukrguzaar hoon aapki jo aapne itni izzat di aur meri is Shayari ko itna pasand kiya...Ye shayari dil ke behad qareeb hai aur jazbaat se bhari hui....Bohot bohot shukriya aapne is shayari ko padha, mehsoos kiya aur saraha notworthy


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ANAAMIKA

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #55 on: February 03, 2009, 07:02:49 PM »

bahut achhi gazal hai.... Clapping Smiley

Per main confused hu aap Celmira hain ya Talat....kya Talat ke upnaam se likhti hain aap...xshma kijiyega main yahan nai hu...aur nahi jaanti kaun kya hai yahan per...

Quote from: Celmira on February 23, 2008, 09:54:12 PM

Yaadain teri aaj phir aayi hain baar baar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Chaandni raaton main hum tum mila karte the
Yunhi pehron baithkar baatain kiya karte the
Yaadon ka karb kar gaya aankhain ashkbaar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Bulaayen kis tarah tumko, kahan tum kho gaye
Jism tadapta hai yahan, rooh saath le gaye
Tees uthti hai, aur utar jaati hai dil ke paar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Ishq ko samjha ibaadat, kya yeh uski saza hai
Zindagi bhi to nahin, phir kya yeh qaza hai
Dil bekas aarzuon ka hai jeeta jaagta mazaar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Yaadain teri aaj phir aayi hain baar baar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Qaza = Maut


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Talat

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Re: Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

«Reply #56 on: February 03, 2009, 07:20:01 PM »

Quote from: ANAAMIKA on February 03, 2009, 07:02:49 PM

bahut achhi gazal hai.... Clapping Smiley

Per main confused hu aap Celmira hain ya Talat....kya Talat ke upnaam se likhti hain aap...xshma kijiyega main yahan nai hu...aur nahi jaanti kaun kya hai yahan per...

Shukriya Anamika Ji,

Aap ka Yoindia pe sawagat hai.

Mera naam Talat hai, aur Celmira mera ID hai Yoindia par. Usual Smile


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