Tanhai

by nishapoddar on May 13, 2005, 06:42:59 PM
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nishapoddar
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tanha kyon mahjsoos karti hun main
sabhi to apney paas hai mere
kisey bheed main dhundti hun main
jab mera saaya tak saath hai mere

koi mujhsey door chala gaya
aisa kyon lagta hai mujhey
is bhari mehfeel main akeli naa reh jaaooon
yeh dar pal pal satata hai mujhey


Yeh meri likhi hui pehli shayari hai , 6 saal pehla likhi thi
kaisi lagi sach batana
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suave
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2005, 06:54:36 PM »
pehli shayeri mein hamesha sudhaar ki gunjaish hoti hai....waise bahut achhi  hai............
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2005, 06:56:21 PM »
Quote from: "nishapoddar"
tanha kyon mahjsoos karti hun main
sabhi to apney paas hai mere
kisey bheed main dhundti hun main
jab mera saaya tak saath hai mere

koi mujhsey door chala gaya
aisa kyon lagta hai mujhey
is bhari mehfeel main akeli naa reh jaaooon
yeh dar pal pal satata hai mujhey


Yeh meri likhi hui pehli shayari hai , 6 saal pehla likhi thi
kaisi lagi sach batana

Bohat acha likha Nisha.... Beautiful...
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2005, 09:14:10 PM »
dil ke rishtey bhi ajeeb hotey hain dor reh kar bhi qareeb hotey hai
meri barbadiyoon ka ghum na karna ye to apney apney naseeb hotey hain
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nishapoddar
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«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2005, 05:09:31 AM »
Thanks Aryan :D
uskey baad to mianey bahut sari likhi hai
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Rashi
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«Reply #5 on: May 14, 2005, 05:33:04 AM »
Hi Nisha dear,
I think when that time u r fall-in-Love.
Just joking Nice Shayari.
Pl. give me latest one
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2005, 05:42:25 AM »
Hey nisha, good now job.......pretty nice.....keep up the good work
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nishapoddar
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2005, 07:29:07 AM »
Hi Rashi
thanks
will post some more written by me
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MøÐëRñ ÐëvDå$
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2005, 07:33:51 AM »
very nice shayrii Usual Smile    .                 .                    .                 .                 .
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bond
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2005, 11:10:12 AM »
Quote from: "nishapoddar"
tanha kyon mahjsoos karti hun main
sabhi to apney paas hai mere
kisey bheed main dhundti hun main
jab mera saaya tak saath hai mere

koi mujhsey door chala gaya
aisa kyon lagta hai mujhey
is bhari mehfeel main akeli naa reh jaaooon
yeh dar pal pal satata hai mujhey


Yeh meri likhi hui pehli shayari hai , 6 saal pehla likhi thi
kaisi lagi sach batana

bahut achha likha hai NISHA..................................
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nishapoddar
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2005, 10:04:08 AM »
Thanks bond............................................. ...................................
 :lol:  :lol:
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vitasta
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«Reply #11 on: May 15, 2005, 10:08:09 AM »
nisha bahut hi achcha likha hai keep up the good work.......
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nishapoddar
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«Reply #12 on: May 15, 2005, 10:12:31 AM »
aapki taarif shayad mujhey utsaah paaye,
aur bhi bahut kuch likha hai humney ummeed hai aapko pasand aaye
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vitasta
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2005, 10:21:27 AM »
aap likhiye aur dil se likhye,
mujhe vishwaas hai ki aap jo bhi likhengi,
mujhe zaroor pasand ayega............
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nishapoddar
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«Reply #14 on: May 16, 2005, 07:14:28 AM »
woh hamarey paas sey guzarey aur hamara haal bhi naa poocha
hum kaisey yakeen maaney ki woh door jaakar roeiy
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