Tanhaiyaan bhi naraaz hain !!!

by Ricky on April 17, 2007, 07:00:21 PM
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After many days.. now about Tanhaiyaan..


    Tanhaiyaan bhi naa mayassar ki hum jee bhar k role,
        Manale gham thora sa, k ansuoN  bhar bhar ke role,

        Ansoon jo bahe sare-rah, kaise hum unhe chippayen..
        Naraaz hai tanhaiyaan ki kaise hum ansuoN ko manaye ..

        Beh jo gaye toh mushkil hoga duniya ko samjhana,
        Mil jo jaye hume tanhai phir tuh ae ansooN zaroor aana ..

        Lekin hai pabandi in ansuoN pe ki aise hi naa chale aana
        Zarra tadapane dena humare jazbo ko tab tum aana !!

        Chalo ae shayar ab nikle hum dhoondne tanhai k ab role..
        Manale gham thora sa, k ansuoN  bhar bhar ke role    [/list]
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    «Reply #1 on: April 17, 2007, 07:08:16 PM »
    bahoot khoob Ricky!!
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    Aryaan
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    «Reply #2 on: April 18, 2007, 11:21:32 AM »
    Good One Ricky...
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    Aryaan
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    «Reply #3 on: April 18, 2007, 11:26:38 AM »
    Khamoshi Ki Aawaaz Suni Hai Tum Ne
    Pal Mein Tanha Kar Jaati Hai...
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    «Reply #4 on: April 18, 2007, 05:34:59 PM »
    Thankyou.. Pooja and Aryaan.
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    «Reply #5 on: April 19, 2007, 02:22:06 PM »
    That's very very Beautiful Ricky...
    Bahut hi achha likha hai... =D> =D>
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    «Reply #6 on: April 23, 2007, 11:07:56 AM »
    Quote from: "Ricky"
    After many days.. now about Tanhaiyaan..


      Tanhaiyaan bhi naa mayassar ki hum jee bhar k role,
          Manale gham thora sa, k ansuoN  bhar bhar ke role,

          Ansoon jo bahe sare-rah, kaise hum unhe chippayen..
          Naraaz hai tanhaiyaan ki kaise hum ansuoN ko manaye ..

          Beh jo gaye toh mushkil hoga duniya ko samjhana,
          Mil jo jaye hume tanhai phir tuh ae ansooN zaroor aana ..

          Lekin hai pabandi in ansuoN pe ki aise hi naa chale aana
          Zarra tadapane dena humare jazbo ko tab tum aana !!

          Chalo ae shayar ab nikle hum dhoondne tanhai k ab role..
          Manale gham thora sa, k ansuoN  bhar bhar ke role      [/list]



      nice vicky bhai nice
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      «Reply #7 on: April 23, 2007, 07:38:35 PM »
      hmm..

      Thanks for the appreciation..

      but just one glitch here..

      That is ..
      Ricky and Vicky are two different person on Yoindia !
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      «Reply #8 on: April 24, 2007, 04:10:32 AM »
      Very Nice & well said ricky Ji

      tanhaiyaon ka safar
      maujudgiyan darshata hai teri
      tu karib na ho mere ,tera ehsash
      tanhaiyon mea puri karata hai kami teri

      na hoti yea tanhaiyan
      tho teri yaadon ko kese yaad karte..
      chupe hai jo annsoo ankho
      kese bayan karte kami teri...
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      «Reply #9 on: April 24, 2007, 11:30:20 AM »
      Quote from: "Ricky"
      After many days.. now about Tanhaiyaan..


        Tanhaiyaan bhi naa mayassar ki hum jee bhar k role,
            Manale gham thora sa, k ansuoN  bhar bhar ke role,

            Ansoon jo bahe sare-rah, kaise hum unhe chippayen..
            Naraaz hai tanhaiyaan ki kaise hum ansuoN ko manaye ..

            Beh jo gaye toh mushkil hoga duniya ko samjhana,
            Mil jo jaye hume tanhai phir tuh ae ansooN zaroor aana ..

            Lekin hai pabandi in ansuoN pe ki aise hi naa chale aana
            Zarra tadapane dena humare jazbo ko tab tum aana !!

            Chalo ae shayar ab nikle hum dhoondne tanhai k ab role..
            Manale gham thora sa, k ansuoN  bhar bhar ke role        [/list]


        Nice one Ricky....9/10
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        «Reply #10 on: April 24, 2007, 11:39:53 AM »
        bahut khoob ......ricky ji ...
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        «Reply #11 on: April 25, 2007, 10:04:30 AM »
        Thankyou..
        Deepika, BS and Ranjana ji !
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        «Reply #12 on: April 25, 2007, 10:25:48 AM »
        बहुत ख़ूब लिखा है आप ने रिक्की जी
        पढ़ के बहुत अकचा लगा ... तन्हाया भी ख़फा हो जाए तो इंसान मौत से भी बेगाना हो जाएगा ... जो कभी मौत ही रूठ जाए तो इंसान ना जाने कहा जाएगा !!
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        «Reply #13 on: April 25, 2007, 06:47:26 PM »
        Just to tell you that there are few people who can understand Hindi but can't read (because of valid reasons). So I think you got the point .. otherwise I too love to type in Hindi.
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        «Reply #14 on: April 25, 2007, 06:53:16 PM »
        nice one ricky.
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