Tanhaiyon Ki Aag:Shayri-E-Dard

Tamanna Azeem

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Palkon pe aanso'on ko sajaya na jaa saka
Usko bhi Dil ka haal bataya na jaa saka,

Zakhmon se choor-choor tha yeh Dil mera
Ek zakham bhi us ko dikhaya na jaa saka,

Jab uski yaad aayi to koshish ke ba-wajood
Aankhon main aanso'on ko chupaya na jaa saka,

Kuch log zindagi main aise bhi aaye hain
Jinko kisi bhi lamhe bhulaya na jaa saka,

Bas is khayaal se kahin usko dukh na ho
Humse to haal-e-ghum bhi sunaya na jaa saka,

Woh muskuraha tha mere ru-ba-ru magar
Chehre ka rang us-se chupaya na jaa saka,

Tanhaiyon ki aag main hum jal gaye
Magar faasla ana ka mitaya na jaa saka!


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honeyrose

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Re: Tanhaiyon Ki Aag

«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2007, 11:53:51 AM »

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Kuch log zindagi main aise bhi aaye hain
Jinko kisi bhi lamhe bhulaya na jaa saka,

Bas is khayaal se kahin usko dukh na ho
Humse to haal-e-ghum bhi sunaya na jaa saka,

Woh muskuraha tha mere ru-ba-ru magar
Chehre ka rang us-se chupaya na jaa saka,

Tanhaiyon ki aag main hum jal gaye
Magar faasla ana ka mitaya na jaa saka!

Tamanna Azeem ji bohat achha likha hai appne Usual Smile


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Azeem Azaad

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Re: Tanhaiyon Ki Aag

«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2007, 01:40:02 PM »

Nice One Tamanna Ji,.


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Re: Tanhaiyon Ki Aag

«Reply #3 on: January 02, 2008, 03:37:24 AM »

great work yaar.

keep it up.

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Re: Tanhaiyon Ki Aag

«Reply #4 on: January 02, 2008, 05:43:03 PM »

Quote from: Tamanna Azeem on December 31, 2007, 06:23:00 AM

BAHUT KHOOB TAMMANA JI...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE


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Tamanna Azeem

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Re: Tanhaiyon Ki Aag

«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2008, 02:09:54 PM »

Thankyou Friends 4 appreciating me.


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baadal102

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Re: Tanhaiyon Ki Aag

«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2008, 03:24:34 PM »

verry good lines tamanna ji

Baadal


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M. Rahman

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Re: Tanhaiyon Ki Aag

«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2008, 04:45:46 PM »

Bahut khoob tamanna ji

Hai kaash kahi aisa hota
Ke do dil hote seene mein
Ek tooth bhi jataa ishk mein to
Takhlif na hoti jeene mein

NM


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banku

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Re: Tanhaiyon Ki Aag

«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2008, 07:13:53 PM »

Bahut Hi Acha hai ji.......


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Re: Tanhaiyon Ki Aag

«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2008, 02:12:53 PM »

Waah Doston Sabne Kamaal ka Likha Hai,.
yunhi Likhyte Rahiye,.


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