tanhayi kaa safar

by Ghazal on August 24, 2005, 10:52:56 AM
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tu jabsey mujhsey door huaa
tanhayi ney mujhy gher liya
tari yaado mein ya dil doob gaya
tu jabsey mujhsey door gaya

tanhayi ka safer hai bohot mushkil
fer bhi many iss safer ko poora kiya
iss safer par hum tanha hi nikal pary hai
her mood per tujhy paany ka intzaar kar rahy hai

tanhaiyo mein khud hi hans rahy hai
tanhayi mein khood hi ro rahy hai
tanhayi key iss aalam mein
tary lootny ka intzaar kar rahy hai

tanhayi mein khud ko aayiny mein dekhar
tera didaar kar rahy hai
janty hai ki ya dhokha hai
fer bhi iss par aatbaar kar rahy hai

tu kab aayga nahi janty
fer bhi intzaar mein nazry bichya bathy hai
tare jaany kay baad
tare intzaar mein tanhayiyo ki duniya basay bathy hai

tanhayi dil mein chubhny lagi hai
tare aany ki khaba nahi mili hai
mari khaboo ki duniya abb jalny lagi hai
tanhayi mari zindgi ban gayi hai

 :!:  sad5  sad5  sad5
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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2005, 03:54:02 PM »
nice ghazal ji!!

tanhai ka Daman tam hi liye tere jane ke baad,
dard pyar ki manzil hai yeh man hi liya tere jane ke baad!
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2005, 05:10:07 PM »
very nice ghazal and meena sis too........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2005, 05:12:51 PM »
very  nice  Ghazal.................Meena..................... ......tongue3
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Ghazal
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2005, 12:24:34 PM »
thx a lot app sab kaa
tareef ka bohot shukriya
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ali
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2005, 09:39:19 PM »
Very nice aap sab ne bahot accha likha hai
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2005, 12:17:15 PM »
wow nice one Gazal n meenu sis
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Ghazal
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2005, 05:47:05 AM »
thx a lot abb sabka & salam 4u thx a lot

khamoshi ka safer
tanhaiyo mein kata hai
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2005, 03:10:45 PM »
shukriya dosto.......and nice one ghazal!!!!!!!

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pagal_nahi_masoom_houn
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2005, 03:40:04 PM »
bohat  khoob ghazal
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Aryaan
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2005, 03:49:27 PM »
Quote from: "Ghazal"
tu jabsey mujhsey door huaa
tanhayi ney mujhy gher liya
tari yaado mein ya dil doob gaya
tu jabsey mujhsey door gaya

tanhayi ka safer hai bohot mushkil
fer bhi many iss safer ko poora kiya
iss safer par hum tanha hi nikal pary hai
her mood per tujhy paany ka intzaar kar rahy hai

tanhaiyo mein khud hi hans rahy hai
tanhayi mein khood hi ro rahy hai
tanhayi key iss aalam mein
tary lootny ka intzaar kar rahy hai

tanhayi mein khud ko aayiny mein dekhar
tera didaar kar rahy hai
janty hai ki ya dhokha hai
fer bhi iss par aatbaar kar rahy hai

tu kab aayga nahi janty
fer bhi intzaar mein nazry bichya bathy hai
tare jaany kay baad
tare intzaar mein tanhayiyo ki duniya basay bathy hai

tanhayi dil mein chubhny lagi hai
tare aany ki khaba nahi mili hai
mari khaboo ki duniya abb jalny lagi hai
tanhayi mari zindgi ban gayi hai

 :!:  sad5  sad5  sad5

Bohat khoob Ghazal......
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Ghazal
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«Reply #11 on: September 06, 2005, 04:17:54 AM »
thx a lot aryaan & meena & masoom jii & salma
ali jii waheed jii app sabka bohot bohot shukariya
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ali
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«Reply #12 on: September 06, 2005, 08:13:03 PM »
Ham jab kabhi uski yado me kho jate hai
Wo bhi baat kare hai to bura sa lage hai
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Ghazal
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«Reply #13 on: September 17, 2005, 07:22:06 AM »
very nice ali jii

zindgi sey bas itna chahate hai
doo pal unka sath chahate hai
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ali
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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2005, 09:04:49 PM »
Sath to wo dede magar
Zamane de darta hai uska kya
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