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~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

by dead heart on June 23, 2010, 11:15:13 PM

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Bahaut dinn baad kuch likha hai..Jo dil keh raha tha woh likha hai...Jitni achi tarha likhna chaha utna toh nahin likh paya mager dil ko jaise maine kagaz par utar lia...dil ke ashkon ko nichorr dia...

Teri yaad main jeeta hoon teri yaad main marta hoon,
Dekh tujh bin main kitna adhura mehsoos karta hoon…

Ik arsa hogaya tujhe apni baahon main liye janam,
Teri baahon ki thandak ko main fizaon main dhundta rehta hoon…

Tu saath nahin hoti toh mujhe zindagi se nafrat si hoti hai,
Tere saanson ki mahek ke liye main bahaut tarasta rehta hoon…

Janta hoon tu meri hai mager phir bhi saath nahin,
Tujh bin main bahaut tanha mehsoos karta hoon…

‘Zalim’ se guzarish hai ke pehchan le ‘Khamosh’ ki mohobat ko,
Tere bina har lamha main khud ander hi ander marte rehta hoon…

~Rahim~


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2010, 08:54:38 AM »

Wah wah Rahim bhai bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent creation Hats off to you!


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2010, 09:03:18 AM »

Bahut khoob Rahim Ji


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dead heart

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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2010, 06:19:07 PM »

Shukriya Madhu di aur Rajesh jee


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2010, 06:21:18 PM »

nice rahim ji...


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dead heart

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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2010, 06:25:34 PM »

Shukriya Geet jee


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2010, 12:33:14 PM »

Aaye Haye Kya baat Hai Rahim Bhai.. pahale sher hi Qatl Kar gaya Yaaaaaaar.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash hai.. Dard Ko lafzon Ko Behad khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob dost..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2010, 10:42:00 PM »

Shukriya Shihab bhaijan aur Vikas bhaijan...

Samaj lo dil nikal kar saja dia hai...

Khush rahiye...

Allah karam kare...


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2010, 12:32:33 AM »

Dard se bharpoor aapki ye kavita humein bahut pasand aayi Rahim bhai... bahut achcha likha hai....!!!


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2010, 01:03:53 PM »

Shukriya Kapil Dost..bahaut bahaut shukriya!


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2010, 08:43:52 PM »

Tere bina har lamha main khud ander hi ander marte rehta hoon…

Bohat Khoob Rahim..


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: June 27, 2010, 06:21:55 PM »

Shukriya Aryaan jee


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #12 on: June 27, 2010, 08:29:13 PM »

Ye Dard Ye Bechaini, Isi Ka Naam To Mohabbat Hai,.
Sehte Jaao, Sab Kuch Tum Jahaan Tak Tumme Taaqat Hai,.

Bohat Dard Bhara kalaam Hai ye Raheem Bhai,.


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #13 on: June 27, 2010, 08:31:28 PM »

Shukriya mere bhai mere dost...hmm haan sehna hi parrega...mohobat jo ki hai..
hmm haan dard...mohobat ka dusra naam hai yeh...


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Re: ~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #14 on: June 30, 2010, 03:16:27 PM »

ye bechaini, ye taqleef, khubsurti k bina kahan hoti hai?
ye muhabbat ka dard naak rang hai: judai, dard se muhabbat rawaan hoti hai~~~

muhje rona aya bhaijaan, ye padr k... good words

Azeem, missed you when I read this "ji"