~Tarasta rehta hoon~ by Rahim

by dead heart on June 23, 2010, 11:15:13 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 01, 2010, 01:09:53 PM »
Dukh hua Sidra apa ke apko rona agaya yeh parr kar...hmm mager yeh nishani hai ke apne dil se mehsoos kiya jo maine likha...Teh dil shukar guzar hoon apka..
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«Reply #16 on: July 03, 2010, 03:27:20 PM »
bahut khub rahim ji..

teri yaad mein jeeta hu, teri yaad mein marta hu.
per khud ki mohabbat ki, tohmat se darta hu.
khub pyaar kiya humne bhi, aapni hi janam se.
us pyaar ke ashqo ko, ghut ghut ke peeta hu.
ab yaad hai sirf unki, aur yadon ke saaye mein,
main apni likhi kitab, chupke se padta hu,
teri yaad mein jeeta hu teri yaad mein marta hu.
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«Reply #17 on: July 04, 2010, 12:59:56 AM »
Shukriya...Apne bhi acha likha hai...
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«Reply #18 on: July 04, 2010, 04:57:24 AM »
rahim ji meri dost ne kaha tha yahan shayri ka jawab shayri se hota hai...

tarasta rehta hu aaj unki ek jhalak paane ko,
marta rerhta hu main unper mar jaane ko,
koi to mere bhi dard ko samaje e bhondu,
keh de jaaker unhe mere paas aane ko.....
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«Reply #19 on: July 07, 2010, 02:02:00 PM »
Haan sahi kaha tha uss dost ne..

Bahaut khoob likha hai apne...
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«Reply #20 on: July 07, 2010, 02:14:19 PM »
Dil k dard ko b-khoobi aapne kagaz par utaara hai....
Dad kabool ho Rahim-bhai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: July 07, 2010, 05:15:09 PM »
Daad kabool hai Koyal di..Teh dil se shukriya apna waqt dene ka...
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