tare shumar karte ho....... mann

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Tamaam raat tum tare shumaar karte ho.
Meri tarah tum bhi kisi se  pyar karte ho?

Kitna samjhaya ke iska tajurba hai mujhe,
Tadap  tadap ke ab fariyaad  karte ho!!

Tum mere yaar ho yaari bhi nibhao to zara,
Kyon bhari mahfil main sharmsaar karte ho?

Bhale hi kar to lia tark-e-taalluk mujhse,
Aaj bhi dil ko mere beqaraar karte ho.

Teer-o-talwaar se bhi itne zakhm lagte nahin,
Tum nigahon se bade gahre waar karte ho.

Tumhe ham jab bhi sunate hain hal-e-dil apna,
Kya  meri baat  par tum aitwaar  karte ho?

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2014, 11:36:37 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Khoob Mann Ji!!
Behatareen peshkash
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2014, 11:41:26 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya nakulji....

sath rahiye...
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«Reply #3 on: August 11, 2014, 12:00:57 PM »
Kitna samjhaya ke iska tajurba hai mujhe,
Tadap  tadap ke ab fariyaad  karte ho!!

Bahut umda..
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2014, 12:36:52 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on August 11, 2014, 11:16:13 AM
Tamaam raat tum tare shumaar karte ho.
Meri tarah tum bhi kisi se  pyar karte ho?

Kitna samjhaya ke iska tajurba hai mujhe,
Tadap  tadap ke ab fariyaad  karte ho!!

Tum mere yaar ho yaari bhi nibhao to zara,
Kyon bhari mahfil main sharmsaar karte ho?

Bhale hi kar to tark-e-taalluk mujhse,
Aaj bhi dil ko mere beqaraar karte ho.

Teer-o-talwaar se bhi itne zakhm lagte nahin,
Tum nigahon se bade gahre waar karte ho.

Tumhe ham jab bhi sunate hain hal-e-dil apna,
Kya  meri baat  par tum aitbaar  karte ho?

Mann


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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2014, 12:52:05 PM »
वाह....बहुत खूब.....
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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2014, 01:16:06 PM »
Bahut khoobsurat peshkash Mann ji.
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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2014, 02:10:32 PM »
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Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai. Dheron Daad.
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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2014, 02:39:39 PM »
waah waah
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2014, 08:36:43 PM »
Waah waah waah kyaa baat hai, bahut umdah.
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«Reply #10 on: August 12, 2014, 03:26:32 AM »
bahut shukriya saavanji
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«Reply #11 on: August 12, 2014, 05:59:56 AM »
bahut shukriya shebaji.......

sath rahiyrga......
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«Reply #12 on: August 12, 2014, 09:49:33 AM »

Mann Jee Aadaab... !

Bahut khoob jee bade hi umdaa aur khoobsurat khayaalaat ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne...
behad khoob sher huye haiN sabhi...

In khoob ashaaroN par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

HaaN aapke kafiyoN meiN kuch galatiyaaN huyi hai jo Shebaa Sahibaa ne point kiya hai...

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #13 on: August 12, 2014, 10:41:23 AM »

Tamaam raat tum tare shumaar karte ho.
Meri tarah tum bhi kisi se  pyar karte ho?

Kitna samjhaya ke iska tajurba hai mujhe,
Tadap  tadap ke ab fariyaad  karte ho!!

Tum mere yaar ho yaari bhi nibhao to zara,
Kyon bhari mahfil main sharmsaar karte ho?

Bhale hi kar to tark-e-taalluk mujhse,
Aaj bhi dil ko mere beqaraar karte ho.

Teer-o-talwaar se bhi itne zakhm lagte nahin,
Tum nigahon se bade gahre waar karte ho.

Tumhe ham jab bhi sunate hain hal-e-dil apna,
Kya  meri baat  par tum aitwaar  karte ho?
bahut 2 khooooob
dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #14 on: August 12, 2014, 11:19:04 AM »
bahut shukriya meetji....

sath dete rahiye....
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