tareef ke pehlu me SHIKAYAT na hoti...!!

by ghayal_shayar on November 21, 2012, 05:44:40 AM
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Humse gar aaj unhe adawat* na hoti,
Tareef ke pehlu me shikayat na hoti...

*chiddh, dushmani....

Kab ki ruk gayin hoti ye saansen, gar,
Naza* ko teri khushbu ki chahat na hoti...

*aakhiri saans.

Sochte hain ki kasie jeete hum yahaan,
Tujhme pighalne ki gar hasrat na hoti..

Bewafa gar jo hota tera ye aashiq jaana,
Meri shayri ko mili ye sohrat na hoti...

"Taish" ko tujhse jo mohabbat na hoti,
To jannat bhi mere liye jannat na hoti...

Gar mujhe teri is kadar chaahat na hoti,
To qayamat se pehle ye qayamat na hoti.
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«Reply #1 on: November 21, 2012, 06:09:49 AM »
waah bahut sunder ek rau aapkaa huaa qubool karen
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«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2012, 07:59:13 AM »
Humse gar aaj unhe adawat* na hoti,
Tareef ke pehlu me shikayat na hoti...

*chiddh, dushmani....

Kab ki ruk gayin hoti ye saansen, gar,
Naza* ko teri khushbu ki chahat na hoti...

*aakhiri saans.

Sochte hain ki kasie jeete hum yahaan,
Tujhme pighalne ki gar hasrat na hoti..

Bewafa gar jo hota tera ye aashiq jaana,
Meri shayri ko mili ye sohrat na hoti...

"Taish" ko tujhse jo mohabbat na hoti,
To jannat bhi mere liye jannat na hoti...

Gar mujhe teri is kadar chaahat na hoti,
To qayamat se pehle ye qayamat na hoti.

zabardast taish ji
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«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2012, 08:18:58 AM »
bahut khoob taish ji
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«Reply #4 on: November 21, 2012, 08:45:18 AM »
waah bahut sunder ek rau aapkaa huaa qubool karen

is tareef aur rau dono ke liye bahut bahut shukriya sir ji, bas yunhi aage v aashirwaad dete raheN...
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«Reply #5 on: November 21, 2012, 08:59:40 AM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause :clap:ek Rau banta hai Taish bhai
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«Reply #6 on: November 21, 2012, 09:27:02 AM »
bahoot bahoot sundar
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«Reply #7 on: November 21, 2012, 10:47:02 AM »
 waah, bada khoobsurat andaaz hai is adaawat, shikayat aur muhabbat bhari Ghazal ka...Mubarak ho Taish sb!
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«Reply #8 on: November 21, 2012, 10:51:38 AM »
waah... waaah.....bahut khoob......
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: November 21, 2012, 01:41:04 PM »
zabardast taish ji

tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya sahal ji, yuNhi aati raheN ji...
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«Reply #10 on: November 21, 2012, 02:42:30 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaaaaah kya baath hai taish ji
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«Reply #11 on: November 21, 2012, 05:03:01 PM »
bahut khoob taish ji

bahut bahut shukriya prashad sahab...
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«Reply #12 on: November 21, 2012, 07:39:48 PM »
Bahut Umda kalaam Taish jee
bahut gahraayee bharee is kalaam par meri dil daad qubool farmaayen
2nd sher..bahut bahut bhaaya mujhe
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«Reply #13 on: November 22, 2012, 12:51:03 AM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause :clap:ek Rau banta hai Taish bhai


shukriya bahukhandi sahab, tareef ka bhi aur rau ka bhi, bas duaa rahegi ki aage bhi aapka saath aur aapki hausla afzaayi yuNhi milte raheN...
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«Reply #14 on: November 22, 2012, 01:06:05 AM »
Bohut khoob taish jee , umda kalaam hai daad qubool karen
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