!! Teergi...... Priya.. !!

by manzil-e-ishq on December 05, 2012, 06:21:10 AM
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    bahut teergi thi ghar me na aahate aayi
    jab bhi aayi unhe nazar bas sarhadien aayi
 
    naye shehar me naye log, naya thikhan tha mera
    par wahi haal tha jab tanha si raate aayi
    
    har ek chehre pe hai chehra, kaise pehchane sahib,
    sada hi toot kar jab meri sab kurbate aayi
    
    kabhi kabhi mere lab pe chala aata hai tera naam
    magar na laut ke ek pal ko teri wafayein aayi
    

    unhi se hai khafa or un hi pe fida manzil
    kahe kya zindagi kis mod par le ke teri adayien aayi...
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«Reply #1 on: December 05, 2012, 06:36:04 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #2 on: December 05, 2012, 06:43:24 AM »


    bahut teergi thi ghar me na aahate aayi
    jab bhi aayi unhe nazar bas sarhadien aayi
 
    naye shehar me naye log, naya thikhan tha mera
    par wahi haal tha jab tanha si raate aayi
     
    har ek chehre pe hai chehra, kaise pehchane sahib,
    sada hi toot kar jab meri sab kurbate aayi
     
    kabhi kabhi mere lab pe chala aata hai tera naam
    magar na laut ke ek pal ko teri wafayein aayi
     

    unhi se hai khafa or un hi pe fida manzil
    kahe kya zindagi kis mod par le ke teri adayien aayi...

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«Reply #3 on: December 05, 2012, 06:48:14 AM »
very nice priyaa ji kahaan thee ab tak bahut dino baa aayee ho God bless you
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«Reply #4 on: December 05, 2012, 06:50:05 AM »


    bahut teergi thi ghar me na aahate aayi
    jab bhi aayi unhe nazar bas sarhadien aayi
 
    naye shehar me naye log, naya thikhan tha mera
    par wahi haal tha jab tanha si raate aayi
     
    har ek chehre pe hai chehra, kaise pehchane sahib,
    sada hi toot kar jab meri sab kurbate aayi
     
    kabhi kabhi mere lab pe chala aata hai tera naam
    magar na laut ke ek pal ko teri wafayein aayi
     

    unhi se hai khafa or un hi pe fida manzil
    kahe kya zindagi kis mod par le ke teri adayien aayi...


Bahut bahut khoob Priya jee  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: December 05, 2012, 07:04:14 AM »


    bahut teergi thi ghar me na aahate aayi
    jab bhi aayi unhe nazar bas sarhadien aayi
 
    naye shehar me naye log, naya thikhan tha mera
    par wahi haal tha jab tanha si raate aayi
     
    har ek chehre pe hai chehra, kaise pehchane sahib,
    sada hi toot kar jab meri sab kurbate aayi
     
    kabhi kabhi mere lab pe chala aata hai tera naam
    magar na laut ke ek pal ko teri wafayein aayi
     

    unhi se hai khafa or un hi pe fida manzil
    kahe kya zindagi kis mod par le ke teri adayien aayi...



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«Reply #6 on: December 05, 2012, 07:47:54 AM »
kya baat hai, bohut khoob bohut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: December 05, 2012, 08:18:51 AM »
Waah bahot achha likha hai manzil-e-ishq ji.
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«Reply #8 on: December 05, 2012, 08:38:54 AM »


    bahut teergi thi ghar me na aahate aayi
    jab bhi aayi unhe nazar bas sarhadien aayi
 
    naye shehar me naye log, naya thikhan tha mera
    par wahi haal tha jab tanha si raate aayi
     
    har ek chehre pe hai chehra, kaise pehchane sahib,
    sada hi toot kar jab meri sab kurbate aayi
     
    kabhi kabhi mere lab pe chala aata hai tera naam
    magar na laut ke ek pal ko teri wafayein aayi
     

    unhi se hai khafa or un hi pe fida manzil
    kahe kya zindagi kis mod par le ke teri adayien aayi...



Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Dear Priya Ji..

Bahut Hi Gehre Aur Khoobsurat Ehsaas..Khaas Taur par yeh Ashaar Bahut gehrai liye Hue Tha..


"Naye Shehar mein Naye Log,Naya Thikana Tha Mera
  Par Wahi Haal Tha, Jab Tanha Si Raate Aayi"


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«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2012, 09:43:12 AM »
bahut  khoob  ,  manzil e ishq ji . achhi  ghazal  hai.....
guzarish  hai  ki   post  karne  se  pahle  ek  baar  parh
liya  karein  taaki  alfaaz aur space ki  ghaltiyan  na hon.
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«Reply #10 on: December 05, 2012, 10:31:57 AM »
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very very nice
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«Reply #11 on: December 05, 2012, 11:57:36 AM »
Bahut khoob Priya jee
Bahut hi shandaar Matla ..maqta bhi behad khoob
sabhi ashaar ..ek se badhkar ek..
aati raheN..likhti raheN

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«Reply #12 on: December 05, 2012, 01:08:03 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 05, 2012, 04:35:08 PM »
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    bahut teergi thi ghar me na aahate aayi
    jab bhi aayi unhe nazar bas sarhadien aayi
 
    naye shehar me naye log, naya thikhan tha mera
    par wahi haal tha jab tanha si raate aayi
     
    har ek chehre pe hai chehra, kaise pehchane sahib,
    sada hi toot kar jab meri sab kurbate aayi
     
    kabhi kabhi mere lab pe chala aata hai tera naam
    magar na laut ke ek pal ko teri wafayein aayi
     

    unhi se hai khafa or un hi pe fida manzil
    kahe kya zindagi kis mod par le ke teri adayien aayi...

bahut acha likhti hai aapp.. Aur b acha likh sakti hain aaap..
Mashq karti rahe?
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«Reply #14 on: December 06, 2012, 02:06:18 AM »
very nice
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