Tera Apna Bhi Har Mod Par Imtehaan Lega.......

by khwaish on April 01, 2008, 07:29:51 PM
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Main Iss Umeed Mein Doob Raha tha
Ke Koi To Hoga Jo Mujhe Bacha Lega...
Saahil Pe Mere Yaar Par Nazar Gayi Thi Ek Baar,
Par Mujhe Kya Pata tha??
Ke  Dekh Kar Woh Apni Nazare Fira lega....

Diya Bhujte-Bhujte Bhuj Hi Jaata Hai Ek Din,
Zaroori Nahi Ke Usse Phir Koi Jala Lega....

Jis Ki Zubaan Apni Majbooriyon Ke Daanto Tale Kat Gayi ho
Woh Bebas Insaan Kisi Se Kya Badla Lega....

Jo Baat Dil Naa Maane,Uss Baat Ko Inkaar Karna Seekhle "KHWAISH"
Zaroori Nahi Ke Har Baat Par Yuh Sar Jhuka Lega....

Har Mod Par Apne Kadam Phoonk Kar Rakhna "KHWAISH"
Zaroori Nahi Ke Sab Jaha Chal Pade,Tu Bhi Wohi Raahon Ki Disha Lega....

Yahan Par Khud Par Bhi Kabhi Aetbaar Nahi Hota "KHWAISH"
Vaada Kisi Aur Se Tu Kya Lega??

Gairo Aur Apno Mein Kyon Fark Karta Hai "KHWAISH"
Tera Apna Bhi Har Mod Par Tera Imtehaan Lega....

Apne Ashko Ko Sambhaalna Seekhle "KHWAISH"
Kahin Ro-Ro Kar Inn Ashko Ko Bhi Gawa Lega....

Girte Hue Shaks Ko Sambhaalna Asaan Nahi Hai "KHWAISH"
Par Umeed Naa Haar,Koi To Hoga Jo Tujhe Utha Lega....
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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2008, 07:32:59 PM »
wah kay abaat hai... bahoot hi emotional kavita ki rachna ki hai apne!!!! Good creation!!

ek ek line bahoot hi achi likhi hai apne khwaish ji!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 01, 2008, 08:13:05 PM »
Khwaish bro

Very nice and emotional, as Pooja also said ! Applause

Superb !

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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2008, 01:04:21 AM »
bohot khoob khwaish..
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2008, 05:06:47 AM »
bohut hi achha likha hai khwahish ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2008, 06:08:23 AM »
bahut accha likha hai aapne Khwaish bro.. Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2008, 06:20:03 AM »
Khwaish ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne..Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2008, 09:51:56 AM »
bohot khoob likha hai...dard ko khoob lafzon main piroya hai..keep writing..Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2008, 05:52:00 PM »
khwaish ji-behtareen likha he aapne
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«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2008, 10:04:24 AM »
wow..very nice and true khwaissh Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2008, 05:28:06 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 01, 2008, 07:32:59 PM
wah kay abaat hai... bahoot hi emotional kavita ki rachna ki hai apne!!!! Good creation!!

ek ek line bahoot hi achi likhi hai apne khwaish ji!!!


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Poojaji..Aapne Padha Aur phir saraha..iske liye teh dil se shukriya..par aapne kuch likha nahi?? icon_scratch
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2008, 05:29:36 PM »
Quote from: Rajbir on April 01, 2008, 08:13:05 PM
Khwaish bro

Very nice and emotional, as Pooja also said ! Applause

Superb !



thyankyou paaji for your appreciation..
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2008, 05:32:00 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya sayyidsaab & kaushikbhawnaji..
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2008, 05:33:23 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya rojaji..aap bhi kuch likhte to aur acha lagta!!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2008, 05:35:46 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on April 02, 2008, 06:20:03 AM
Khwaish ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne..Usual Smile

thanx a lot honey..

Quote from: aarzoomehek on April 02, 2008, 09:51:56 AM
bohot khoob likha hai...dard ko khoob lafzon main piroya hai..keep writing..Usual Smile

bahut bahut shukriya aarzooji..
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