Tera Apna Bhi Har Mod Par Imtehaan Lega.......

by khwaish on April 01, 2008, 07:29:51 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 07, 2008, 05:51:41 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on April 02, 2008, 05:52:00 PM
khwaish ji-behtareen likha he aapne

aapke hausle-afsai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya prateekji..

Quote from: dreamyangel on April 06, 2008, 10:04:24 AM
wow..very nice and true khwaissh Applause Applause

thanx a lot dreamyangel for appreciating bu it's "KHWAISH" not khwaissh..
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«Reply #16 on: April 07, 2008, 06:39:35 PM »
teri har baat ko woh shaks  dil se laga lega
ab chup hi reh "khwaish"
kahin aisa na ho ke teri baaton se
woh shaks khud ko rula lega...

koi usse yeh naa keh de ke main uske
haathon ki lakeeron mein nahi hoon shaamil,
aisa na ho ke woh haath hi apne jala lega....

kisi ko bhoolna asaan nahi hai "khwaish"
aisi zuurat bhi na kar
kahin usse bhoolne ki koshish mein
 tu khud ko mita lega....

waqt ke haat mein bebas sa hai "khwaish"
na dekh aaene mein yuh khud ko,
sharam se nazare apne tu jhuka lega....

bas chalte jaa,jahan tak yeh raahein tujhe le chale
har mod par tera apna bhi,tera imtehaan lega...
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«Reply #17 on: April 07, 2008, 08:04:21 PM »
bahoot khoob khwaish ji.. her ek line bahoor he gahri likhi hai apne!!!
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«Reply #18 on: April 20, 2008, 03:29:36 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya poojaji...
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«Reply #19 on: May 20, 2008, 04:15:27 AM »
Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein,Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti
Jo Insaan Unchi Udaan Ude,
Uske Pairon Ke Neeche Zameen Nahi Hoti...

Sirf Apna Keh Dene Se Koi Apna Nahi Ho Jaata,
Jahan Ashko Ka Sailaab Mile Aankhon Mein,
Waha Majbooriyon Ki Kami Nahi Hoti....

Do Kadam Saath Chal Kar Rukh Jaate To,
Kuch To Sukoon Milta Iss Dil Ko,
Jahan Nazdeekiyan Kabhi Thi Hi Nahi,
Waha Doori Bhi Nahi Hoti...

Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti....
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«Reply #20 on: May 20, 2008, 04:50:08 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on April 07, 2008, 06:39:35 PM
teri har baat ko woh shaks  dil se laga lega
ab chup hi reh "khwaish"

koi usse yeh naa keh de ke main uske
haathon ki lakeeron mein nahi hoon shaamil,
aisa na ho ke woh haath hi apne jala lega....

waqt ke haat mein bebas sa hai "khwaish"
na dekh aaene mein yuh khud ko,
sharam se nazare apne tu jhuka lega....




waah-waah--bemisaal-aap kavitaaye likhte he janaab-kamaal he,kaash kuch hunar aap baat sakte,to mein grehan karne to aatur tha!
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«Reply #21 on: May 20, 2008, 05:04:02 AM »


Jahan Nazdeekiyan Kabhi Thi Hi Nahi,
Waha Doori Bhi Nahi Hoti...

Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti....


kya pankti he-khwaish ji-aisa he kuch mehsoos kar raha thaa kuch samay se-aapne gunguna diya.saraahna sweekar kare.
Prateek

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«Reply #22 on: May 20, 2008, 02:46:13 PM »
wah kaya likhte hai app khwaish ji:

Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein,Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti
Jo Insaan Unchi Udaan Ude,
Uske Pairon Ke Neeche Zameen Nahi Hoti...

apki in lines ne rula diya:

Jahan Nazdeekiyan Kabhi Thi Hi Nahi,
Waha Doori Bhi Nahi Hoti...

bahoot khoob.. bahoot hi dil ki gahraio se likhi hai apne yah rachna...
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«Reply #23 on: May 20, 2008, 03:22:18 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on May 20, 2008, 04:15:27 AM
Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein,Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti
Jo Insaan Unchi Udaan Ude,
Uske Pairon Ke Neeche Zameen Nahi Hoti...

Sirf Apna Keh Dene Se Koi Apna Nahi Ho Jaata,
Jahan Ashko Ka Sailaab Mile Aankhon Mein,
Waha Majbooriyon Ki Kami Nahi Hoti....

Do Kadam Saath Chal Kar Rukh Jaate To,
Kuch To Sukoon Milta Iss Dil Ko,
Jahan Nazdeekiyan Kabhi Thi Hi Nahi,
Waha Doori Bhi Nahi Hoti...

Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti....



Beautiful Khwaish Applause
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«Reply #24 on: June 22, 2008, 07:54:27 AM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 20, 2008, 04:50:08 AM


waah-waah--bemisaal-aap kavitaaye likhte he janaab-kamaal he,kaash kuch hunar aap baat sakte,to mein grehan karne to aatur tha!

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 20, 2008, 05:04:02 AM

Jahan Nazdeekiyan Kabhi Thi Hi Nahi,
Waha Doori Bhi Nahi Hoti...

Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti....


kya pankti he-khwaish ji-aisa he kuch mehsoos kar raha thaa kuch samay se-aapne gunguna diya.saraahna sweekar kare.
Prateek

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aapke hausle-afsaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya prateekji..
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«Reply #25 on: June 22, 2008, 07:59:51 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 20, 2008, 02:46:13 PM
wah kaya likhte hai app khwaish ji:

Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein,Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti
Jo Insaan Unchi Udaan Ude,
Uske Pairon Ke Neeche Zameen Nahi Hoti...

apki in lines ne rula diya:

Jahan Nazdeekiyan Kabhi Thi Hi Nahi,
Waha Doori Bhi Nahi Hoti...

bahoot khoob.. bahoot hi dil ki gahraio se likhi hai apne yah rachna...

teh dil se aapka shukriya pooja..
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«Reply #26 on: June 22, 2008, 08:07:51 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on May 20, 2008, 04:15:27 AM
Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein,Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti
Jo Insaan Unchi Udaan Ude,
Uske Pairon Ke Neeche Zameen Nahi Hoti...

Sirf Apna Keh Dene Se Koi Apna Nahi Ho Jaata,
Jahan Ashko Ka Sailaab Mile Aankhon Mein,
Waha Majbooriyon Ki Kami Nahi Hoti....

Do Kadam Saath Chal Kar Rukh Jaate To,
Kuch To Sukoon Milta Iss Dil Ko,
Jahan Nazdeekiyan Kabhi Thi Hi Nahi,
Waha Doori Bhi Nahi Hoti...

Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti....



 Hats off to you!
wonderful cration khwaish ji....
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«Reply #27 on: June 22, 2008, 08:10:53 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on May 20, 2008, 04:15:27 AM
Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein,Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti
Jo Insaan Unchi Udaan Ude,
Uske Pairon Ke Neeche Zameen Nahi Hoti...

Sirf Apna Keh Dene Se Koi Apna Nahi Ho Jaata,
Jahan Ashko Ka Sailaab Mile Aankhon Mein,
Waha Majbooriyon Ki Kami Nahi Hoti....

Do Kadam Saath Chal Kar Rukh Jaate To,
Kuch To Sukoon Milta Iss Dil Ko,
Jahan Nazdeekiyan Kabhi Thi Hi Nahi,
Waha Doori Bhi Nahi Hoti...

Muskaan Ke Daayre Mein Hamesha Khushi Nahi Hoti....



Bohot achhi kawish pesh ki he aap ne khwaish ji, mene aaj hi dekha ise, bohot khoob.
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«Reply #28 on: June 22, 2008, 08:13:58 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on May 20, 2008, 03:22:18 PM
Beautiful Khwaish Applause

thankyou so much celmira..
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«Reply #29 on: June 22, 2008, 08:15:15 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on June 22, 2008, 08:07:51 AM
Hats off to you!
wonderful cration khwaish ji....

bahut bahut shukriya bekararji..
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